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     1.6 +                      Standard disclaimer:
     1.7 +     See parts I and II for the disclaimer.  You can probably recite
     1.8 +these things by heart now, anyway.
     1.9 +
    1.10 +
    1.11 +                     Sakura Lemon--Part III
    1.12 +                           KaitouAce
    1.13 +
    1.14 +     Tomoyo muttered pathetically as she lay in her bed.  She had
    1.15 +destroyed the most important thing she could ever have: her
    1.16 +friendship with Sakura.  Everything was a haze to Tomoyo, her
    1.17 +vision clouded by pain and tears.  Her head pounded, her heart
    1.18 +ached . . . it was as if Sakura's rejection had made her
    1.19 +physically ill.  All she could hear was Sakura's anger-filled
    1.20 +voice.  And the more she heard it, the sicker she became.  All
    1.21 +she wanted was for the anguish to end.  Sadly, she could only
    1.22 +come to one conclusion.  There was only one definite way to stop
    1.23 +the pain.  The very idea terrified her but Sakura's coldness was
    1.24 +worse.  She stood up, tears pouring down her face, and prepared
    1.25 +for the end.  But as she reached the door, something stopped her.
    1.26 +As much as she knew she didn't deserve it, she couldn't bear to
    1.27 +leave this world without seeing Sakura's smile once more.  And as
    1.28 +she thought about Sakura, she couldn't help but remember their
    1.29 +last, fabulous evening together.  She desperately shook the image
    1.30 +out of her mind.  She wouldn't do that.  She had no right.  Not
    1.31 +after what she did to Sakura.  But her body was in too much need.
    1.32 +She couldn't resist the urge of one final moment of ecstacy.
    1.33 +Tomoyo slowly turned toward her viewing room, disgusted with
    1.34 +herself for not being able to give Sakura the respect she
    1.35 +deserved.  As she headed inside she slowly began to disrobe.  She
    1.36 +took a final breath and began to descend the slope of the
    1.37 +theater-like room.  To her, it felt as if she was entering her
    1.38 +own Dante's Inferno with the trail of clothes the only symbol of
    1.39 +her existence and her only lifeline from eternal damnation.
    1.40 +
    1.41 +
    1.42 +     Sakura sat in her room silently.  She couldn't believe what
    1.43 +she had done.  Tomoyo was gone.  But it had to be.  Tomoyo had
    1.44 +hurt her in a way no one had ever hurt her before.  She deserved
    1.45 +it.  But that didn't make it any less painful.  She felt her eyes
    1.46 +well up again as she fell deeper into sadness.
    1.47 +     "Sakura."
    1.48 +     Sakura jumped when she heard her name.  She turned, trying
    1.49 +to wipe the tears out of her eyes.
    1.50 +     "Sakura, are you all right?"
    1.51 +     She was surprised to see Kero-chan hovering in front of her
    1.52 +with a look of concern on his face.  Sakura quickly tried to come
    1.53 +up with a story to hide her shame.
    1.54 +     "Oh!  Kero-chan!  I'm fine!  Just . . . something in my
    1.55 +eyes."
    1.56 +     Kero-chan sighed and stared at her intently.
    1.57 +     "No need to lie Sakura.  I know what happened.  I was there,
    1.58 +remember?"
    1.59 +     Sakura gasped as she barely recalled when Kero-chan flew to
    1.60 +her that night before Touya came in.  It didn't occur to her that
    1.61 +he had overheard the whole thing.  Sakura started to cry again.
    1.62 +     "Kero-chan, I'm sorry!  I didn't mean to do it!  I . . . "
    1.63 +     "It's ok, Sakura.  Don't apologize.   But I did see Tomoyo
    1.64 +run out of here.  She looked really upset.  What happened?"
    1.65 +     Sakura stuttered, unsure of what to say.  But her silence
    1.66 +confirmed Kero-chan's suspicions.  " . . . It was her, wasn't
    1.67 +it?"
    1.68 +     Sakura's mouth was agape as her shameful secret was
    1.69 +revealed.  She desperately tried to defend herself.
    1.70 +     "It wasn't me!  It was Tomoyo-chan who did this to me!  I
    1.71 +can't help it anymore!  Please let me stay a Card Captor!"
    1.72 +     Kero-chan became more than a little agitated at Sakura's
    1.73 +words.
    1.74 +     "Be quiet, Sakura!"
