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rlm@2 4 Author’s notes
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rlm@2 6 Hey, this is the standard disclaimer of your choice; CLAMP owns CCS
rlm@2 7 and so on…
rlm@2 8 Any way, I hope that you enjoy your reading and my stories.
rlm@2 9 I don’t know where this fits in, as I’ve only seen the American
rlm@2 10 dubbed version (<_>) so I won’t be using all of the correct Japanese
rlm@2 11 spellings, I don’t think. I will try to use some Japanese though, so
rlm@2 12 haannaay or hanya or what ever happy is in Japanese.
rlm@2 13
rlm@2 14 There is Yuri in this story, so if you don’t like the thought of two
rlm@2 15 girls/women liking each other or having a relationship together,
rlm@2 16 evolve and grow up. On the other hand, you cant just not read this.
rlm@2 17
rlm@2 18 I also made most of this story at about eleven until three in the
rlm@2 19 morning, sometimes past three, so I hope you can forgive any of my
rlm@2 20 faults (Godder Grammmer and crpa) and any of my screw-ups involving
rlm@2 21 the plot of the series… but I hope you like it anyway
rlm@2 22
rlm@2 23 Illusions of happiness (should I tell if it is a happy or sad
rlm@2 24 ending? It is a bit sad, but also happy.)
rlm@2 25
rlm@2 26 By Starlight Armor (my real name is Yuri, not kidding!!)
rlm@2 27 mdlp_student@yahoo.com
rlm@2 28
rlm@2 29 ¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤
rlm@2 30
rlm@2 31 This is where the narrator, which looks like a little plush teddy
rlm@2 32 bear we know, steps in to tell us what is happening.
rlm@2 33
rlm@2 34 Kero, I mean Narrator: It was a sunny day, in Tomoeda, and Sakura
rlm@2 35 was running late, as usual. (So, once again, I didn’t get any
rlm@2 36 breakfast. <o_o>) Sakura is roller blading down the ohh too familiar
rlm@2 37 street that heads to the front gate of Yuri Bjoushi Elementary (did I
rlm@2 38 get that right?)
rlm@2 39
rlm@2 40 Sakura skids to a halt at the gate, looking for Madison, who else?
rlm@2 41
rlm@2 42 ¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤
rlm@2 43
rlm@2 44 ~ Sakura’s point of view ~
rlm@2 45
rlm@2 46 ‘What? Where is Madison? I know that she usually, always, waits for
rlm@2 47 me, even if it makes her late. Is she sick? Is she… AHHHH, I’m SUPER
rlm@2 48 SUPER late today!!!’
rlm@2 49
rlm@2 50 I run through the halls, looking for my Math class. ‘OHHH MAN, That
rlm@2 51 was the second bell!! And last time Sensei said that if I was late
rlm@2 52 again, I would get detention!’
rlm@2 53
rlm@2 54 As Sakura skids in the halls, trying to open the door silently. It
rlm@2 55 jerks open in front of her, and there was her teacher, fuming mad.
rlm@2 56 “Just take a deep breath,” Her teacher said to no one particular
rlm@2 57 “SAKURA!!!!” her yell echoed throughout the halls.
rlm@2 58
rlm@2 59 “MS. AVALON, HOW MANY TIMES HAVE I TOLD YOU??? YOUR LATE, AGAIN!!!!”
rlm@2 60 The older woman bellowed, “GET TO YOUR SEAT, OR I…” she was cut off
rlm@2 61 at that point by a familiar, melodious, beautiful voice.
rlm@2 62
rlm@2 63 “Excuse me, but Sakura didn’t wake up because of me, I forgot to
rlm@2 64 call her. You see, her father is out of town, and ke… I mean her
rlm@2 65 brother” oops, near slip there” isn’t home either, so she couldn’t
rlm@2 66 have woken up on time, because I didn’t call her”
rlm@2 67
rlm@2 68 It was Madison, Sakura’s best friend.
