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1 Hey there! This was originally an entry into a one-hour challenge | |
2 that I just decided to add here too. This is a one shot, but if | |
3 enough people like it, I might continue with it. Now, if you're | |
4 looking for a story with great sex in it, look somewhere else, 'cause | |
5 you won't find it here. Enjoy! | |
6 Disclaimer: I don't own Cardcaptor Sakura. My personal deities, | |
7 Clamp, do. | |
8 | |
9 _____________________________________________________________________ | |
10 _________ | |
11 | |
12 Revelations | |
13 by The Snow Queen | |
14 scplatter@msn.com | |
15 | |
16 | |
17 "Is that all?" The young hostess asked as the young man finished | |
18 paying the check. Nodding in reply, Li Syaoran let his gaze fall on | |
19 his date, Kinomoto Sakura. She had finally found the time between | |
20 high school, cheerleading, studying, her friends, and her cardcaptor | |
21 duties to go out with him again. It had been so long since he had | |
22 last taken the young sorceress out that he was starting to believe | |
23 that she was not interested. But that could not be the case. They | |
24 loved each other deeply, and she was with him now, was she not? | |
25 | |
26 Having finished the transaction with the restaurant, Syaoran took | |
27 Sakura's hand and led her out of the eatery. Still having some time | |
28 until the young woman was required to return home, the far-to-early | |
29 hour of 10:00 being set by the nuisance of her older brother, Syaoran | |
30 decided a walk would be rather nice. And it was seeing that it was a | |
31 balmy summer night, and with just a few trees still abloom, a walk | |
32 through the falling petals was divine. | |
33 | |
34 The young maiden's eyes seemed to glow as she gazed at the delicate | |
35 petals, wondering what it was they reminded her of. She could not | |
36 place it, but she had seen that same soft shade of pink before, and | |
37 not on a flower petal. | |
38 | |
39 'Well, whatever it is, it's lovely...... 'The Mistress of the Cards | |
40 thought dazedly. She continued to stare about her, occasionally drawn | |
41 into a conversation by her long-term boyfriend. Kinomoto Sakura had | |
42 changed ....and yet not changed in the years following her discovery | |
43 of the Clow Cards. She had matured much, learning a few life lessons, | |
44 and losing a bit of her naivete. But, still she had a certain | |
45 innocence and purity to her that time just simply could not steal. | |
46 She had gained the lithe body of a dancer, rather than the slightly | |
47 bulkier form of the athlete that she was. The nimble maiden's hair | |
48 was still short, as she just could not give up her favorite hair | |
49 styles, but slightly longer. | |
50 | |
51 'Which is just as well,' She thought lazily. 'because now Tomoyo has | |
52 more hair to play around with when she's doing my hair up for one of | |
53 my costumes.' | |
54 | |
55 "Oh!" Sakura exclaimed in sudden understanding, much to Syaoran's | |
56 surprise. | |
57 | |
58 "What?!?" He asked, a noticable tone of worry lacing his voice. | |
59 | |
60 "Ummmm.... nothing." She replied, far to embarrassed to reveal that | |
61 she had not been listening to his banter. | |
62 | |
63 'It's Tomoyo..... I've seen that color on her. Their just like her | |
64 lips. That's where I've seen it before.....' She thought, an abashed | |
65 blush forming on her cheeks. Sakura vaguely wondered if her best | |
66 friend was enjoying her trip to Paris. She had begged Sakura to join | |
67 her, and oh how Sakura had wanted to go. But with her father working | |
68 so hard on his current archeological dig and Touya rarely at home | |
69 these days, she was needed far too much. It was a shame, Sakura had | |
70 longed to go. | |
71 | |
72 "Well, anyway.... that's what happened. Weird, isn't it?" Syaoran | |
73 asked, pulling Sakura from her thoughts. Quickly recovering, the | |
74 lithe brunette agreed with her boyfriend's question. Once again a | |
75 blush formed on her cheeks, embarrassed at her lack of attention. | |
76 | |
77 But she really could not help it. Lately, she had stopped paying | |