    1.75 +     Sakura was shocked at Kero-chan's tone and prepared herself
    1.76 +for the worst.
    1.77 +     "You are and will always be a Card Captor.  Nothing can
    1.78 +change your destiny.  Your personal feelings and affiliations are
    1.79 +irrevelant.  If you weren't worthy, you wouldn't have been able
    1.80 +to open the book.  But what MIGHT change you is if you continue
    1.81 +to blame your friend for your mistake."
    1.82 +     Sakura sat quietly, absorbing Kero-chan's words.  Surely
    1.83 +that wasn' t right.  All that pain she went through, all that
    1.84 +suffering . . . Tomoyo was the cause.  She was the one who made
    1.85 +her feel . . . Sakura froze.  As strange a situation as this was,
    1.86 +all Tomoyo did was make her feel good.  Really good.  The pain
    1.87 +came later . . . when Sakura tried to do things herself.  But
    1.88 +Sakura was still confused.
    1.89 +     "It was Tomoyo-chan who made me feel like this.  I couldn't
    1.90 +stop myself . . . myself?"
    1.91 +     The word shook her completely.  Myself.  She couldn't
    1.92 +control HERSELF.  Tomoyo wasn't to blame for that.  And she
    1.93 +didn't know Sakura had hurt herself so the later pain wasn't
    1.94 +really her fault either.  She should  have just told Tomoyo
    1.95 +outright.  Then she would have understood.  Tomoyo was just
    1.96 +trying to help.  She began to feel relieved when her harsh words
    1.97 +came to mind.  Sakura visibly jumped as she realized what she
    1.98 +had done.
    1.99 +     "Oh no!  Kero-chan, I've done a horrible thing!  What do I
   1.100 +do?!"
   1.101 +     Sakura became frantic at the thought of not being friends
   1.102 +with Tomoyo anymore.  Once again, Kero-chan provided a simple
   1.103 +answer.
   1.104 +     "Apologize."
   1.105 +     "But . . . but how?  After what I said . . . "
   1.106 +     Kero-chan thought a bit, then came up with a way.  The only
   1.107 +way really, given the situation.  He blushed slightly as he said
   1.108 +it.
   1.109 +     " . . . Anyway you have to."
   1.110 +     Sakura realized what Kero-chan was suggesting and it
   1.111 +embarrassed her.  She questioned her friend.
   1.112 +     "Is--is that ok?"
   1.113 +     "Only you know the answer to that."
   1.114 +     Sakura slowly smiled and jumped from the bed.  She quickly
   1.115 +dressed and raced out of the house, determined to save her
   1.116 +friendship in any way possible.
   1.117 +
   1.118 +
   1.119 +     "Tomoyo-chan . . . please."
   1.120 +     "Eh?  Please what, Sakura-chan?"
   1.121 +     "Please . . . touch me."
   1.122 +     Tomoyo sat back in a seat, completely nude rubbing herself
   1.123 +frantically while staring at the screen.
   1.124 +     One day.
   1.125 +     It had only been one day ago when they were
   1.126 +inseparable.  Now they were through and all Tomoyo had were
   1.127 +videos.  Tomoyo moaned as she orgasmed once again, the seat's
   1.128 +cushion now completely soaked.  Small drips occassionally fell
   1.129 +from the oversaturated fabric to the floor.  She had come more
   1.130 +times in the past hour than she had her entire young life.  Her
   1.131 +virgin lips were swollen and red.  Everytime she touched herself,
   1.132 +she caused herself pain.  But she didn't care.  Her suffering
   1.133 +paled in comparison to what Sakura must have felt.  Any pain was
   1.134 +well deserved.  She cried desperately to the screen.
   1.135 +     "Oh Sakura-chan!  What did I do?!  Please tell me!!!"
   1.136 +     But all that replied was just more evidence of her guilt as
   1.137 +she sank back in her seat, gingerly touching herself once again.
   1.138 +
   1.139 +     After being let in, Sakura rushed upstairs to Tomoyo's room.
   1.140 +Her mind was agonizing over what to say and do.  Should she just
   1.141 +apologize?  What if Tomoyo didn't accept?  And what about
   1.142 +Kero-chan's suggestion?  Should she actually go through with
   1.143 +that?  Fortunately for Sakura, she stopped thinking long enough
   1.144 +to avoid running into Tomoyo's door.  She knocked but found the
   1.145 +door already open.  She slowly stepped inside, ready to
   1.146 +apologize.  She quietly called for Tomoyo but she didn't appear
   1.147 +to be inside.  Sakura closed the door behind her.  After
   1.148 +searching for a minute, Sakura sat on Tomoyo's bed confused.  She
   1.149 +knew Tomoyo's room was large but it wasn't THAT large.  Sakura
   1.150 +began to whimper, wanting to clear things up as soon as possible.