rlm@2 69
rlm@2 70 “I’m sorry for being late” at this point, she had the courage to
rlm@2 71 look at her teacher *probably because Madison is here* “again.” She
rlm@2 72 finished of with a small smile at lavender haired girl, and hurried
rlm@2 73 to sit down, rubbing the back of her head.
rlm@2 74
rlm@2 75 ¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤
rlm@2 76
rlm@2 77 ~ Madison ~
rlm@2 78
rlm@2 79 “What took you so long?” I asked, admiring those pools of green for
rlm@2 80 the umpteenth time today.
rlm@2 81
rlm@2 82 “I…umm…I fell asleep after you called me, gomen Madison.” My Sakura,
rlm@2 83 no, Sakura said.
rlm@2 84 At first, I was a bit angry with her… but how do you expect me to
rlm@2 85 stay mad at her for long, let alone for the time being.
rlm@2 86
rlm@2 87 “Ohh, Sakura was sleepy from last night’s late fashion show. Sakura
rlm@2 88 looks so cute when she is sleepy!” I spoke, trying to cheer her up.
rlm@2 89 How I had managed to get up today I still don’t know, let alone make
rlm@2 90 it to school on time. I was up all night, crying again. Sakura, how I
rlm@2 91 miss you, even when I'm standing there next to you. I promised once
rlm@2 92 that I would tell you about it… but I'm afraid, not strong and
rlm@2 93 courageous like you, but weak, and sad…
rlm@2 94
rlm@2 95 “What, huh? Ohh, sorry Sakura, I was just thinking.” I hope that she
rlm@2 96 didn’t see me, I was trying to be alone so I could think, and cry
rlm@2 97 some more but it wont do to let Sakura see me crying, will it? I
rlm@2 98 don’t want to dampen her ginki sprit? No, I would never want to hurt
rlm@2 99 her, even if I had to be the on the was hurting instead…
rlm@2 100
rlm@2 101 ¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤
rlm@2 102
rlm@2 103 ~Sonomi’s point of view~
rlm@2 104
rlm@2 105 “OHH, my dear Madison is home!! How was school, better yet, how was
rlm@2 106 Sakura? (My daughter had told me about her love, well, I guessed it
rlm@2 107 and she just admitted it. It was quite obvious, if I say so my self.)
rlm@2 108 When are you going over to her house to sleep-over?”
rlm@2 109
rlm@2 110 “MOM, ohh, never mind.” Was my dark haired girls reply.
rlm@2 111
rlm@2 112 “I was just asking! I worry about you!” Ever since… well… the
rlm@2 113 incident I have worried about her and tried to protect her the best I
rlm@2 114 can.
rlm@2 115
rlm@2 116 “Mom, you know, sometimes you’re a bit over protective! But I just
rlm@2 117 take it to hart, knowing that I’m loved.” Nice recovery she made
rlm@2 118 there.
rlm@2 119
rlm@2 120 “Well, ok… but please be careful, I already lost Nadeshiko, and I
rlm@2 121 don’t want to lose the other person that is dear to me.” If anything
rlm@2 122 happened to her… But I felt that she is safe with her green-eyed
rlm@2 123 friend. I don’t know why, though. I just sensed something different
rlm@2 124 about her…
rlm@2 125 “Well, you better get going soon, you don’t want to be late, do you?
rlm@2 126 And remember, get all of it on tape so we can watch it later!” I
rlm@2 127 always liked to watch her tapes. Sakura reminded me so much of my
rlm@2 128 true love… Well, I can understand why my daughter likes my love’s
rlm@2 129 daughter. A bit Ironic, but cute all the same.
rlm@2 130
rlm@2 131 Maybe I will be able to see my precious Nadeshiko again tonight, in
rlm@2 132 my dreams…
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rlm@2 134 ¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤
rlm@2 135
rlm@2 136 ~ Nadeshiko’s point of view ~
rlm@2 137
rlm@2 138 I can watch my love, my true love from my place of view, always
rlm@2 139 watching over Sonomi, Madison, Sakura, or my husband and our son.
