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rlm@0 1 My Odango
rlm@0 2 By: MichiRuka
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rlm@0 4 Email - Michiruka@hotmail.com
rlm@0 5 Author - Michiruka
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rlm@0 9 Authors Notes - Hey look, I'm new... I don't write that much but I figured
rlm@0 10 I'd try it out... If you people like it... review my story... okay?
rlm@0 11 And yes, I realize my disclaimer is kinda long but... who cares?...
rlm@0 12 Certinally not me! Oh and if you hate the idea of Hotaru and Chibi-Usa
rlm@0 13 being together or yuri fics offend you...LEAVE NOW!
rlm@0 14 AND MEMBER PEOPLE... I BURN EASILY! =O)
rlm@0 15 ~Michiruka
rlm@0 16 A/N's 2 - "..." = talking
rlm@0 17 <...> = think
rlm@0 18 * * * * = view change
rlm@0 19 ~*<>*~ = day change
rlm@0 20 ~~~~~~ = year change
rlm@0 21
rlm@0 22 Disclaimer - I don't own Sailor Moon... Naoko ... Er...
rlm@0 23 When I remember her last name I'll let ya know it...
rlm@0 24 But as I was saying... Naoko and those stupid dubbing peoples own it...
rlm@0 25 Sue me if you want... but I am pretty sure all you'll get is my teddy bear
rlm@0 26 and pink hair dye... maybe a chip or two... Whatever is left in my bag
rlm@0 27 anyways... -_-; If you don't get what I am saying... Let me put it in
rlm@0 28 simpler terms... I'M BROKE! SUE THE RICH ONES! (I wanna own Haruka and
rlm@0 29 Michiru tho...)
rlm@0 30
rlm@0 31 Anyways... Here's the story
rlm@0 32
rlm@0 33 ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
rlm@0 34
rlm@0 35 She stared at her lovingly from her doorstep as she walked away
rlm@0 36 from her house.
rlm@0 37 "My Odango..." she whispered to herself.
rlm@0 38 She was her first friend and she had grown to love her as
rlm@0 39 more than that. Of course she didn't tell 'her odango' this, but she
rlm@0 40 wanted to. She walked back inside and went up to her room. She wanted
rlm@0 41 to be left alone to think, or daydream, about everything. (A/N - Confuzzling
rlm@0 42 ain't it?)
rlm@0 43
rlm@0 44 * * * * * * * * * *
rlm@0 45
rlm@0 46 "Usagi! I'm home!" Chibi-Usa shouted.
rlm@0 47 She threw her things in the closet, took off her shoes and
rlm@0 48 put on a pair of slippers. She got no response. < Good, I'm home alone. >
rlm@0 49 she thought. She needed some time to think. She had new feelings and she
rlm@0 50 wanted to sort them out. She went to her room and laid down on her bed.
rlm@0 51 About an hour later, she had fallen asleep, deep in thought.
rlm@0 52
rlm@0 53 * * * * * * * * * *
rlm@0 54
rlm@0 55 "Hotaru! Come down for dinner!" Haruka yelled.
rlm@0 56 "Alright Haruka-papa." she answered.
rlm@0 57 Throughout the whole dinner, Hotaru barely spoke a word.
rlm@0 58 She was to deep in thought. < My odango. How I wish you felt the
rlm@0 59 same way about me as I do you. > she sighed unhappily. Michiru noticed
rlm@0 60 this and the fact that she barely touched her food.
rlm@0 61 "What's wrong? Guy troubles?" Michiru asked.
rlm@0 62 "Maybe girl troubles?" Haruka added.
rlm@0 63 Hotaru blushed a dark shade of red.
rlm@0 64 "Haruka-papa!" she whined.
rlm@0 65 Haruka just laughed. Michiru shot her a glare and she
rlm@0 66 immedently shut uo. Hotaru and Setsuna chuckled at the site.
rlm@0 67 "You know, you can tell us anything Hotaru." Setsuna said
rlm@0 68 after a while.
rlm@0 69 "It's nothing. Really. My I be excused?" she asked polietly.
rlm@0 70 "Of course." Michiru answered.
rlm@0 71 "Thankyou."
rlm@0 72 And with that she went back to her room to write in her journal.
rlm@0 73
rlm@0 74 ~*<>*~ ~*<>*~ ~*<>*~ ~*<>*~ ~*<>*~
rlm@0 75
rlm@0 76 Chibi-Usa and Hotaru had been talking all day while walking
rlm@0 77 through the park. Not that either of them minded, it was the fact that
rlm@0 78 the other didn't know that hurt.
rlm@0 79 "So, what to talk about now?" Chibi-Usa asked.