   1.151 +     "Tomoyo-chan, where ARE you?"
   1.152 +     Just then, Sakura noticed Tomoyo's school shirt on the
   1.153 +floor.  She went to it and saw the skirt a little farther away.
   1.154 +They made a trail toward . . .
   1.155 +     "Her movie room!  I almost forgot!  She must be in there."
   1.156 +     Sakura was relieved that she had found her friend.  But
   1.157 +nothing could have prepared her for the scene she saw when she
   1.158 +entered.
   1.159 +
   1.160 +     Tomoyo was completely lost as she exhausted her mind and
   1.161 +body.  She was totally immersed in a fantasy world.  A world
   1.162 +where she and Sakura were best friends and even lovers.  She
   1.163 +didn't remember anything she was planning on doing or care if
   1.164 +anyone found her.  All that mattered was the smiles on the two
   1.165 +girls faces on the screen.  Just as she was forcing another
   1.166 +orgasm, a giant shadow loomed over the screen.  Tomoyo was
   1.167 +relieved.  Someone had finally found her.  Now her punishment
   1.168 +would be complete.  With luck, they'd yell at her, maybe even
   1.169 +beat her.  And if that wasn't enough, she could always . . .
   1.170 +     "Tomoyo-chan . . . "
   1.171 +     Tomoyo's head whirled around at the sound of the timid
   1.172 +voice.  As ready as she was for any kind of punishment, Tomoyo
   1.173 +couldn't handle Sakura.  She sat motionless in her seat waiting
   1.174 +for Sakura to approach.  But Sakura was frozen in place.  She
   1.175 +couldn't believe what she was seeing.  Her eyes were wide as
   1.176 +saucers as she watched the events of the previous evening play
   1.177 +out literally larger than life.  The clothing she had followed to
   1.178 +find Tomoyo had slowly filtered out of her arms and bundled up
   1.179 +near her feet.  She didn't even notice the door close behind her.
   1.180 +She just stared . . . and felt another powerful explosion
   1.181 +building.  Tomoyo tried to rush to Sakura and explain but her now
   1.182 +sore body protested such quick movements.  She slowly moved up to
   1.183 +Sakura with tears in her eyes and juices running down her leg.
   1.184 +     "Sakura . . . I . . . please listen."
   1.185 +     But Sakura wasn't.  Tomoyo's words faded as she stared at
   1.186 +the screen.  But what Sakura was seeing wasn't sex but love, pure
   1.187 +and unconditional.  As wonderful as the feelings in her body were
   1.188 +then, they were overshadowed by the feelings in her heart.
   1.189 +Tomoyo had gone so far just to please her, and she repaid her
   1.190 +with anger and deceit.  Sakura felt terrible at what she had
   1.191 +driven her friend to.  Her best friend who was . . .
   1.192 +     Sakura's vision now focused on the beautiful young girl
   1.193 +before her.  Her large, now reddish eyes, her long black hair,
   1.194 +pout lips, and pert breasts.  Sakura stared at Tomoyo and came to
   1.195 +a final decision.  The choice she needed and wanted.
   1.196 +     " . . . so please just . . . Sakura-chan?"
   1.197 +     Tomoyo stopped talking when she noticed Sakura's eyes on
   1.198 +her.  She knew she was naked but Sakura's intense stare
   1.199 +embarrassed her.  She started to reach for the clothing Sakura
   1.200 +dropped on the floor but Sakura gingerly pushed her back.  Tomoyo
   1.201 +was surprised and a little angry.  She may have been at fault but
   1.202 +she didn't need her shame to be prolonged any longer.  She just
   1.203 +needed her final punishment.  She looked sternly at Sakura but
   1.204 +received no reaction.  It was almost as if she were in a trance.
   1.205 +Tomoyo started to question Sakura but was stopped short as Sakura
   1.206 +quickly closed the distance between them.
   1.207 +     "Sakura-chan?"