rlm@2 140
rlm@2 141 I love my husband, but I also love Sonomi too, and it is a thought
rlm@2 142 that scares me, if I had to chose between the two…
rlm@2 143
rlm@2 144 I wish that I hadn’t been so ignorant about Sonomi, or that my
rlm@2 145 daughter wasn’t the same way about Madison…
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rlm@2 147 ¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤
rlm@2 148
rlm@2 149 ~ Sakura again ~
rlm@2 150
rlm@2 151 “Did you feel that Madison?” I asked urgently, after feeling like I
rlm@2 152 was being watched
rlm@2 153
rlm@2 154 “Feel wha…” Madison stopped for some reason
rlm@2 155
rlm@2 156 “Madison? Where are you? … Madison?” Where had she gone? She was
rlm@2 157 just here in bed, but she stopped talking for some reason. Maybe she
rlm@2 158 just fell asleep, no that wasn’t like her. Maybe she just got up for
rlm@2 159 a drink or something…
rlm@2 160
rlm@2 161 “SAAAAAAKKKKKUUUURRRAAAA!!” I heard her scream, some time after that
rlm@2 162
rlm@2 163 “HELP! A CLOW CARD!” I got up outta bed still in my pajamas, looking
rlm@2 164 around desperately for the key.
rlm@2 165 “MADISON, WHERE ARE YOU?” I yelled hoping I could hear her, that
rlm@2 166 something hadn’t… silenced her.
rlm@2 167
rlm@2 168 “up here…” Her voice sounded far away, and she must be moving
rlm@2 169 straight up! But… I already caught all of the cards that could fly…
rlm@2 170 What was it? I caught the dream card too, so I wasn’t having a bad
rlm@2 171 dream…
rlm@2 172
rlm@2 173 “HAHAHAHA, NO, SHE’S MINE NOW, YOU’LL NEVER GET HER BACK AGAIN!”
rlm@2 174 That sounded like… Li… But, I thought her lov, liked me? Why would he
rlm@2 175 want her then? As I found the key, I grabbed it… but it fell through
rlm@2 176 my hands, so I tried to pick it up again, but I just couldn’t touch
rlm@2 177 it! When I touched it, my hand just went right through it. Could it
rlm@2 178 be a card like Transparency? But then how would it take Madison?
rlm@2 179
rlm@2 180 “Sakura, what is the matter? Is it a card?” A familiar voice sounded
rlm@2 181 behind my head, as something that was yellow, no, tan whooshed by my
rlm@2 182 head.
rlm@2 183
rlm@2 184 “Kero, It’s a card, and it got Madison! What could it be?” I was
rlm@2 185 relived that the small looking seal-beast was here, but still puzzled
rlm@2 186 on what card had Madison, and why the key was acting so strangely…
rlm@2 187
rlm@2 188 “Hey, who are you, what…” I heard as Kero said something outside of
rlm@2 189 the window, and I was getting scared.
rlm@2 190
rlm@2 191 “Kero…KERO???” Oh no, I couldn’t help but think two down. It was up
rlm@2 192 to me…
rlm@2 193
rlm@2 194 It was hovering outside of my window, but I couldn’t see his *gulp*
rlm@2 195 or its face *double gulp* or whatever it had on its’ head… Then I saw
rlm@2 196 the hand, it looked like it was wet, or worse yet, was MADE of water.
rlm@2 197 Oh man, then I realized that it was coming through the window towards
rlm@2 198 me, and I realized something that mad me forget about the key, Kero,
rlm@2 199 and Madison. It was coming through the window, right? Then why was
rlm@2 200 the window closed, and locked. It can’t be, not a
rlm@2 201
rlm@2 202 “GOST, GET AWAY, NOOOOO” I yelled.
rlm@2 203
rlm@2 204 Then, as it gripped me, I realized that I was being shaken, and that
rlm@2 205 I was in my room, sweating. I saw the person that was shaking, no,
rlm@2 206 more like just holding me…
rlm@2 207
rlm@2 208 “MADISON, ohh, it’s you, where did the ~ gulp ~ Gost go?” I asked
rlm@2 209 that pair of eyes surrounded by hair that was Madison.
