1.1 --- a/winston-intro.txt	Sat Feb 18 11:42:34 2012 -0700
     1.2 +++ b/winston-intro.txt	Sat Feb 18 11:51:45 2012 -0700
     1.3 @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     1.4  show each sense in action. Please look through the articles, in
     1.5  particular the video showcase, and tell me what you think.
     1.6  
     1.7 -Video Showcase : http://aurellem.localhost/cortex/org/cover.html
     1.8 +Video Showcase : http://aurellem.org/cortex/org/cover.html
     1.9  
    1.10  Introduction:
    1.11  http://aurellem.org/cortex/html/intro.html
    1.12 @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
    1.13        creature has direct control over placement/creation of objects
    1.14        via simulated telekinesis. The creature observes this sub-world
    1.15        through it's normal senses and uses its observations to make
    1.16 -      predictions about it's top level world.
    1.17 +      predictions about its top level world.
    1.18  
    1.19      * Integrate the simulated world with Genesis, so that Genesis
    1.20        could use the simulated world to answer questions about a
    1.21 @@ -77,9 +77,8 @@
    1.22  can't wait to hear your critiques and suggestions.
    1.23  
    1.24  Finally, regarding next year at MIT, can I be considered for the
    1.25 -position of TA for 6.034 or 6.xxx? Also, do you want me to return Fall
    1.26 -or Summer?
    1.27 +position of TA for 6.034 or 6.xxx? Also, do you want me to return to
    1.28 +MIT at the beginning of Fall or at the beginning of Summer?
    1.29  
    1.30  Sincerely, 
    1.31 -
    1.32  --Robert McIntyre