   1.208 +     But Sakura continued to invade Tomoyo's personal space until
   1.209 +her entire body was touching Tomoyo, her clothing brushing
   1.210 +lightly against Tomoyo's nude form.  Sakura slowly moved her head
   1.211 +to Tomoyo's ear and whispered, breaking her silence.
   1.212 +     "You won't need those."
   1.213 +     Tomoyo was shocked by Sakura's remark as she staggered back
   1.214 +a bit, almost tumbling over.  She tried to compose herself but
   1.215 +Sakura was once again upon her, her eyes piercing Tomoyo's soul.
   1.216 +Sakura slowly took both her hands and held Tomoyo's head,
   1.217 +caressing her face and cheeks softly.  Tomoyo was terribly
   1.218 +confused and desperately in need of an answer to this situation.
   1.219 +But before she could ask, Sakura answered her without question as
   1.220 +she quickly darted forward and kissed Tomoyo strongly.
   1.221 +Unprepared, Tomoyo managed to break free and catch her breath.
   1.222 +She finally managed to ask her question.
   1.223 +     "S-Sakura-chan?  What are you doing?  What--what do you
   1.224 +want?"
   1.225 +     Sakura thought about all that had happened to the two of
   1.226 +them over the past 24 hours and about the apology she wanted to
   1.227 +give.  But at this moment, all that was secondary.  She answered
   1.228 +Tomoyo with the last word she would say until it was over.
   1.229 +     "You."
   1.230 +     Tomoyo immediately understood and was overjoyed.  By some
   1.231 +miracle, she had been forgiven.  She was about to run into
   1.232 +Sakura's arms but before she knew it she was already there,
   1.233 +Sakura closing the gap herself.  She stared once again into
   1.234 +Sakura's eyes which were loudly speaking her intentions.  She
   1.235 +slowly moved her head forward as Sakura did the same.  The two
   1.236 +met in a beautiful display of passion.  After a moment, Tomoyo
   1.237 +once again reluctantly broke their kiss.  She tugged Sakura
   1.238 +slightly, urging her back to her room.  However, Sakura didn't
   1.239 +budge.  She just looked at Tomoyo with the same wild eyes as
   1.240 +before.
   1.241 +     "Let's go back to my room, Sakura-chan."
   1.242 +     But Sakura answered Tomoyo by lightly carressing her small
   1.243 +breasts, pinching her right nipple.
   1.244 +     "Ahh!  Sakura-chan?  I . . . ohh . . . !  We can't!  Not
   1.245 +in . . . mmmmm!"
   1.246 +     Tomoyo ceased her objection as she was silenced by another
   1.247 +kiss from Sakura.  Whatever she had planned, it would take place
   1.248 +right then and there.  Tomoyo grudgingly agreed and began to lift
   1.249 +Sakura's shirt off her body.  But before she could, Sakura
   1.250 +grabbed Tomoyo's wrists and hauled her shirt back down.
   1.251 +     "S . . . Sakura-chan?"
   1.252 +     Sakura was determined to pay Tomoyo back for her friendship.
   1.253 +Prolonging Tomoyo's wait with her own wants would just be in the
   1.254 +way.  Sakura felt responsible for Tomoyo's sadness and was
   1.255 +planning on giving her something she'd remember her entire life.
   1.256 +Sakura wasn't concerned about herself.  This was Tomoyo's time.
   1.257 +Sakura wrapped her left arm around Tomoyo and proceeded to kiss
   1.258 +her neck, smiling as she heard her friend coo softly.  She then
   1.259 +caressed the inside of Tomoyo's thigh, getting her hand sticky
   1.260 +with Tomoyo's juices.  Sakura brought her hand up to her mouth
   1.261 +and tasted it, much to Tomoyo's surprise.
   1.262 +     She stared as she watched Sakura's tongue slowly twist and
   1.263 +squirm around her fingers, tasting Tomoyo with a look of hunger.
   1.264 +Tomoyo started getting excited at this display as she felt a new
   1.265 +trail slowly trickle down her leg.  Noticing this, Sakura smiled
   1.266 +and started to rub Tomoyo's thin slit directly.  But Tomoyo's
   1.267 +previous self-abuse proved to be too harsh as she winced at the
   1.268 +slight pain.  Sakura saw her expression and knew what was wrong.
