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rlm@0 1 Hello everyone! ^-^ This story is something I'm very glad to have finished.
rlm@0 2 It took me nearly two years from start to finish. Sometimes it would move
rlm@0 3 to the back of my mind for a while when I was working on other stories or
rlm@0 4 projects, but it would always lurk there until I would give it my full
rlm@0 5 attention again. This is my written version of Bishoujo Senshi Sailormoon
rlm@0 6 S based off of Naoko Takeuchi's manga rather than the anime. It started
rlm@0 7 as a simple enough idea. I wanted to expand upon some of the points in
rlm@0 8 the manga. That's where ChibiUsa & Hotaru's most romantic scenes were
rlm@0 9 to begin with, anyway. ^-^ But it grew after that. Slowly but surely. And
rlm@0 10 this is the end result. I can't say it's one of my best works, but I
rlm@0 11 certainly enjoyed writing a good deal of it. ^-^ It took me two years to
rlm@0 12 finish, so a lot of my writing isn't really as good as it could be as my
rlm@0 13 editor reminded me, so I take all of the blame for tarnishing Naoko
rlm@0 14 Takeuchi's manga. ^-^;; I really do hope you all enjoy this. ^-^ Now I
rlm@0 15 just need to start up SuperS and go through Sailorstars and this little
rlm@0 16 project should be done in another two years or more. ^^;; I'd like to thank
rlm@0 17 Boco the Chokobo for all of the contributions to this story and for being
rlm@0 18 so kind as to edit it for me when I don't have the patience to do it myself.
rlm@0 19 I tried to follow the manga very closely, but there are some times when the
rlm@0 20 story veers, so please bear with me. ^-^;; I borrowed heavily from manga
rlm@0 21 translations to keep myself on track for the most part, but it was a lot of
rlm@0 22 fun to see how things turned out anyway. ^=^ Thank you very much for reading
rlm@0 23 this and if you have any comments or suggestions, please e-mail me. ^-^
rlm@0 24
rlm@0 25 Bishoujo Senshi Sailormoon - Infinity I Alternate
rlm@0 26 'Eye of the Beholder' - Prologue
rlm@0 27 by Amazoness Duo
rlm@0 28 amazonessduo@hotmail.com
rlm@0 29
rlm@0 30 "I thought it was around here.." ChibiUsa let out a sigh as she walked
rlm@0 31 along. She had come to the Mugen Gakuen amusement park with Mamoru, Momoko,
rlm@0 32 Diana, and some classmates, but she had lost her hat riding the roller coaster,
rlm@0 33 and had seperated to look for it. She was having a great time overall, but
rlm@0 34 something felt wrong. A strange feeling in the pit of her stomach just wouldn't
rlm@0 35 leave her. She felt an urgent need to hurry. "It must be the other side of
rlm@0 36 that building.."
rlm@0 37 Looking around her, as she entered the secluded area in the shadow of the
rlm@0 38 skyscraper, the pink-haired girl found herself near the Infinity Academy, Mugen
rlm@0 39 Gakuen. The feeling of dread wouldn't go away. It worsened as she came near a
rlm@0 40 red and white warning sign. "I can read that," she said to herself, barely able
rlm@0 41 to make out the complicated kanji. "..research labs? Oh, here it is." The hat
rlm@0 42 had been blown by the wind into a corner of this section of the building. The
rlm@0 43 princess picked it up and dusted it off. "I bought it for Ikuko-mama, so I'm
rlm@0 44 glad I found it again." Taking a better look at her surroundings, hat in hand,
rlm@0 45 she gasped at the sight unfolding in front of her. A raven haired girl wearing
rlm@0 46 the Mugen Gakuen school uniform was having a coughing fit. It sounded pretty
rlm@0 47 bad. "Hey, are you okay?"
rlm@0 48 ChibiUsa went over to the other girl, a hand going to the pale child's
rlm@0 49 shoulder. The girl's arm came up, forcing her own away from her, the other
rlm@0 50 clutching her chest as coughs wracked her weak body. "It's okay.. this happens
rlm@0 51 all the time... but you should go away. The area is.. off limits..."
rlm@0 52 Before the pink-haired girl could respond, her blonde mother had rounded
rlm@0 53 the corner at a dead run. Strangely enough, she was also in a Mugen Gakuen
rlm@0 54 uniform, but she had no time to ask why before the older girl began: "What are
rlm@0 55 you doing here by yourself, ChibiUsa-chan!! You should know better, it's
rlm@0 56 dangerous here!"
