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author | Robert McIntyre <rlm@mit.edu> |
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date | Tue, 22 Jun 2010 13:42:35 -0400 |
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1 Hello everyone! ^-^ This story is something I'm very glad to have finished.2 It took me nearly two years from start to finish. Sometimes it would move3 to the back of my mind for a while when I was working on other stories or4 projects, but it would always lurk there until I would give it my full5 attention again. This is my written version of Bishoujo Senshi Sailormoon6 S based off of Naoko Takeuchi's manga rather than the anime. It started7 as a simple enough idea. I wanted to expand upon some of the points in8 the manga. That's where ChibiUsa & Hotaru's most romantic scenes were9 to begin with, anyway. ^-^ But it grew after that. Slowly but surely. And10 this is the end result. I can't say it's one of my best works, but I11 certainly enjoyed writing a good deal of it. ^-^ It took me two years to12 finish, so a lot of my writing isn't really as good as it could be as my13 editor reminded me, so I take all of the blame for tarnishing Naoko14 Takeuchi's manga. ^-^;; I really do hope you all enjoy this. ^-^ Now I15 just need to start up SuperS and go through Sailorstars and this little16 project should be done in another two years or more. ^^;; I'd like to thank17 Boco the Chokobo for all of the contributions to this story and for being18 so kind as to edit it for me when I don't have the patience to do it myself.19 I tried to follow the manga very closely, but there are some times when the20 story veers, so please bear with me. ^-^;; I borrowed heavily from manga21 translations to keep myself on track for the most part, but it was a lot of22 fun to see how things turned out anyway. ^=^ Thank you very much for reading23 this and if you have any comments or suggestions, please e-mail me. ^-^25 Bishoujo Senshi Sailormoon - Infinity I Alternate26 'Eye of the Beholder' - Prologue27 by Amazoness Duo28 amazonessduo@hotmail.com30 "I thought it was around here.." ChibiUsa let out a sigh as she walked31 along. She had come to the Mugen Gakuen amusement park with Mamoru, Momoko,32 Diana, and some classmates, but she had lost her hat riding the roller coaster,33 and had seperated to look for it. She was having a great time overall, but34 something felt wrong. A strange feeling in the pit of her stomach just wouldn't35 leave her. She felt an urgent need to hurry. "It must be the other side of36 that building.."37 Looking around her, as she entered the secluded area in the shadow of the38 skyscraper, the pink-haired girl found herself near the Infinity Academy, Mugen39 Gakuen. The feeling of dread wouldn't go away. It worsened as she came near a40 red and white warning sign. "I can read that," she said to herself, barely able41 to make out the complicated kanji. "..research labs? Oh, here it is." The hat42 had been blown by the wind into a corner of this section of the building. The43 princess picked it up and dusted it off. "I bought it for Ikuko-mama, so I'm44 glad I found it again." Taking a better look at her surroundings, hat in hand,45 she gasped at the sight unfolding in front of her. A raven haired girl wearing46 the Mugen Gakuen school uniform was having a coughing fit. It sounded pretty47 bad. "Hey, are you okay?"48 ChibiUsa went over to the other girl, a hand going to the pale child's49 shoulder. The girl's arm came up, forcing her own away from her, the other50 clutching her chest as coughs wracked her weak body. "It's okay.. this happens51 all the time... but you should go away. The area is.. off limits..."52 Before the pink-haired girl could respond, her blonde mother had rounded53 the corner at a dead run. Strangely enough, she was also in a Mugen Gakuen54 uniform, but she had no time to ask why before the older girl began: "What are55 you doing here by yourself, ChibiUsa-chan!! You should know better, it's56 dangerous here!"57 ChibiUsa responded defensively. "I lost the hat I bought for Ikuko-mama,58 and then this girl.. I guess she's okay, but she looked hurt." Just as quickly59 as the words left her mouth, the princess felt her broach reacting. "The60 Crystal..?"61 "ChibiUsa-chan! Abunai!!" A large black monster had grown out of the62 darkness was hovering over the three girls. Acting as quickly as she could,63 ChibiUsa changed into Sailorchibimoon. Not having time for a fancy speech, she64 threw herself between the Daimon and the beautiful raven haired girl.65 The Daimon lunged forward towards the two girls. Chibimoon