78 that much attention to Syaoran. She had not stopped loving him, she | |
79 never could, but she suddenly did not find him that fascinating | |
80 anymore. The cheerful freshman had even, though she would never admit | |
81 it, lied about why she could not make some of their planned dates, | |
82 unwilling to spend an entire evening with just him. | |
83 | |
84 'I'd rather spend time with Tomoyo. She always has such interesting | |
85 things to talk about. I can't wait until I get home so I can call her | |
86 and ask what she's been up to in France. She promised to take loads | |
87 of pictures for me!' Sakura thought excitedly. But she quickly chided | |
88 herself on once again not paying attention to her boyfriend. She then | |
89 began a battle with herself, trying to pay as much attention as | |
90 possible to his conversation, missing the subtle clues he was sending | |
91 to her with his body. It seemed ....accidently, that they had ended | |
92 up walking to Syaoran's home. | |
93 | |
94 "Sakura ....ummmmm.... why don't we go inside." Syaoran stated, | |
95 guiding the suddenly naive girl into his home. The warrior's home | |
96 was, as always, spotless. Sitting down in the living room, Sakura | |
97 waited alone as her boyfriend made some tea. Upon arriving, the | |
98 unaware young man continued to talk about this and that while his | |
99 girlfriend's thoughts wondered to the other side of the planet. | |
100 | |
101 It was when the clock stroke nine that Syaoran asked if Sakura | |
102 wanted to continue the conversation in his room. Having missed many | |
103 of the signals that the boy had been sending Sakura, she eagerly | |
104 agreed, not realizing what he had actually meant. Even when Syaoran's | |
105 hip brushed her own more often than it should have, or when his hand | |
106 found itself on her knee, she did not perceive the true meaning of | |
107 his actions. | |
108 | |
109 'Syaoran's always touching me.....' Sakura thought, bored once again | |
110 by Syaoran's suddenly poor conversational skills. 'He's even more | |
111 boring than usual.....' But when his hand moved a little farther up, | |
112 the young brunette finally started to realize what her sudden future | |
113 held. | |
114 | |
115 'Hoeee!' She thought, using one of her well known exclamations. | |
116 'Well, it's not like this is totally new. We've talked about this | |
117 before. I mean, I always knew that Syaoran would be my first.' And | |
118 with that thought in mind, Sakura gave into the young warriors | |
119 advances. | |
120 | |
121 He moved his hand from her leg to her hip, and its counterpart to | |
122 the back of her neck as he moved closer. Slowly bringing his face to | |
123 hers, Syaoran kissed her, massaging his lips across her own. Syaoran | |
124 soon ran his tongue across her bottom lip, asking for permission to | |
125 enter. She granted him such, opening her mouth so she could fully | |
126 engage with him. | |
127 | |
128 Sakura told anyone willing to listen that her favorite thing about | |
129 Syaoran was the way he kissed. She had never been kissed by anyone | |
130 but Syaoran, so she didn't know truthfully if he was any better at it | |
131 than anyone else, but Sakura seemed, as of late, to find her | |
132 boyfriend most interesting when their lips were locked. | |
133 | |
134 ****** END OF ORIGINAL HOUR******** | |
135 | |
136 'Well, he certainly is good that.....' Sakura thought dreamily as | |
137 her soon to be lover started sucking on her lower lip. She barely | |
138 noticed that his hands had started moving, and that they were soon in | |
139 places that only she had touched before. Soon her boyfriend decided | |
140 to divest her of her clothing, removing the lovely blue dress that | |
141 Tomoyo had made for her. | |
142 | |
143 'Tomoyo.....' | |
144 | |
145 Suddenly the image of the dark-haired angel that was Sakura's | |
146 dearest friend came to her mind and did not leave. Visions of her | |
147 pale skin and full pink lips danced across her mind as Sakura started | |
148 returning Syaoran's attention with a fervor. | |
149 | |
150 'Tomoyo.....' | |
151 | |
152 Sakura's body started heating up as she closed her eyes, imagining | |
