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date Tue, 22 Jun 2010 13:42:35 -0400
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1 Hey there! This was originally an entry into a one-hour challenge
2 that I just decided to add here too. This is a one shot, but if
3 enough people like it, I might continue with it. Now, if you're
4 looking for a story with great sex in it, look somewhere else, 'cause
5 you won't find it here. Enjoy!
6 Disclaimer: I don't own Cardcaptor Sakura. My personal deities,
7 Clamp, do.
9 _____________________________________________________________________
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12 Revelations
13 by The Snow Queen
14 scplatter@msn.com
17 "Is that all?" The young hostess asked as the young man finished
18 paying the check. Nodding in reply, Li Syaoran let his gaze fall on
19 his date, Kinomoto Sakura. She had finally found the time between
20 high school, cheerleading, studying, her friends, and her cardcaptor
21 duties to go out with him again. It had been so long since he had
22 last taken the young sorceress out that he was starting to believe
23 that she was not interested. But that could not be the case. They
24 loved each other deeply, and she was with him now, was she not?
26 Having finished the transaction with the restaurant, Syaoran took
27 Sakura's hand and led her out of the eatery. Still having some time
28 until the young woman was required to return home, the far-to-early
29 hour of 10:00 being set by the nuisance of her older brother, Syaoran
30 decided a walk would be rather nice. And it was seeing that it was a
31 balmy summer night, and with just a few trees still abloom, a walk
32 through the falling petals was divine.
34 The young maiden's eyes seemed to glow as she gazed at the delicate
35 petals, wondering what it was they reminded her of. She could not
36 place it, but she had seen that same soft shade of pink before, and
37 not on a flower petal.
39 'Well, whatever it is, it's lovely...... 'The Mistress of the Cards
40 thought dazedly. She continued to stare about her, occasionally drawn
41 into a conversation by her long-term boyfriend. Kinomoto Sakura had
42 changed ....and yet not changed in the years following her discovery
43 of the Clow Cards. She had matured much, learning a few life lessons,
44 and losing a bit of her naivete. But, still she had a certain
45 innocence and purity to her that time just simply could not steal.
46 She had gained the lithe body of a dancer, rather than the slightly
47 bulkier form of the athlete that she was. The nimble maiden's hair
48 was still short, as she just could not give up her favorite hair
49 styles, but slightly longer.
51 'Which is just as well,' She thought lazily. 'because now Tomoyo has
52 more hair to play around with when she's doing my hair up for one of
53 my costumes.'
55 "Oh!" Sakura exclaimed in sudden understanding, much to Syaoran's
56 surprise.
58 "What?!?" He asked, a noticable tone of worry lacing his voice.
60 "Ummmm.... nothing." She replied, far to embarrassed to reveal that
61 she had not been listening to his banter.
63 'It's Tomoyo..... I've seen that color on her. Their just like her
64 lips. That's where I've seen it before.....' She thought, an abashed
65 blush forming on her cheeks. Sakura vaguely wondered if her best
66 friend was enjoying her trip to Paris. She had begged Sakura to join
67 her, and oh how Sakura had wanted to go. But with her father working
68 so hard on his current archeological dig and Touya rarely at home
69 these days, she was needed far too much. It was a shame, Sakura had
70 longed to go.
72 "Well, anyway.... that's what happened. Weird, isn't it?" Syaoran
73 asked, pulling Sakura from her thoughts. Quickly recovering, the
74 lithe brunette agreed with her boyfriend's question. Once again a
75 blush formed on her cheeks, embarrassed at her lack of attention.
77 But she really could not help it. Lately, she had stopped paying
78 that much attention to Syaoran. She had not stopped loving him, she
79 never could, but she suddenly did not find him that fascinating
80 anymore. The cheerful freshman had even, though she would never admit
81 it, lied about why she could not make some of their planned dates,
82 unwilling to spend an entire evening with just him.
84 'I'd rather spend time with Tomoyo. She always has such interesting
85 things to talk about. I can't wait until I get home so I can call her
86 and ask what she's been up to in France. She promised to take loads
87 of pictures for me!' Sakura thought excitedly. But she quickly chided
88 herself on once again not paying attention to her boyfriend. She then
89 began a battle with herself, trying to pay as much attention as
90 possible to his conversation, missing the subtle clues he was sending
91 to her with his body. It seemed ....accidently, that they had ended
92 up walking to Syaoran's home.
94 "Sakura ....ummmmm.... why don't we go inside." Syaoran stated,
95 guiding the suddenly naive girl into his home. The warrior's home
96 was, as always, spotless. Sitting down in the living room, Sakura
97 waited alone as her boyfriend made some tea. Upon arriving, the
98 unaware young man continued to talk about this and that while his
99 girlfriend's thoughts wondered to the other side of the planet.
101 It was when the clock stroke nine that Syaoran asked if Sakura
102 wanted to continue the conversation in his room. Having missed many
103 of the signals that the boy had been sending Sakura, she eagerly
104 agreed, not realizing what he had actually meant. Even when Syaoran's
105 hip brushed her own more often than it should have, or when his hand
106 found itself on her knee, she did not perceive the true meaning of
107 his actions.