   1.269 +She recalled the pain well.  Sakura closed her eyes in
   1.270 +contemplation.  Tomoyo looked at her in confusion and a bit of
   1.271 +sadness as well, feeling that she was hindering Sakura from even
   1.272 +giving her pleasure.  But after a moment, Sakura opened her eyes
   1.273 +and smiled.  Tomoyo was confused but soon didn't care as Sakura
   1.274 +slowly licked her throat.  Her tongue traveled down to Tomoyo's
   1.275 +left breast where she began to lick and suck at Tomoyo's erect
   1.276 +nipple.  Tomoyo squealed in delight as she grasped Sakura's head,
   1.277 +holding it to her chest.  But much to her dismay, Sakura soon
   1.278 +stopped this action and stared into her eyes.  Sakura then
   1.279 +enveloped Tomoyo in her arms and slowly slinked her way around
   1.280 +her body.  Tomoyo closed her eyes and purred at the feeling of
   1.281 +the soft cloth rubbing against her body.  But she didn't notice
   1.282 +Sakura snake her way down her body until she was on her knees.
   1.283 +Sakura smiled at the sight before her and began to lightly trace
   1.284 +a fingernail along Tomoyo's inner thigh.  Tomoyo opened her eyes
   1.285 +and was surprised to not see Sakura.  Suddenly she felt something
   1.286 +warm and damp on her leg.  She looked down in shock as Sakura was
   1.287 +slowly slurping up the many trails of juice along her legs.  She
   1.288 +stared timidly as Sakura's increasingly messy face followed the
   1.289 +tiny rivers of passion, eventually reaching their source.
   1.290 +     Sakura stared at Tomoyo's flower, shining faintly in the
   1.291 +semi-dark room.  She approached it cautiously, inhaling the aroma
   1.292 +her frend was giving off.  Tomoyo was fairly frightened, knees
   1.293 +visibly shaking as she awaited the inevitable contact.  Sakura
   1.294 +pressed her face into Tomoyo's crotch, nuzzling her nether region
   1.295 +while making herself even more messy.  Tomoyo caught moans under
   1.296 +her breath as she slowly began to rock her hips, pushing herself
   1.297 +into her friend.  Sakura rubbed her face and cheeks into Tomoyo's
   1.298 +crotch, feeling her friend's warmth as it spread across her face.
   1.299 +She pulled away slowly, watching as a few sticky strands
   1.300 +stretched from her face to Tomoyo before lightly breaking in the
   1.301 +air.  Sakura looked lovingly at Tomoyo's pussy, lips slightly
   1.302 +swollen from before.  Sakura raised her hands to it, parting it
   1.303 +slightly with both thumbs.  She looked at the sensitive organ and
   1.304 +blew on it gently.  Tomoyo squealed at the cold intrusion.
   1.305 +Sakura then lightly kissed it, pecking it in various places.
   1.306 +Tomoyo was more than ready for Sakura to start but she continued
   1.307 +toying with her.  Tomoyo began whimpering awaiting release and
   1.308 +Sakura smiled inwardly, remembering how Tomoyo made her
   1.309 +practically beg for contact before.  She felt Tomoyo push the
   1.310 +back of her head with her hands and decided not to make her wait
   1.311 +any longer.  Sakura slowly extended her tongue and laid it at the
   1.312 +bottom of Tomoyo's pussy.  She wiggled it briefly making Tomoyo
   1.313 +squirm before making one broad stroke from the bottom of Tomoyo's
   1.314 +slit to the top.
   1.315 +     " . . . OOOOOOHHHH!!!!!"
   1.316 +     With that sound, Sakura began licking at Tomoyo in earnest.
   1.317 +Tomoyo shuddered with passion as she drove Sakura's head into her
   1.318 +crotch, trying to increase her pleasure as much as possible.  For
   1.319 +her, this was like a dream come true.  There was nothing but
   1.320 +them.  She ran her fingers through Sakura's hair as she bucked
   1.321 +her hips into Sakura's face.  Sakura's head was swimming with the
   1.322 +aroma of her friend.  She increased her licking at a frenzied
   1.323 +pace.  She was caught in a cycle.  The faster she went, the
   1.324 +stronger the aroma and the stronger the smell, the faster she
   1.325 +went.  Sakura thrust her tongue deep into Tomoyo, causing her
   1.326 +legs to buckle and body to shake.  Sakura had noticed a small nub
   1.327 +at the upper part of Tomoyo's slit that was barely visible.
   1.328 +Whenever she touched it, Tomoyo's pleasure seemed to increase.