rlm@0 57 ChibiUsa responded defensively. "I lost the hat I bought for Ikuko-mama,
rlm@0 58 and then this girl.. I guess she's okay, but she looked hurt." Just as quickly
rlm@0 59 as the words left her mouth, the princess felt her broach reacting. "The
rlm@0 60 Crystal..?"
rlm@0 61 "ChibiUsa-chan! Abunai!!" A large black monster had grown out of the
rlm@0 62 darkness was hovering over the three girls. Acting as quickly as she could,
rlm@0 63 ChibiUsa changed into Sailorchibimoon. Not having time for a fancy speech, she
rlm@0 64 threw herself between the Daimon and the beautiful raven haired girl.
rlm@0 65 The Daimon lunged forward towards the two girls. Chibimoon brought her arm
rlm@0 66 up in front of her as the beast came crashing into her. The dark haired girl
rlm@0 67 screamed as Chibimoon fell backwards.
rlm@0 68 "Moon Spiral Heart Attack!" Sailormoon's voice rang through the haze of
rlm@0 69 pain seeping into Chibimoon's mind. Before the Daimon could do anything, it was
rlm@0 70 hit by Sailormoon's attack. A cat lay on the floor where moments before a
rlm@0 71 Daimon had been.
rlm@0 72 Breathing a sigh of relief, Chibimoon shakily got to her feet. She quickly
rlm@0 73 turned around to check on the dark haired schoolgirl. The girl was on her
rlm@0 74 knees, her hands clenched against her chest. She looked up, her silver grey
rlm@0 75 eyes still frightened. Their mysterious depths left the pink haired girl
rlm@0 76 speechless as she tried to think.
rlm@0 77 "Who.. are you..? Why did you save me?" the raven haired girl asked, short
rlm@0 78 of breath.
rlm@0 79 Chibimoon smiled broadly and held out a hand to the other girl. Her knees
rlm@0 80 felt weak and a newer feeling in her stomach replaced the feelings of dread
rlm@0 81 she'd had. Her crimson eyes looked deeply into the silver eyes pointed up at
rlm@0 82 her. "We are the Soldiers of Justice! Sailormoon and Sailorchibimoon." She
rlm@0 83 really wanted to see this girl again for some odd reason. She hoped this
rlm@0 84 wouldn't be the last she would see of her. "Are you okay? Were you hurt?" she
rlm@0 85 asked, concerned.
rlm@0 86 The raven haired girl took Chibimoon by the wrist, pulling her forward.
rlm@0 87 "You are the one who's hurt," she said softly, eyes seeming to shine in the
rlm@0 88 darkness. "You got hurt for me."
rlm@0 89 "What?" Chibimoon gasped as she felt the bloody gash on her arm where the
rlm@0 90 Daimon had hit her. She hadn't noticed before, but now that she did, pain shot
rlm@0 91 through her arm. She felt a bit sick at the sight of her own blood.
rlm@0 92 The schoolgirl held Chibimoon's arm, gently placing her hand over the
rlm@0 93 wound. Chibimoon looked down at the other girl, confused about what she was
rlm@0 94 doing. The raven haired girl looked back up at her, dispelling her concerns for
rlm@0 95 the moment.
rlm@0 96 Mamoru showed up just as two figures leaped off, from the shadows: a green-
rlm@0 97 haired woman in a sailor fuku, and a platinum blond man in cape and mask.
rlm@0 98 Apparently they had watched the whole thing from the sidelines. "Wait!"
rlm@0 99 Sailormoon yelled after them, to no avail.
rlm@0 100 Chibimoon watched as the girl's eyes fell closed. She seemed to be
rlm@0 101 concentrating intently. Chibimoon gasped as a glow began to surround her arm
rlm@0 102 and the other girl's hands. A warm feeling flooded through her, eminating from
rlm@0 103 the girl's hands, but passing over Chibimoon's whole body. Finally, the glow
rlm@0 104 began to dissipate. Pulling her arm up after the dark haired girl had let go of
rlm@0 105 it, she could see that the wound was now not much more than a bad scratch.
rlm@0 106 "Usagi! Look, my wound.."
