# HG changeset patch
# User Robert McIntyre <rlm@mit.edu>
# Date 1364833425 0
# Node ID 79b15c87901f417a8c4eb026d9c2149dfb8839ad
# Parent  1693e1c57f9975c883907e84f78d105751061b74
minor change.

diff -r 1693e1c57f99 -r 79b15c87901f org/patents.org
--- a/org/patents.org	Mon Apr 01 16:22:30 2013 +0000
+++ b/org/patents.org	Mon Apr 01 16:23:45 2013 +0000
@@ -149,8 +149,8 @@
   normal patent troll methods of buying bulk patents from companies
   that are going out of business. However, they could also gather
   patents from individuals and companies who believe that the patent
-  system is harmful to innovation, and simply donate their patents to
-  the cause.
+  system is harmful to innovation -- they would simply donate their
+  patents to the cause.
 
   How could this company get enough money to fight these legal
   battles?  Perhaps there could be a possibility of settling for money
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@
   The only exception is if the product is open (all code/methods of
   construction is made publicly available under an open license), and
   the entity makes this same pledge for any patents relating to the
-  product, the entity can take the Google 'neutral patent pledge'
+  product. The entity can take the Google 'neutral patent pledge'
   instead of this pledge if they are a 'special exception'.
 #+end_quote