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author rlm
date Sun, 14 Mar 2010 07:01:51 -0400
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1 Hello! ^-^ This story is based on a premise my friend gave me to write. So
2 it has nothing to do with my normal continuity. ^^;; Anyway, all of my
3 stories (Sailormoon, Cardcaptor Sakura, Pretty Sammy, and others) can be
4 found at Moonlit Nights ( http://fly.to/moonlit_nights ). ^-^ I love to hear
5 what you think about my stories, so if you have the chance, please e-mail
6 me. ^-^ Thanks! *hugs*
8 This was the premise for the story:
10 It's a dismal, rainy day. Some situation (possibly a dispute with a
11 parental figure, etc.) has locked one member of a pair (you get to decide
12 ^_- ) into their own home without access to any means of communicating with
13 the other. The other, of course, either doesn't know this or DOES know this
14 but can't do anything. They both take the time apart to reminisce.
15 Write that, the reason behind it, and resolve the situation ^_^
17 And here's what came out of it:
19 I Sure Am Glad It's Raining
20 by Amazoness Duo
21 amazonessduo@hotmail.com
23 The rain pelted against the window in sheets, nearly drowning out the sobs
24 coming from within the young girls room. Generally a cheerful place, it now
25 was more like a dungeon. A plush prison, but a prison nonetheless. Cute
26 little stuffed rabbits stood sentry over the room's sole occupant. It
27 wasn't fair. Why did life have to hurt so much? Why was everyone here always
28 so cruel? These people weren't her family. They didn't care about what
29 happened to her. Even Usagi, her real mother, had agreed with her 'aunt' and
30 'uncle'. No, she wasn't her mother yet. She was just some immature girl that
31 she was forced to live with. While she was practically exiled from her home
32 so she could learn to become the next Sailormoon from -her-.
33 The shawl she had been given only the night before was little consolation.
34 Rather, it reminded her even more of the girl she was currently barred from
35 seeing. Clutching it tightly, the pink haired girl pulled it close. The
36 thunder sent shivers up and down her spine. The storm was only making things
37 worse, playing with her already frazzled nerves. A pang of sadness shot
38 through her as she held the shawl closer. It still carried her scent.
39 Closing her eyes, she could see her just as clearly as if she was standing
40 there in front of her. Beautiful ivory skin, the very faintest of smiles,
41 deep violet eyes. More bitter tears spilt down her cheeks as the rain
42 continued to pick up outside.
43 Through her blurry vision, she could see where her phone used to be. They'd
44 taken that, too. Apparently she'd been so 'bad' that she was supposed to
45 think about what she'd done until she agreed with them about how awful she
46 was while staying all alone. With no contact. Especially from her.
47 What was wrong with a kiss? A simple gesture, it could show your love
48 better than any words could ever express. Something only lovers could share,
49 their own little escape from the world, if only for a few all too brief
50 seconds. So what was so inherently evil about her giving a goodbye kiss to
51 the one person she loved so dearly? Apparently, everything. Ikuko had seen
52 it all from the window. As soon as she'd entered, they had sprung upon her
53 like she was a criminal. Ikuko had wanted to know where she had gone wrong.
54 Kenji had just looked disgusted the whole time, anger lashing out at her
55 whenever she would argue her point. Even her mother, the one person who
56 should by all rights care for her when no one else did, agreed with them.
57 She thought she was getting too many ideas from Haruka and Michiru, that
58 maybe Hotaru had gotten twisted around while being raised by them and was
59 now corrupting her. That she needed to figure out what being friends meant
60 and what being lovers meant. She had told her to wait until she was older
61 and find a nice boy to get with and that this would never last. That had
62 finally snapped something inside of her. How dare she tell her that they
63 would never last! How dare she accuse Hotaru of being some delinquent! How
64 could she look her own daughter in the face, through all of the tears, and
65 still tear her heart out?
66 For the past day, everyone in the house was looking at her strangely for
67 the few times she had been allowed out of her room. Ikuko wouldn't even look
68 at her. Usagi kept trying to offer sympathy, even saying they could talk
69 about it if she wanted. Talk about what? But still... She was her mother.
70 That had been a huge mistake. She was wrong. Usagi was certain about that
71 from the outset. It wasn't so they could talk about it, merely so Usagi
72 could explain the way things were supposed to be. The way she was supposed
73 to be. As if she were broken... She'd stormed out of the room, tears
74 brimming in her crimson eyes shortly thereafter.
75 Could she even go home anymore? Was this what was awaiting her back in
76 Crystal Tokyo? What future was awaiting her without Hotaru? What good was a
77 kingdom without the one you love by your side? Her mother there had even
78 more power over her life than these people here. They wouldn't let her see
79 Hotaru because she had kissed her and that was obviously bad. In the future,
80 she could easily be forced to marry someone else. She didn't even know where
81 Hotaru was in the future. No wonder her mother wouldn't tell her. She would
82 only be a shell without her. Living an empty life as a figurehead for the
83 kingdom, but serving her purpose. That wasn't a future at all.
84 Why was she so alone? The people she had thought cared about her wouldn't
85 even listen to her now, determining that she wasn't fit to decide who she
86 loved. And the only person she knew she could trust with all of this was
87 beyond her reach. It wasn't fair. It wasn't.. fair...
88 A yawn escaped her lips as she shifted on the bed. Her head ached horribly
89 from all of her crying. The thunder still had her shaking now and again. Her
90 heart felt icy cold inside. But not beating rapidly the way it had been
91 moments before. An almost slow, soothing beat. She yawned again, her grip
92 starting to loosen on the shawl. So tired... Maybe she would just sleep a
93 little. Maybe things would be better... Her thoughts unfinished, the pink
94 haired girl's eyes slipped shut, the shawl slipping through her fingers and
95 fluttering to the floor.
97 "Sleep well, ChibiUsa-chan. I'll see you soon. I promise," Hotaru said,
98 almost subconsciously as she looked up at the window. She was completely
99 soaked by the rain, her weak body shuddering with chills. A scream came from
100 ChibiUsa's room as Ikuko came in to a morbid discovery. "Sleep well,
101 ChibiUsa-chan." Moments later, the dark haired girl collapsed in the rain.
102 But no one would notice her. No one ever did.