rlm@0 107 Taking Chibimoon's arm again, the raven haired girl began to bandage it
rlm@0 108 with her hankerchief. Not looking at the pink haired senshi, she began
rlm@0 109 explaining as if she'd read Chibimoon's mind. "I've been able to do that since
rlm@0 110 I was very young. I can heal injuries, but it takes a lot out of me." The pale
rlm@0 111 girl looked down sadly. "But it frightens everyone around me when I do that."
rlm@0 112 She sighed, running her fingers through her dark hair.
rlm@0 113 Chibimoon looked down at the dark haired girl in amazement. "I think it's
rlm@0 114 wonderful..." she said softly.
rlm@0 115 The raven haired girl looked up at the future princess oddly, finished
rlm@0 116 bandaging her arm. She blinked in confusion, looking up into those crimson gems
rlm@0 117 that stared down at her. The other sailor senshi were talking behind them, but
rlm@0 118 she didn't seem to notice. "You... You do?" The question came out softly. How
rlm@0 119 could anyone think its wonderful? It seemed impossible to the girl.
rlm@0 120 Chibimoon nodded emphatically. "Un, it's amazing! My arm feels so much
rlm@0 121 better now. Thank you." Looking down into two silvery pools, Chibimoon felt
rlm@0 122 herself being drawn in by this mysterious girl. She longed for that gentle
rlm@0 123 touch, that warm feeling again.
rlm@0 124 "And thank you for saving me." The raven haired girl let a small smile
rlm@0 125 play across her lips. It was the first time Chibimoon had seen her smile. It
rlm@0 126 was beautiful. This girl didn't seem to smile much, but it sent a thrill
rlm@0 127 through the pink haired girl just to see it. Right there, Chibimoon vowed that
rlm@0 128 she'd get her to smile more. "You should disinfect that when you get home," the
rlm@0 129 raven haired girl said, motioning to Chibimoon's arm. "But right now, you
rlm@0 130 should go. If the guards find you, you'll be in a lot of trouble."
rlm@0 131 "Thanks." Chibimoon smiles gratefully. The pink haired senshi paused
rlm@0 132 before leaving. It didn't feel right to leave yet. More importantly, she
rlm@0 133 didn't want to leave yet. She wanted to see the dark haired girl again.
rlm@0 134 "Umm... If you don't mind, could you tell me something? What's your name?"
rlm@0 135 "Tomoe Hotaru," Hotaru said softly, finally getting to her feet. The two
rlm@0 136 girls looked at each other for a long silent moment. Turning to leave, she
rlm@0 137 whispered back over her shoulder, "Be careful."
rlm@0 138 Chibimoon watched after Hotaru as she entered the building through large
rlm@0 139 double doors. The girl's name ran through her mind over and over again as she
rlm@0 140 watched the girl's retreating form. "Firefly," she said quietly.
rlm@0 141
rlm@0 142 Hotaru collapsed near the doorway shortly after she got home. Pain shot
rlm@0 143 through her veins as an icy hand seemed to clamp down on her whole body. She
rlm@0 144 felt as if she were being torn apart from the inside out. Her breathing grew
rlm@0 145 heavy and ragged as she gasped for air, her hand clutching her chest. Hot tears
rlm@0 146 rolled down her pale cheeks as the pain became unbearable. Everything grew hazy
rlm@0 147 around her. For a moment, the dark haired girl wished the escaped Daimon had
rlm@0 148 killed her. Then this pain would finally be at an end. Through the cloud of
rlm@0 149 pain, she decided that it was good that she hadn't, if only that she had been
rlm@0 150 able to meet the pink haired girl right afterward.
rlm@0 151 "Hotaru?" Her father's assistant, Kaolinite, ran up to her. "Another
rlm@0 152 seizure? It's alright. It will pass."
rlm@0 153 The older woman placed a hand on Hotaru's shoulder. Hotaru shrugged it off
rlm@0 154 and pulled away, her breathing returning to normal as the pain began to dull.
rlm@0 155 "Let go of me! I can handle it myself," she said angrily.
rlm@0 156 "Hotaru, you know that's no way to talk to Kaori-kun. She's helped us very
rlm@0 157 much since your mother's death. As my assistant, you should treat her with
rlm@0 158 respect," Professor Tomoe said as he entered the room.
rlm@0 159 "Professor!" Kaolinite turned at his approach. "Hotaru and I were just
rlm@0 160 having a discussion."
