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1 Untitled
2 by Shangri-la
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4 Heyyo people. This is a poem I wrote (as of yet untitled) I was hoping you could respond with who you think the cloud is, the emerald-eyed star is, whose point of view is, and anything or anyone else that may seem to appear. And if anything comes to you maybe even a title. Please reply at Shangri_La6@hotmail.com
5 Ja ne!
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7 All I have is tears and loneliness
8 Frommy spirit was taken away the things of happiness
9 They say I have but days to live
10 Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my precious star
11 And so my reign of rain shall continue
12 Until to me she is returned
13 He took her from me and she to he
14 O precious star glowing as strongly as the sun
15 Now hidden always by some distant cloud
16 I pushed in front of you
17 But to me it is worse for I am no longer shined upon
18 Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my presious star
19 Hidden by a cold cruel cloud
20 O kind Mistress of the Heavens bonds
21 I beg smile upon me once again
22 Can my heart take it any more?
23 Can my heart take it anymore?
24 O Heavenly Mistress with emerald green eyes
25 I beseech, I implore, I who worship you
26 Break free from behind the cold distant cloud
27 Shine upon me once more
28 I tire of this reighn of rain
29 To hear but a whisper of your words
30 Would send away this madness
31 Can my heart truly take it any more?
32 Can my heart break but once more?
33 Come to me from your cruel master
34 Come from behind that cloud
35 Back to my arms
36 I am unworthy of such and angel
37 But he is even more
38 He who hides you away fromme
39 Your, friend, Your confidant, Yourlover
40 But the last you do not know yet
41 O beloved of the Great Mothers wombs
42 Come to me from your cruel cloud
43 I will wait for you on the morrow
44 If you do not come then
45 I shall wait each morrow after the next morrow
46 And so when you come to me
47 The sorrow will be gone from my heart
48 And so goes the reign of my rain
49 Can my heart take that much more?
50 Can it truly break any more?
51 ...Yes it can take it much much longer
52 Yes it can break so many times over
53 Butonly for you my precious star
54 My darling precious emerald-eyed star.