rlm@2 210
rlm@2 211 “There was none, there there, it was just a bad dream. Don’t worry
rlm@2 212 about it” Ohh, what sweeping relief this girl’s face gave to me.
rlm@2 213
rlm@2 214 “What, dream? But, I was sure!” I replied, “But I got the dream card
rlm@2 215 already! Where is Kero? He would know.” I looked around for that
rlm@2 216 perpetually hungry teddy bear.
rlm@2 217
rlm@2 218 “There he is, Kero, wake up. KERO, GET UP” I said while shaking the
rlm@2 219 seal-beast.
rlm@2 220
rlm@2 221 “Ummhh… Pudding…” Kero said, still asleep, “hummmh what? What do you
rlm@2 222 want?” He woke up slowly.
rlm@2 223
rlm@2 224 “There was a card!” I was frantic, searching to find it. I know it
rlm@2 225 had been there, I felt it, I sensed it. I was sure of it.
rlm@2 226
rlm@2 227 At that moment, I saw something that was shiny outside of my window,
rlm@2 228 right as I saw Li jump through it with the Lasin board in hand, but
rlm@2 229 wasn’t it closed? I guess not.
rlm@2 230
rlm@2 231 “Did you…” Li cut me off at that moment.
rlm@2 232
rlm@2 233 “Yes, it was a card, and a powerful one. What did it do? Have you
rlm@2 234 seen it yet?” Li interjected.
rlm@2 235
rlm@2 236 I told him about my dream, (all that I knew about it) and then
rlm@2 237 blushed furiously when I noticed that I was in my pajamas, and he was
rlm@2 238 in full costume. I stood up quickly, and so did Madison.
rlm@2 239
rlm@2 240 “Here Sakura, this is the costume that I made, go put it on so we
rlm@2 241 can go find that card” Madison spoke while rummaging around in her
rlm@2 242 white backpack for something that I soon noticed as her ever
rlm@2 243 faithful, ever trusty, ever ready camcorder.
rlm@2 244
rlm@2 245 “Uh, thanks Madison, I’ll change right now,” then as a quick after
rlm@2 246 thought, remembering that Li was here, and Meilin probably would show
rlm@2 247 up any minute, “in the bathroom.”
rlm@2 248
rlm@2 249 As I stepped into the bathroom to change, I heard another voice
rlm@2 250 outside the door.
rlm@2 251
rlm@2 252 “What are we doing here Li, why are we at her house? I though that
rlm@2 253 you said you had sensed a card, so why do we need her pathetic help?”
rlm@2 254 Ahh, it was Meilin, like I suspected.
rlm@2 255
rlm@2 256 “We are here because this is where the Lasin board said it was,
rlm@2 257 remember? I was running by and this is where it stopped pointing.” Li
rlm@2 258 replied, scowling like usual, or I guessed.
rlm@2 259
rlm@2 260 ¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤
rlm@2 261
rlm@2 262 ~ Li ~
rlm@2 263
rlm@2 264 “Sakura, you almost ready?” I was scared when I heard her scream. I
rlm@2 265 don’t like her or anything, well, I like her, but not like that. I’m
rlm@2 266 not surprised that Meilin came with me. Some how she managed to
rlm@2 267 follow me, even when I was using my Cards.
rlm@2 268 “Good, now lets go, grab your key. And Madison, try to stay outta
rlm@2 269 the cards way, it could hurt you.” I said, almost blushing. Madison
rlm@2 270 was, is cute, but I think Meilin would kill me if I made a move on
rlm@2 271 anyone else. I don’t mind though. She’s nice, as long as you’re not
rlm@2 272 on her bad side.
rlm@2 273
rlm@2 274 “Umph…” I hear behind me as Sakura jumps down from her window.
rlm@2 275
rlm@2 276 “Just use fly or float.”
