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1 Untitled
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2 by Shangri-la
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4 Heyyo people. This is a poem I wrote (as of yet untitled) I was hoping you could respond with who you think the cloud is, the emerald-eyed star is, whose point of view is, and anything or anyone else that may seem to appear. And if anything comes to you maybe even a title. Please reply at Shangri_La6@hotmail.com
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5 Ja ne!
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7 All I have is tears and loneliness
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8 Frommy spirit was taken away the things of happiness
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9 They say I have but days to live
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10 Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my precious star
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11 And so my reign of rain shall continue
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12 Until to me she is returned
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13 He took her from me and she to he
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14 O precious star glowing as strongly as the sun
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15 Now hidden always by some distant cloud
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16 I pushed in front of you
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17 But to me it is worse for I am no longer shined upon
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18 Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my presious star
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19 Hidden by a cold cruel cloud
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20 O kind Mistress of the Heavens bonds
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21 I beg smile upon me once again
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22 Can my heart take it any more?
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23 Can my heart take it anymore?
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24 O Heavenly Mistress with emerald green eyes
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25 I beseech, I implore, I who worship you
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26 Break free from behind the cold distant cloud
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27 Shine upon me once more
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28 I tire of this reighn of rain
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29 To hear but a whisper of your words
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30 Would send away this madness
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31 Can my heart truly take it any more?
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32 Can my heart break but once more?
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33 Come to me from your cruel master
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34 Come from behind that cloud
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35 Back to my arms
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36 I am unworthy of such and angel
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37 But he is even more
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38 He who hides you away fromme
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39 Your, friend, Your confidant, Yourlover
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40 But the last you do not know yet
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41 O beloved of the Great Mothers wombs
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42 Come to me from your cruel cloud
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43 I will wait for you on the morrow
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44 If you do not come then
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45 I shall wait each morrow after the next morrow
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46 And so when you come to me
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47 The sorrow will be gone from my heart
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48 And so goes the reign of my rain
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49 Can my heart take that much more?
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50 Can it truly break any more?
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51 ...Yes it can take it much much longer
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52 Yes it can break so many times over
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53 Butonly for you my precious star
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54 My darling precious emerald-eyed star. |
