annotate old/stories/emeraldeyes.txt @ 2:fc00894c1d4a moonlitnights

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author rlm
date Fri, 19 Feb 2010 20:53:12 -0500
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rlm@2 1 Untitled
rlm@2 2 by Shangri-la
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rlm@2 4 Heyyo people. This is a poem I wrote (as of yet untitled) I was hoping you could respond with who you think the cloud is, the emerald-eyed star is, whose point of view is, and anything or anyone else that may seem to appear. And if anything comes to you maybe even a title. Please reply at Shangri_La6@hotmail.com
rlm@2 5 Ja ne!
rlm@2 6
rlm@2 7 All I have is tears and loneliness
rlm@2 8 Frommy spirit was taken away the things of happiness
rlm@2 9 They say I have but days to live
rlm@2 10 Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my precious star
rlm@2 11 And so my reign of rain shall continue
rlm@2 12 Until to me she is returned
rlm@2 13 He took her from me and she to he
rlm@2 14 O precious star glowing as strongly as the sun
rlm@2 15 Now hidden always by some distant cloud
rlm@2 16 I pushed in front of you
rlm@2 17 But to me it is worse for I am no longer shined upon
rlm@2 18 Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my presious star
rlm@2 19 Hidden by a cold cruel cloud
rlm@2 20 O kind Mistress of the Heavens bonds
rlm@2 21 I beg smile upon me once again
rlm@2 22 Can my heart take it any more?
rlm@2 23 Can my heart take it anymore?
rlm@2 24 O Heavenly Mistress with emerald green eyes
rlm@2 25 I beseech, I implore, I who worship you
rlm@2 26 Break free from behind the cold distant cloud
rlm@2 27 Shine upon me once more
rlm@2 28 I tire of this reighn of rain
rlm@2 29 To hear but a whisper of your words
rlm@2 30 Would send away this madness
rlm@2 31 Can my heart truly take it any more?
rlm@2 32 Can my heart break but once more?
rlm@2 33 Come to me from your cruel master
rlm@2 34 Come from behind that cloud
rlm@2 35 Back to my arms
rlm@2 36 I am unworthy of such and angel
rlm@2 37 But he is even more
rlm@2 38 He who hides you away fromme
rlm@2 39 Your, friend, Your confidant, Yourlover
rlm@2 40 But the last you do not know yet
rlm@2 41 O beloved of the Great Mothers wombs
rlm@2 42 Come to me from your cruel cloud
rlm@2 43 I will wait for you on the morrow
rlm@2 44 If you do not come then
rlm@2 45 I shall wait each morrow after the next morrow
rlm@2 46 And so when you come to me
rlm@2 47 The sorrow will be gone from my heart
rlm@2 48 And so goes the reign of my rain
rlm@2 49 Can my heart take that much more?
rlm@2 50 Can it truly break any more?
rlm@2 51 ...Yes it can take it much much longer
rlm@2 52 Yes it can break so many times over
rlm@2 53 Butonly for you my precious star
rlm@2 54 My darling precious emerald-eyed star.