rlm@0 161 Professor Tomoe nodded before looking sternly at Hotaru. "Hotaru, you need
rlm@0 162 help with how poor your health is. You have to let us help you. And Kaori-kun
rlm@0 163 is practically part of the family. You should listen to her."
rlm@0 164 "She's your private secretary, your assistant. She should know her place
rlm@0 165 and not invade our home!" Hotaru stood up on shaky legs and ran off to her
rlm@0 166 room.
rlm@0 167
rlm@0 168 Slamming the door to her room, Hotaru fell forward onto her bed. She
rlm@0 169 wasn't feeling very well. She breathed deeply, trying to relax. An image of a
rlm@0 170 pink haired girl came unbidden to her mind. The other girl had been so nice to
rlm@0 171 her. She had even saved her life. What shocked Hotaru the most was that she
rlm@0 172 hadn't been afraid of her healing abilities. Hotaru hugged her knees to her
rlm@0 173 chest and sighed. Would she ever see the pink haired girl again? Probably not.
rlm@0 174 She didn't even know her name. Her life was too lonely for her to have found a
rlm@0 175 friend that easily. That glimmer of hope, that warm feeling she had felt,
rlm@0 176 disappeared as the reality of the situation set in.
rlm@0 177 As she changed from her school clothes into a night gown, she felt a sharp
rlm@0 178 pain in her heart. She didn't know if it was another seizure or if it was the
rlm@0 179 fact that she would never see the pink haired girl again. She took a shaky
rlm@0 180 breath before pulling her nightgown the rest of the way on. The thought of a
rlm@0 181 beautiful dreamless sleep beckoned to her as an escape from the sorrow she felt.
rlm@0 182 Closing her eyes tightly, she crawled under the soft sheets of her bed. Still
rlm@0 183 wracked by a pain in her heart, she fell into a fitful slumber.
rlm@0 184
rlm@0 185 "It hurts..."
rlm@0 186 Hotaru moaned in pain, rolling over in bed. The vice-like grip over her
rlm@0 187 body increased. She writhed in pain on the bed.
rlm@0 188 The door to her room slowly opened. "Hotaru?" her father asked. "Hasn't
rlm@0 189 it stopped?"
rlm@0 190 "Dad..." Hotaru managed quietly.
rlm@0 191 "Did you take your medicine?" Professor Tomoe asked worriedly.
rlm@0 192 "I took it, but... it didn't work."
rlm@0 193 "When the time comes, it will. You'll be alright." The professor reached
rlm@0 194 into a large pocket on the side of his lab coat and withdraw an angular crystal.
rlm@0 195 "This is an amulet, passed down through the family. Your mother used to carry
rlm@0 196 it." He placed the amulet gently in Hotaru's hands. "Now that you have it, you
rlm@0 197 can sleep soundly. I'll come check on you in a bit. Good night." He turned to
rlm@0 198 leave, quietly closing the door behind him.
rlm@0 199 "Dad, why are you acting so strangely? What's been going on lately?"
rlm@0 200 Hotaru sighed and held the crystal. It felt cold against her palm. Her pain
rlm@0 201 slowly started to recede as she stared down at the amulet. "Maybe dad was
rlm@0 202 right. It does seem to be working. The seizure stopped. But... I'm scared. I
rlm@0 203 can't trust my own body. It feels so strange. The seizures... they've only
rlm@0 204 been getting worse lately." She took a shaky breath, willing herself not to
rlm@0 205 think about such things. Finally, she drifted back to sleep.
rlm@0 206
rlm@0 207 Back at the underground base beneath Crown Game Center, Luna and Artemis
rlm@0 208 were talking to the Sailor Team about the two mysterious Senshi they had
rlm@0 209 encountered and the mysterious happenings at the Mugen Gakuen school. ChibiUsa
rlm@0 210 wasn't really paying attention, her mind preoccupied. She kept playing the
rlm@0 211 events of the day before over and over in her mind. She couldn't stop thinking
rlm@0 212 about that strange girl. "Hotaru," she whispered. The dark haired girl's image
rlm@0 213 appeared with crystal clarity in ChibiUsa's mind's eye. Her beautiful pale
rlm@0 214 skin, offset by dark raven hair. Deep pools of silver that seemed to go on
rlm@0 215 forever. She was pretty. Very pretty.