153 Tomoyo was in the room with her. All of a sudden, it was her closest | |
154 friend who was running her hands over her inner thighs. It was | |
155 Tomoyo's sharp breaths on Sakura's petals that made her moan with | |
156 desire. | |
157 | |
158 Long withheld fantasies of the delicate young woman with the raven | |
159 hair consumed Sakura's mind. Inescapable dark eyes captured the | |
160 sorceress as the angel's hair fluttered over her body. Oh so soft | |
161 hands placed feather-light touches all across Sakura's body, bringing | |
162 her to a fevered pitch. The soft voice of her goddess, her Tomoyo, | |
163 whispered sweet nothings in her ear. | |
164 | |
165 But suddenly, her lilting voice changed, became deeper and far more | |
166 masculine, stating that everything would be alright. It would only | |
167 hurt for a little bit. | |
168 | |
169 '....Syoaran?' She thought, suddenly recognizing the strange voice. | |
170 That was when she felt it. Something entering her body, stretching | |
171 her walls painfully. The image of Tomoyo vanished as reality sunk | |
172 back into her. She was not with Tomoyo. She was with Syaoran, losing | |
173 her virginity. | |
174 | |
175 'No..... this isn't right. Tomoyo should be here......' Sakura | |
176 thought, but then all thought left her head as pain consumed her. She | |
177 stiffened, holding onto the bed as her maidenhead was taken. Tears | |
178 formed and fell from her eyes, but not because of the pain. Her lover | |
179 then wiped them away, stating she would only hurt for a little while. | |
180 | |
181 'What does he know?' Sakura thought derisively, suddenly aware of | |
182 why she was no longer interested in her boyfriend. Syaoran then | |
183 started moving, pushing his engorged member in and out of her core. | |
184 But Sakura was no longer willing to participate. She wanted to leave. | |
185 She wanted him to stop. | |
186 | |
187 'I want Tomoyo. I love Tomoyo!' Sakura screamed over and over in her | |
188 head, wishing she could be anywhere but there. But the young | |
189 sorceress could not just leave. Nothing could help her. Her fantasies | |
190 were gone as she tried to move with Syaoran, to enjoy herself. | |
191 But.... she could not. | |
192 | |
193 'Tomoyo!' Sakura screamed as her lover shouted her name. Syaoran | |
194 then fell on top of her, exhausted. He placed light kisses upon her | |
195 shoulders as he came down from his high. | |
196 | |
197 '....Tomoyo.....' | |
198 | |
199 After that, Syaoran helped her dress and walked her home. He tried | |
200 to keep up the conversation, so utterly cheerful that Sakura could | |
201 have killed him. She managed to make it home right on time, much to | |
202 Touya's displeasure as he had been longing to pound the brat into a | |
203 pulp. Sakura was quite willing to let him. | |
204 | |
205 She then ran to her room and flung herself on her bed, demanding | |
206 that Kero leave. As soon as she knew she was alone, that there were | |
207 no guardians eavesdropping outside her room, she cried. She cried all | |
208 night, unable to stop. | |
209 | |
210 'Tomoyo...... TOMOYO!' She screamed mentally, trying to apologize. | |
211 How could she have been so blind, so stupid, to just ignore | |
212 everything she had felt since she was a little girl? And then to just | |
213 give the most precious thing she owned to someone else..... | |
214 | |
215 'Oh Tomoyo, I'm so sorry! Is this how life is?' She thought. 'Is | |
216 this what life is really like? To realize what we truly want, only to | |
217 have it ripped from us? Is that what life is like? Is that all?" | |
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220 _____________________________________________________________________ | |
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222 | |
223 Kind of depressing, isn't it? I hope it was good, though, in all | |
224 it's angsty glory. I'm such a huge fan of Sakura/Tomoyo pairings, but | |
225 everyone seems to be really into Sakura and Syaoran being together. I | |
226 guess I wanted Sakura to realize why she might not want to be with | |
227 him. Anyway, tell me what you think. |