109 'Syaoran's always touching me.....' Sakura thought, bored once again
110 by Syaoran's suddenly poor conversational skills. 'He's even more
111 boring than usual.....' But when his hand moved a little farther up,
112 the young brunette finally started to realize what her sudden future
113 held.
115 'Hoeee!' She thought, using one of her well known exclamations.
116 'Well, it's not like this is totally new. We've talked about this
117 before. I mean, I always knew that Syaoran would be my first.' And
118 with that thought in mind, Sakura gave into the young warriors
119 advances.
121 He moved his hand from her leg to her hip, and its counterpart to
122 the back of her neck as he moved closer. Slowly bringing his face to
123 hers, Syaoran kissed her, massaging his lips across her own. Syaoran
124 soon ran his tongue across her bottom lip, asking for permission to
125 enter. She granted him such, opening her mouth so she could fully
126 engage with him.
128 Sakura told anyone willing to listen that her favorite thing about
129 Syaoran was the way he kissed. She had never been kissed by anyone
130 but Syaoran, so she didn't know truthfully if he was any better at it
131 than anyone else, but Sakura seemed, as of late, to find her
132 boyfriend most interesting when their lips were locked.
134 ****** END OF ORIGINAL HOUR********
136 'Well, he certainly is good that.....' Sakura thought dreamily as
137 her soon to be lover started sucking on her lower lip. She barely
138 noticed that his hands had started moving, and that they were soon in
139 places that only she had touched before. Soon her boyfriend decided
140 to divest her of her clothing, removing the lovely blue dress that
141 Tomoyo had made for her.
143 'Tomoyo.....'
145 Suddenly the image of the dark-haired angel that was Sakura's
146 dearest friend came to her mind and did not leave. Visions of her
147 pale skin and full pink lips danced across her mind as Sakura started
148 returning Syaoran's attention with a fervor.
150 'Tomoyo.....'
152 Sakura's body started heating up as she closed her eyes, imagining
153 Tomoyo was in the room with her. All of a sudden, it was her closest
154 friend who was running her hands over her inner thighs. It was
155 Tomoyo's sharp breaths on Sakura's petals that made her moan with
156 desire.
158 Long withheld fantasies of the delicate young woman with the raven
159 hair consumed Sakura's mind. Inescapable dark eyes captured the
160 sorceress as the angel's hair fluttered over her body. Oh so soft
161 hands placed feather-light touches all across Sakura's body, bringing
162 her to a fevered pitch. The soft voice of her goddess, her Tomoyo,
163 whispered sweet nothings in her ear.
165 But suddenly, her lilting voice changed, became deeper and far more
166 masculine, stating that everything would be alright. It would only
167 hurt for a little bit.
169 '....Syoaran?' She thought, suddenly recognizing the strange voice.
170 That was when she felt it. Something entering her body, stretching
171 her walls painfully. The image of Tomoyo vanished as reality sunk
172 back into her. She was not with Tomoyo. She was with Syaoran, losing
173 her virginity.
175 'No..... this isn't right. Tomoyo should be here......' Sakura
176 thought, but then all thought left her head as pain consumed her. She
177 stiffened, holding onto the bed as her maidenhead was taken. Tears
178 formed and fell from her eyes, but not because of the pain. Her lover
179 then wiped them away, stating she would only hurt for a little while.
181 'What does he know?' Sakura thought derisively, suddenly aware of
182 why she was no longer interested in her boyfriend. Syaoran then
183 started moving, pushing his engorged member in and out of her core.
184 But Sakura was no longer willing to participate. She wanted to leave.
185 She wanted him to stop.
187 'I want Tomoyo. I love Tomoyo!' Sakura screamed over and over in her
188 head, wishing she could be anywhere but there. But the young
189 sorceress could not just leave. Nothing could help her. Her fantasies
190 were gone as she tried to move with Syaoran, to enjoy herself.
191 But.... she could not.
193 'Tomoyo!' Sakura screamed as her lover shouted her name. Syaoran
194 then fell on top of her, exhausted. He placed light kisses upon her
195 shoulders as he came down from his high.
197 '....Tomoyo.....'
199 After that, Syaoran helped her dress and walked her home. He tried
200 to keep up the conversation, so utterly cheerful that Sakura could
201 have killed him. She managed to make it home right on time, much to
202 Touya's displeasure as he had been longing to pound the brat into a
203 pulp. Sakura was quite willing to let him.
205 She then ran to her room and flung herself on her bed, demanding
206 that Kero leave. As soon as she knew she was alone, that there were
207 no guardians eavesdropping outside her room, she cried. She cried all
208 night, unable to stop.
210 'Tomoyo...... TOMOYO!' She screamed mentally, trying to apologize.
211 How could she have been so blind, so stupid, to just ignore
212 everything she had felt since she was a little girl? And then to just
213 give the most precious thing she owned to someone else.....
215 'Oh Tomoyo, I'm so sorry! Is this how life is?' She thought. 'Is
216 this what life is really like? To realize what we truly want, only to
217 have it ripped from us? Is that what life is like? Is that all?"
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223 Kind of depressing, isn't it? I hope it was good, though, in all
224 it's angsty glory. I'm such a huge fan of Sakura/Tomoyo pairings, but
225 everyone seems to be really into Sakura and Syaoran being together. I
226 guess I wanted Sakura to realize why she might not want to be with
227 him. Anyway, tell me what you think.