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     1.4 +Untitled
     1.5 +by Shangri-la
     1.6 +
     1.7 +Heyyo people. This is a poem I wrote (as of yet untitled) I was hoping you could respond with who you think the cloud is, the emerald-eyed star is, whose point of view is, and anything or anyone else that may seem to appear. And if anything comes to you maybe even a title. Please reply at Shangri_La6@hotmail.com 
     1.8 +Ja ne!
     1.9 +
    1.10 +All I have is tears and loneliness
    1.11 +Frommy spirit was taken away the things of happiness
    1.12 +They say I have but days to live
    1.13 +Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my precious star
    1.14 +And so my reign of rain shall continue
    1.15 +Until to me she is returned
    1.16 +He took her from me and she to he
    1.17 +O precious star glowing as strongly as the sun
    1.18 +Now hidden always by some distant cloud
    1.19 +I pushed in front of you
    1.20 +But to me it is worse for I am no longer shined upon
    1.21 +Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my presious star
    1.22 +Hidden by a cold cruel cloud
    1.23 +O kind Mistress of the Heavens bonds
    1.24 +I beg smile upon me once again
    1.25 +Can my heart take it any more?
    1.26 +Can my heart take it anymore?
    1.27 +O Heavenly Mistress with emerald green eyes
    1.28 +I beseech, I implore, I who worship you
    1.29 +Break free from behind the cold distant cloud
    1.30 +Shine upon me once more
    1.31 +I tire of this reighn of rain
    1.32 +To hear but a whisper of your words
    1.33 +Would send away this madness
    1.34 +Can my heart truly take it any more?
    1.35 +Can my heart break but once more?
    1.36 +Come to me from your cruel master
    1.37 +Come from behind that cloud
    1.38 +Back to my arms
    1.39 +I am unworthy of such and angel
    1.40 +But he is even more
    1.41 +He who hides you away fromme
    1.42 +Your, friend, Your confidant, Yourlover
    1.43 +But the last you do not know yet
    1.44 +O beloved of the Great Mothers wombs
    1.45 +Come to me from your cruel cloud
    1.46 +I will wait for you on the morrow
    1.47 +If you do not come then
    1.48 +I shall wait each morrow after the next morrow
    1.49 +And so when you come to me
    1.50 +The sorrow will be gone from my heart
    1.51 +And so goes the reign of my rain
    1.52 +Can my heart take that much more?
    1.53 +Can it truly break any more?
    1.54 +...Yes it can take it much much longer
    1.55 +Yes it can break so many times over
    1.56 +Butonly for you my precious star
    1.57 +My darling precious emerald-eyed star.
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