brought her arm66 up in front of her as the beast came crashing into her. The dark haired girl67 screamed as Chibimoon fell backwards.68 "Moon Spiral Heart Attack!" Sailormoon's voice rang through the haze of69 pain seeping into Chibimoon's mind. Before the Daimon could do anything, it was70 hit by Sailormoon's attack. A cat lay on the floor where moments before a71 Daimon had been.72 Breathing a sigh of relief, Chibimoon shakily got to her feet. She quickly73 turned around to check on the dark haired schoolgirl. The girl was on her74 knees, her hands clenched against her chest. She looked up, her silver grey75 eyes still frightened. Their mysterious depths left the pink haired girl76 speechless as she tried to think.77 "Who.. are you..? Why did you save me?" the raven haired girl asked, short78 of breath.79 Chibimoon smiled broadly and held out a hand to the other girl. Her knees80 felt weak and a newer feeling in her stomach replaced the feelings of dread81 she'd had. Her crimson eyes looked deeply into the silver eyes pointed up at82 her. "We are the Soldiers of Justice! Sailormoon and Sailorchibimoon." She83 really wanted to see this girl again for some odd reason. She hoped this84 wouldn't be the last she would see of her. "Are you okay? Were you hurt?" she85 asked, concerned.86 The raven haired girl took Chibimoon by the wrist, pulling her forward.87 "You are the one who's hurt," she said softly, eyes seeming to shine in the88 darkness. "You got hurt for me."89 "What?" Chibimoon gasped as she felt the bloody gash on her arm where the90 Daimon had hit her. She hadn't noticed before, but now that she did, pain shot91 through her arm. She felt a bit sick at the sight of her own blood.92 The schoolgirl held Chibimoon's arm, gently placing her hand over the93 wound. Chibimoon looked down at the other girl, confused about what she was94 doing. The raven haired girl looked back up at her, dispelling her concerns for95 the moment.96 Mamoru showed up just as two figures leaped off, from the shadows: a green-97 haired woman in a sailor fuku, and a platinum blond man in cape and mask.98 Apparently they had watched the whole thing from the sidelines. "Wait!"99 Sailormoon yelled after them, to no avail.100 Chibimoon watched as the girl's eyes fell closed. She seemed to be101 concentrating intently. Chibimoon gasped as a glow began to surround her arm102 and the other girl's hands. A warm feeling flooded through her, eminating from103 the girl's hands, but passing over Chibimoon's whole body. Finally, the glow104 began to dissipate. Pulling her arm up after the dark haired girl had let go of105 it, she could see that the wound was now not much more than a bad scratch.106 "Usagi! Look, my wound.."107 Taking Chibimoon's arm again, the raven haired girl began to bandage it108 with her hankerchief. Not looking at the pink haired senshi, she began109 explaining as if she'd read Chibimoon's mind. "I've been able to do that since110 I was very young. I can heal injuries, but it takes a lot out of me." The pale111 girl looked down sadly. "But it frightens everyone around me when I do that."112 She sighed, running her fingers through her dark hair.113 Chibimoon looked down at the dark haired girl in amazement. "I think it's114 wonderful..." she said softly.115 The raven haired girl looked up at the future princess oddly, finished116 bandaging her arm. She blinked in confusion, looking up into those crimson gems117 that stared down at her. The other sailor senshi were talking behind them, but118 she didn't seem to notice. "You... You do?" The question came out softly. How119 could anyone think its wonderful? It seemed impossible to the girl.120 Chibimoon nodded emphatically. "Un, it's amazing! My arm feels so much121 better now. Thank you." Looking down into two silvery pools, Chibimoon felt122 herself being drawn in by this mysterious girl. She longed for that gentle123 touch, that warm feeling again.124 "And thank you for saving me." The raven haired girl let a small smile125 play across her lips. It was the first time Chibimoon had seen her smile. It126 was beautiful. This girl didn't seem to smile much, but it sent a thrill127 through the pink haired girl just to see it. Right there, Chibimoon vowed that128 she'd get her to smile more. "You should disinfect that when you get home," the129 raven haired girl said, motioning to Chibimoon's arm. "But right now, you130 should go. If the guards find you, you'll be in a lot of trouble."131 "Thanks." Chibimoon smiles gratefully. The pink haired senshi paused132 before leaving. It didn't feel right to leave yet. More