rlm@2 277
rlm@2 278 “Ohh, duh, I’ll get it for Madison. Float, bring Madison to the
rlm@2 279 ground, and be careful.” I hear her say. She must really be best
rlm@2 280 friends with Madison, to take such care as to get a card out for her,
rlm@2 281 when Madison could have just gotten down using the stairs, and tell
rlm@2 282 float to take “Good Care of Her”
rlm@2 283
rlm@2 284 “Good, now we can get that card. It sounds like the dream card, but
rlm@2 285 maybe it was a premonition…” I know she has visions in her dreams,
rlm@2 286 but this one sounded kinda off, well, we will see.
rlm@2 287
rlm@2 288 ¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤
rlm@2 289
rlm@2 290 ~ Meilin ~
rlm@2 291
rlm@2 292 Humph, why did we have to stop at what’s-her-face Avalon’s house? Why?
rlm@2 293 Does Li that girl like Li? Worse yet, does Li like her?
rlm@2 294
rlm@2 295 “Li, why did we have to stop at her house?” I said as we were
rlm@2 296 running with the now shining Lasin board. “Why? Do you like her or
rlm@2 297 something?”
rlm@2 298
rlm@2 299 “Of course I like her, but not in the way that you think.” Well, I
rlm@2 300 guess if Li likes me more than he likes her, if he loves me, than all
rlm@2 301 is well. But, if he likes her… what will I do? I would be mad at her,
rlm@2 302 that stupid Madison. Well, I guess that it could also be that weird
rlm@2 303 Sakura. Maybe. I don’t wish.
rlm@2 304
rlm@2 305 ¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤
rlm@2 306
rlm@2 307 ~ Narrator ~
rlm@2 308
rlm@2 309 So, what do we have now? We have a confused Meilin, an intrigued Li,
rlm@2 310 a dreaming or rather nightmaring Sakura, and a sleepy and hungry
rlm@2 311 (ALWAYS) Kero, and nostalgic Sonomi, a watchful Nadeshiko, and
rlm@2 312 lastly, a… umm… well, we would have to see Madison’s current mood.
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rlm@2 314 ¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤~~~~~¤
rlm@2 315
rlm@2 316 ~ Madison ~
rlm@2 317
rlm@2 318 “Huh, ohh, this is hard. Running and running and running, I was so
rlm@2 319 out of breath that I thought that I was spinning, or maybe swimming.
rlm@2 320 But, I should be used to it, because I got it every time I saw that
rlm@2 321 ravaging angel of the cards.
rlm@2 322 “Ohh, Sakura…” I said absent-mindedly, and dreamily.
rlm@2 323
rlm@2 324 “Yes Madison?” Sakura replied. Wait, did she just say what I think
rlm@2 325 she said? Did she just actually hear what I just thought? Did I just…
rlm@2 326
rlm@2 327 “Yes?” She was waiting for me.
rlm@2 328
rlm@2 329 “Ohh, I’m just running out of breath, were running so hard. But
rlm@2 330 Sakura the athletic card captor isn’t out of breath, because she is
rlm@2 331 strong.” I thought up quickly. I love to make her blush.
rlm@2 332 “Sakura is so kawwii when she blushes!” Sakura is so cute whenever
rlm@2 333 she does anything, I wanted to add. But alas, I never could. I mean,
rlm@2 334 what would she do if she knew? Probably run from me? Maybe she would
rlm@2 335 faint… No, she was WAY to strong for that. I would be the one to
rlm@2 336 faint, not her. I wish that someday I could call her mine. My Sakura,
rlm@2 337 no, she could never be mine…
rlm@2 338
rlm@2 339 “Ohh… umm… thanks Madison, you say such thoughtful things.” She
rlm@2 340 blushed once again. My wonderful, kawwii beautiful Sakura. Maybe when
rlm@2 341 the Sakura blossoms are in bloom, I will tell her. Or leave her,
rlm@2 342 because Li will be coming to his senses.
rlm@2 343
rlm@2 344
rlm@2 345 End Chapter One. Stay Tuned for the next fiction, it will come soon.
rlm@2 346 ^_~
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