   1.329 +She began focusing on that area and Tomoyo grabbed Sakura's head
   1.330 +with both hands, confirming her discovery.  Tomoyo began flowing
   1.331 +stronger than before and Sakura savored every drop.  Tomoyo began
   1.332 +panting and moaning at a increasing pace and Sakura knew she was
   1.333 +ready.  Sakura's hands slowly moved up Tomoyo's legs until they
   1.334 +reached her rear.  Sakura rubbed it softly with both hands
   1.335 +causing more squirming from Tomoyo.  Suddenly, without warning,
   1.336 +Sakura gripped Tomoyo firmly, forcing her hips into her face.
   1.337 +Using this leverage, Sakura thrust her tongue as far inside
   1.338 +Tomoyo as possible while sucking her lower lips as hard as she
   1.339 +could.
   1.340 +     Tomoyo froze, feeling the soft intruder penetrate farther
   1.341 +than she thought possible.  There was a moment of silence as
   1.342 +Sakura held Tomoyo in place.  Then Tomoyo exploded in a literal
   1.343 +flood of ecstasy, soaking Sakura's cute face as she yelled for
   1.344 +her friend at the top of her lungs.
   1.345 +
   1.346 +
   1.347 +     Tomoyo awoke in her room.  It took a second to remember what
   1.348 +happened.  She tried to move but her body refused, too exhausted
   1.349 +to comply.  She stared outward but didn't see Sakura.  She tried
   1.350 +to look around but was still too weak.  Wondering how she reached
   1.351 +her bed, she suddenly had a terrible thought.  Maybe it was all
   1.352 +just a hallucination.  A final grasp at redemption.  She called
   1.353 +for Sakura, her voice shaking and becoming frantic.
   1.354 +     "Sakura-chan . . . Sakura-chan!  Where are you?!
   1.355 +Sakura . . . "
   1.356 +     "I'm here."
   1.357 +     Tomoyo forced herself to jerk around to see Sakura sitting
   1.358 +slightly behind her.
   1.359 +     "Sakura-chan."
   1.360 +     Tomoyo was obviously relieved as she fell backwards, her
   1.361 +head resting in Sakura's lap.  Sakura proceeded to run her
   1.362 +fingers through Tomoyo's hair.
   1.363 +     "Sakura-chan . . . that was wonderful.  But . . . are you
   1.364 +okay with all this?"
   1.365 +     Sakura shook her head and smiled at her friend.
   1.366 +     "Yeah.  I'm really sorry about what I said.  You were just
   1.367 +trying to do what you thought was right.  I just took it too far
   1.368 +without understanding.  I should have talked to you first."
   1.369 +     Tomoyo flushed slightly at the remark.
   1.370 +     "Well . . . it's not like I know everything about this.  I'm
   1.371 +fairly new to this as well.  I don't know much more than you.  I
   1.372 +wanted to ask but was afraid of peoples reactions."
   1.373 +     "I know what you mean.  So what do we do?"
   1.374 +     Tomoyo closed her eyes in thought, then spoke.
   1.375 +     "Keep living, I suppose."
   1.376 +     Sakura realized that was really all either of them could do.
   1.377 +Being discovered may be a problem but that shouldn't affect their
   1.378 +relationship.  The important thing was that she and Tomoyo were
   1.379 +together.  She held Tomoyo's hand as she stared down at her
   1.380 +newfound lover.  No matter what happened from now on, they would
   1.381 +face it as friends.
   1.382 +
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   1.385 +     END . . . . . . for now.
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   1.395 +
   1.396 +     Well, that's the end of my first fanfic.  Hope everyone
   1.397 +liked reading it as much I liked writing it.  Well, the first
   1.398 +time anyway.  Typing hunched over a keyboard for hours sucks.
   1.399 +     I'd rather just have a pencil.
   1.400 +     Any comments, criticitsms, etc. can be made to
   1.401 +kaitouace@hotmail.com.  With the exception of pointless flames,
   1.402 +I'll ALWAYS write back if you like.
   1.403 +
   1.404 +Upcoming stories:
   1.405 +Tenchi/Sasami----MY version
   1.406 +Chibiusa/Usagi
   1.407 +
   1.408 +Later stuff:
   1.409 +Chibiusa/Hotaru
   1.410 +Sasami/Misao (Pretty Sammy TV)
   1.411 +Second Card Captor Sakura Trilogy (Li and Mei Lin mostly)
   1.412 +Utena/Anthy?
   1.413 +ChaCha story?