importantly, she133 didn't want to leave yet. She wanted to see the dark haired girl again.134 "Umm... If you don't mind, could you tell me something? What's your name?"135 "Tomoe Hotaru," Hotaru said softly, finally getting to her feet. The two136 girls looked at each other for a long silent moment. Turning to leave, she137 whispered back over her shoulder, "Be careful."138 Chibimoon watched after Hotaru as she entered the building through large139 double doors. The girl's name ran through her mind over and over again as she140 watched the girl's retreating form. "Firefly," she said quietly.142 Hotaru collapsed near the doorway shortly after she got home. Pain shot143 through her veins as an icy hand seemed to clamp down on her whole body. She144 felt as if she were being torn apart from the inside out. Her breathing grew145 heavy and ragged as she gasped for air, her hand clutching her chest. Hot tears146 rolled down her pale cheeks as the pain became unbearable. Everything grew hazy147 around her. For a moment, the dark haired girl wished the escaped Daimon had148 killed her. Then this pain would finally be at an end. Through the cloud of149 pain, she decided that it was good that she hadn't, if only that she had been150 able to meet the pink haired girl right afterward.151 "Hotaru?" Her father's assistant, Kaolinite, ran up to her. "Another152 seizure? It's alright. It will pass."153 The older woman placed a hand on Hotaru's shoulder. Hotaru shrugged it off154 and pulled away, her breathing returning to normal as the pain began to dull.155 "Let go of me! I can handle it myself," she said angrily.156 "Hotaru, you know that's no way to talk to Kaori-kun. She's helped us very157 much since your mother's death. As my assistant, you should treat her with158 respect," Professor Tomoe said as he entered the room.159 "Professor!" Kaolinite turned at his approach. "Hotaru and I were just160 having a discussion."161 Professor Tomoe nodded before looking sternly at Hotaru. "Hotaru, you need162 help with how poor your health is. You have to let us help you. And Kaori-kun163 is practically part of the family. You should listen to her."164 "She's your private secretary, your assistant. She should know her place165 and not invade our home!" Hotaru stood up on shaky legs and ran off to her166 room.168 Slamming the door to her room, Hotaru fell forward onto her bed. She169 wasn't feeling very well. She breathed deeply, trying to relax. An image of a170 pink haired girl came unbidden to her mind. The other girl had been so nice to171 her. She had even saved her life. What shocked Hotaru the most was that she172 hadn't been afraid of her healing abilities. Hotaru hugged her knees to her173 chest and sighed. Would she ever see the pink haired girl again? Probably not.174 She didn't even know her name. Her life was too lonely for her to have found a175 friend that easily. That glimmer of hope, that warm feeling she had felt,176 disappeared as the reality of the situation set in.177 As she changed from her school clothes into a night gown, she felt a sharp178 pain in her heart. She didn't know if it was another seizure or if it was the179 fact that she would never see the pink haired girl again. She took a shaky180 breath before pulling her nightgown the rest of the way on. The thought of a181 beautiful dreamless sleep beckoned to her as an escape from the sorrow she felt.182 Closing her eyes tightly, she crawled under the soft sheets of her bed. Still183 wracked by a pain in her heart, she fell into a fitful slumber.185 "It hurts..."186 Hotaru moaned in pain, rolling over in bed. The vice-like grip over her187 body increased. She writhed in pain on the bed.188 The door to her room slowly opened. "Hotaru?" her father asked. "Hasn't189 it stopped?"190 "Dad..." Hotaru managed quietly.191 "Did you take your medicine?" Professor Tomoe asked worriedly.192 "I took it, but... it didn't work."193 "When the time comes, it will. You'll be alright." The professor reached194 into a large pocket on the side of his lab coat and withdraw an angular crystal.195 "This is an amulet, passed down through the family. Your mother used to carry196 it." He placed the amulet gently in Hotaru's hands. "Now that you have it, you197 can sleep soundly. I'll come check on you in a bit. Good night." He turned to198 leave, quietly closing the door behind him.199 "Dad, why are you acting so strangely? What's been going on lately?"200 Hotaru sighed and held the crystal. It felt cold against her palm. Her pain201 slowly started to recede as she stared down at the amulet. "Maybe dad was202 right. It does seem to be