rlm@0 216 "ChibiUsa-chan?" Usagi asked for the third time, wondering what the Senshi
rlm@0 217 in training could be daydreaming about. "Are you coming with me and Mamo-chan
rlm@0 218 or not?"
rlm@0 219 "Huh?" Looking over, ChibiUsa blinked a few times. "Oh, right. Yeah."
rlm@0 220 Usagi smiled to herself as she started to drag Mamoru off, her future
rlm@0 221 daughter in tow. "Anyway, ChibiUsa-chan. You shouldn't give our real
rlm@0 222 identities out so easily. What if those two were enemies?"
rlm@0 223 "Sorry," ChibiUsa apologized half-heartedly. "I thought I could be friends
rlm@0 224 with the girl. I like Hotaru-chan, with her pure-white skin.. she was very
rlm@0 225 pretty."
rlm@0 226 "Like plaster of Paris," Mamoru agreed. At the questioning look from his
rlm@0 227 future daughter, he explained. "A beautiful stone, like new-fallen snow."
rlm@0 228
rlm@0 229 A few days later, the group had again gathered at Crown Fruit Parlor. "So
rlm@0 230 you're the president of the 5th year class, ChibiUsa-chan?" Ami asked.
rlm@0 231 "Yep," ChibiUsa responded between bites of a sundae. "I represented all of
rlm@0 232 us at the entrance ceremony! It was great. The new class was cute."
rlm@0 233 "ChibiUsa is the class rep.. the world's coming to an end."
rlm@0 234 "Oh, it's not that bad, Usagi," Minako interjected. "Besides, we finally
rlm@0 235 made it into 3rd year junior high. All we have to worry about is entrance
rlm@0 236 exams.. then again, if an enemy attacks now, I'll be held back for sure."
rlm@0 237 "Don't be so gloomy. It's April 17th, after all, Rei-chan's birthday! We
rlm@0 238 should throw her a party," Makoto said as she played with the remains of her own
rlm@0 239 frozen treat. "Where's she been, anyway?"
rlm@0 240 "Out training on Mt. M, since yesterday," the blonde original-Senshi
rlm@0 241 responds. "She wanted to cleanse herself for her 15th birthday."
rlm@0 242 "Perfect! We can surprise her!! Everyone's going, right?"
rlm@0 243 "A mountain?" ChibiUsa makes a face at the 'older' girls. "I have things
rlm@0 244 to do, being class representative and all. Tell Rei-chan happy birthday for me,
rlm@0 245 though." And with that, the pink-haired girl finished her icecream and slipped
rlm@0 246 out of her seat. She had more important things to do.
rlm@0 247
rlm@0 248 ChibiUsa frantically searched through the laundry. Ikuko-mama had said
rlm@0 249 that she would wash it for her. If she could only find it... ChibiUsa smiled
rlm@0 250 to herself. Any reason to see the raven haired girl again would be worth it.
rlm@0 251 Her smile slowly vanished when she found the hankerchief. The blood stain was
rlm@0 252 still there on the white cloth.
rlm@0 253 A small sigh escaped her lips as she looked at the cloth. All she really
rlm@0 254 wanted was to see Hotaru again. She hadn't been able to get the dark haired
rlm@0 255 girl out of her mind. She had wanted to give the hankerchief back to the dark
rlm@0 256 haired girl, but now it looked like stain of her blood was stuck in the cloth.
rlm@0 257 She would settle for any reason to see the other girl again. She wasn't sure
rlm@0 258 why, but she just had to see Hotaru again. She had to. She took a deep breath
rlm@0 259 as she thought up an image of the other girl in her mind's eye. That pale,
rlm@0 260 alabaster complexion that made the girl seem to be a beautiful statue brought to
rlm@0 261 life. Those soft, thin lips that looked so pretty when they would smile. Her
rlm@0 262 short raven hair, a dark contrast to her pale skin, making her look even more
rlm@0 263 striking. And those sad silvery grey eyes.. just looking into them showed a
rlm@0 264 glimpse of the shadows this girl had around herself, the loneliness she clung to
rlm@0 265 as if it was the only thing she had. She was so beautiful. And so very alone.
rlm@0 266 The pink haired girl shook her head. It wasn't fair. This girl shouldn't have
rlm@0 267 to feel that way. She would be her friend. She smiled to herself. Yes, she
rlm@0 268 would be Hotaru's friend. She only hoped the other girl would let her.