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     1 Untitled



     2 by Shangri-la



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     4 Heyyo people. This is a poem I wrote (as of yet untitled) I was hoping you could respond with who you think the cloud is, the emerald-eyed star is, whose point of view is, and anything or anyone else that may seem to appear. And if anything comes to you maybe even a title. Please reply at Shangri_La6@hotmail.com 



     5 Ja ne!



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     7 All I have is tears and loneliness



     8 Frommy spirit was taken away the things of happiness



     9 They say I have but days to live



    10 Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my precious star



    11 And so my reign of rain shall continue



    12 Until to me she is returned



    13 He took her from me and she to he



    14 O precious star glowing as strongly as the sun



    15 Now hidden always by some distant cloud



    16 I pushed in front of you



    17 But to me it is worse for I am no longer shined upon



    18 Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my presious star



    19 Hidden by a cold cruel cloud



    20 O kind Mistress of the Heavens bonds



    21 I beg smile upon me once again



    22 Can my heart take it any more?



    23 Can my heart take it anymore?



    24 O Heavenly Mistress with emerald green eyes



    25 I beseech, I implore, I who worship you



    26 Break free from behind the cold distant cloud



    27 Shine upon me once more



    28 I tire of this reighn of rain



    29 To hear but a whisper of your words



    30 Would send away this madness



    31 Can my heart truly take it any more?



    32 Can my heart break but once more?



    33 Come to me from your cruel master



    34 Come from behind that cloud



    35 Back to my arms



    36 I am unworthy of such and angel



    37 But he is even more



    38 He who hides you away fromme



    39 Your, friend, Your confidant, Yourlover



    40 But the last you do not know yet



    41 O beloved of the Great Mothers wombs



    42 Come to me from your cruel cloud



    43 I will wait for you on the morrow



    44 If you do not come then



    45 I shall wait each morrow after the next morrow



    46 And so when you come to me



    47 The sorrow will be gone from my heart



    48 And so goes the reign of my rain



    49 Can my heart take that much more?



    50 Can it truly break any more?



    51 ...Yes it can take it much much longer



    52 Yes it can break so many times over



    53 Butonly for you my precious star



    54 My darling precious emerald-eyed star.