rlm@0 80 "I don't know." Hotaru responded.
rlm@0 81 < How's 'Do you love me?' for a topic? > the both thought.
rlm@0 82 "Do you like anyone?" Chibi-Usa blurted out.
rlm@0 83 "H-Hai" she answered back quietly.
rlm@0 84 "Really?! How kawaii! Who is it?!" Chibi-Usa asked, all to eagerly.
rlm@0 85 "Someone." Hotaru responded.
rlm@0 86 "Do I know them?"
rlm@0 87 "You could say that."
rlm@0 88 "Is it me?'
rlm@0 89 Hotaru's eyes widened and she looked over at Chibi-Usa.
rlm@0 90 "N-Nani?" she choked out.
rlm@0 91 "Is... it... me?" Chibi-Usa repeated slowly.
rlm@0 92 "I-Iie! I've got to go." Hotaru said, and with that she took off
rlm@0 93 toward her house. (A/N - Iie means 'No' ... right?)
rlm@0 94 < Ugh! I'm such a baka! > Chibi-Usa thought. She decided to go
rlm@0 95 apologize to her friend. But she took her time getting there. She wanted
rlm@0 96 to let Hotaru calm down first.
rlm@0 97
rlm@0 98 * * * * * * * * * * *
rlm@0 99
rlm@0 100 Hotaru managed to get home in 15 minutes. When she walked, or more
rlm@0 101 like 'fell', through the front door, Haruka looked up from her paper. She
rlm@0 102 glanced at her strangely.
rlm@0 103 "Where dogs chasing you or something?" she asked.
rlm@0 104 "No. Haruka-papa? How did you tell Michiru-mama you liked her?"
rlm@0 105 Haruka looked a little surprised but told her anyway. When she was
rlm@0 106 down, she looked as if she was in heaven. She snapped out of it when she
rlm@0 107 noticed Hotaru started to go upstairs.
rlm@0 108 "Why did you want to know Hotaru?" she asked.
rlm@0 109 "I was just curoius. If Chibi-Usa comes, tell her I'm in my room
rlm@0 110 and that she should just come up. Alright?"
rlm@0 111 "No problem, kiddo!"
rlm@0 112
rlm@0 113 * * * * * * * * * * *
rlm@0 114
rlm@0 115 Chibi-Usa hesistated but eventually opened Hotaru's door and
rlm@0 116 walked in.
rlm@0 117 "Hotaru?"
rlm@0 118 Hotaru looked up from her journal and smiled warmly.
rlm@0 119 "Look, I'm sorry about earlier. I didn't mean it like it came out."
rlm@0 120 Chibi-Usa had said after a good 5 minutes. She looked at the ground.
rlm@0 121 "It's alright. Sit down. I need to talk to you." Hotaru said, gently.
rlm@0 122 Chibi-Usa sat down on her bed, not looking up at Hotaru.
rlm@0 123 "What is it?" she asked.
rlm@0 124 "I lied earlier. I do like you but I was afriad if I told you, you'd
rlm@0 125 hate me."
rlm@0 126 Chibi-Usa looked up, confusedly.
rlm@0 127 "You... do?" she asked.
rlm@0 128 Hotaru nodded, noticing her pink-haired friend (A/N - SPORE! Erm..
rlm@0 129 Uh... -_-; Sorry) was blushing ever so slightly as she looked back at the
rlm@0 130 ground. Hotaru lifted Chibi-Usa's chin up with her fore finger and kissed
rlm@0 131 her
rlm@0 132 lightly, yet passionately, on the lips with her eyes closed. Chibi-Usa's
rlm@0 133 eyes widened in surprise but after the shock went down, she leaned into the
rlm@0 134 kiss, making it deeper.
rlm@0 135
rlm@0 136 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
rlm@0 137 It was now five years later. Hotaru and Chibi-Usa were walking
rlm@0 138 hand-in-hand through the park. They were as happy as Mamoru and Usagi,
rlm@0 139 or more better, Haruka and Michiru. Hotaru leaned over and whispered,
rlm@0 140 "Ashitaru (A/N - Is that right?) my odango."
rlm@0 141 "Ashitaru, Taru-chan"
rlm@0 142 They held each other, looking into each others eyes.
rlm@0 143 They loved each other and it showed. Hotaru leaned down and kissed her
rlm@0 144 pink-haired lover. They never wanted this moment to end, and it seemed
rlm@0 145 like it was forever to them.
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rlm@0 148 Fin. 3/13
rlm@0 149
rlm@0 150 Ending Notes - Well, that was... short. Like? Hate? Want to tell me it
rlm@0 151 sucked? Then review... please! =O)