working. The seizure stopped. But... I'm scared. I203 can't trust my own body. It feels so strange. The seizures... they've only204 been getting worse lately." She took a shaky breath, willing herself not to205 think about such things. Finally, she drifted back to sleep.207 Back at the underground base beneath Crown Game Center, Luna and Artemis208 were talking to the Sailor Team about the two mysterious Senshi they had209 encountered and the mysterious happenings at the Mugen Gakuen school. ChibiUsa210 wasn't really paying attention, her mind preoccupied. She kept playing the211 events of the day before over and over in her mind. She couldn't stop thinking212 about that strange girl. "Hotaru," she whispered. The dark haired girl's image213 appeared with crystal clarity in ChibiUsa's mind's eye. Her beautiful pale214 skin, offset by dark raven hair. Deep pools of silver that seemed to go on215 forever. She was pretty. Very pretty.216 "ChibiUsa-chan?" Usagi asked for the third time, wondering what the Senshi217 in training could be daydreaming about. "Are you coming with me and Mamo-chan218 or not?"219 "Huh?" Looking over, ChibiUsa blinked a few times. "Oh, right. Yeah."220 Usagi smiled to herself as she started to drag Mamoru off, her future221 daughter in tow. "Anyway, ChibiUsa-chan. You shouldn't give our real222 identities out so easily. What if those two were enemies?"223 "Sorry," ChibiUsa apologized half-heartedly. "I thought I could be friends224 with the girl. I like Hotaru-chan, with her pure-white skin.. she was very225 pretty."226 "Like plaster of Paris," Mamoru agreed. At the questioning look from his227 future daughter, he explained. "A beautiful stone, like new-fallen snow."229 A few days later, the group had again gathered at Crown Fruit Parlor. "So230 you're the president of the 5th year class, ChibiUsa-chan?" Ami asked.231 "Yep," ChibiUsa responded between bites of a sundae. "I represented all of232 us at the entrance ceremony! It was great. The new class was cute."233 "ChibiUsa is the class rep.. the world's coming to an end."234 "Oh, it's not that bad, Usagi," Minako interjected. "Besides, we finally235 made it into 3rd year junior high. All we have to worry about is entrance236 exams.. then again, if an enemy attacks now, I'll be held back for sure."237 "Don't be so gloomy. It's April 17th, after all, Rei-chan's birthday! We238 should throw her a party," Makoto said as she played with the remains of her own239 frozen treat. "Where's she been, anyway?"240 "Out training on Mt. M, since yesterday," the blonde original-Senshi241 responds. "She wanted to cleanse herself for her 15th birthday."242 "Perfect! We can surprise her!! Everyone's going, right?"243 "A mountain?" ChibiUsa makes a face at the 'older' girls. "I have things244 to do, being class representative and all. Tell Rei-chan happy birthday for me,245 though." And with that, the pink-haired girl finished her icecream and slipped246 out of her seat. She had more important things to do.248 ChibiUsa frantically searched through the laundry. Ikuko-mama had said249 that she would wash it for her. If she could only find it... ChibiUsa smiled250 to herself. Any reason to see the raven haired girl again would be worth it.251 Her smile slowly vanished when she found the hankerchief. The blood stain was252 still there on the white cloth.253 A small sigh escaped her lips as she looked at the cloth. All she really254 wanted was to see Hotaru again. She hadn't been able to get the dark haired255 girl out of her mind. She had wanted to give the hankerchief back to the dark256 haired girl, but now it looked like stain of her blood was stuck in the cloth.257 She would settle for any reason to see the other girl again. She wasn't sure258 why, but she just had to see Hotaru again. She had to. She took a deep breath259 as she thought up an image of the other girl in her mind's eye. That pale,260 alabaster complexion that made the girl seem to be a beautiful statue brought to261 life. Those soft, thin lips that looked so pretty when they would smile. Her262 short raven hair, a dark contrast to her pale skin, making her look even more263 striking. And those sad silvery grey eyes.. just looking into them showed a264 glimpse of the shadows this girl had around herself, the loneliness she clung to265 as if it was the only thing she had. She was so beautiful. And so very alone.266 The pink haired girl shook her head. It wasn't fair. This girl shouldn't have267 to feel that way. She would be her friend. She smiled to herself. Yes, she268 would be Hotaru's friend. She only hoped the other girl would let her.