   1.414 +Chibiusa/Helios?
   1.415 +
   1.416 +     If you're wondering why all these stories have young
   1.417 +characters, keep reading.
   1.418 +     If anyone's still here after the show, I'd like to explain
   1.419 +the method to my madness.
   1.420 +     I'm one of the guys everyone hates.  I'm a constant lurker,
   1.421 +don't sign any guestbooks (usually), and only expect to find
   1.422 +totally free hentai on the net.  But besides all that, I think
   1.423 +there are certain people who get bad reps.  Everywhere I go, even
   1.424 +among hentai guys, people who look at fics like these are
   1.425 +considered scum or losers at best.  Pedophiles at worst . . . or
   1.426 +is that the same thing?  Anyhow, I don't particularly think
   1.427 +that's fair.  First of all, good writing is good writing.  I'd
   1.428 +rather read a good Sasami story than a crappy Ryoko story.
   1.429 +That's what I'm trying to do.  I'm not much on lots of foul
   1.430 +language and dirty slang.  Not that I'm putting that down, I just
   1.431 +can't write that way.  I've been told I'm a bit of a romantic and
   1.432 +that shows in most of my writing.  What I see a LOT of is bad
   1.433 +writing with young characters, which makes it just that much
   1.434 +harder for guys like me.  I'm trying to write some decent stories
   1.435 +with young characters so maybe we can get a LITTLE more respect.
   1.436 +I won't name names but some of the stuff is ridiculous enough
   1.437 +without it happening to 10 year olds.
   1.438 +     Which brings me to my next point.  I'm trying to be more
   1.439 +realistic as well.  First times involve pain.  Especially if it
   1.440 +were to happen then.  I want my stories to convey more physical
   1.441 +and mental realism.  Not EVERY girl in the world who has sex
   1.442 +enjoys it or if they do, may feel bad afterwards depending on the
   1.443 +situation.  I want more realism, plain and simple.  Not 8 year
   1.444 +olds with older guys up their butts with carrots AND animals in
   1.445 +their pussy . . . oops--said too much.
   1.446 +     Third, I LIKE little girls!  Let's face it.  The Japanese
   1.447 +culture isn't exactly against this type of thinking.  In most
   1.448 +shows out there, the "little girl" is usually the most likable of
   1.449 +the cast and there is always a little overshadowing to the
   1.450 +concept of them with the main character or some other guy.
   1.451 +Chibi-Usa and Mamoru, Sasami-chan and Tenchi, the list goes on.
   1.452 +Just look at the RIDICULOUS amount of Ruri Hoshino merchandise.
   1.453 +She's not the ONLY female on Nadesico, you know.
   1.454 +     Finally, anime age is NOT a fact, it's a suggestion.  To be
   1.455 +totally honest, ALL anime females look at least 2 years older
   1.456 +than their actual age.  Sailor Moon starts off at 14.  I can
   1.457 +BARELY see that.  I never bought Sasami being 8 as far as age
   1.458 +goes.  I have 8 year old cousins that don't look close to
   1.459 +whatever age she's supposed to be.  Plus the, younger characters
   1.460 +are almost ALWAYS the smartest or wisest characters.  Look at
   1.461 +Sasami and to a lesser extent, Washu.  It's like a trap, I tell
   1.462 +you!
   1.463 +     I also look at Sakura Lemon and see what's missing.  That
   1.464 +also is part of my reason for picking what I do.  Card Captor
   1.465 +Sakura is that popular and only ONE fic . . . not if I have
   1.466 +anything to say about it.
   1.467 +     But besides all this, just do your own thing.  I own TONS of
   1.468 +this stuff.  Little girls, big girls, mean girls, sweet girls,
   1.469 +whatever.  I don't put down ANYBODY'S stuff.  I have preferences
   1.470 +like anyone else but I can read them all . . . well, most of
   1.471 +them.  The most important thing to remember is: IT'S NOT REAL!
   1.472 +It's anime.  I dread the thought of anyone reading my fic and
   1.473 +molesting an elementary school girl.  Let's all just keep it in
   1.474 +our pants and agree to disagree.  I'll head to that cool Sasami
   1.475 +story and you can go to that Sailor Moon being raped by tentacles
   1.476 +and killed story.  Whatever floats your boat.
   1.477 +     I'm ALWAYS up for conversation too.  Annybody want to talk,
   1.478 +my address is kaitouace@hotmail.com.  Anyone agree, disagree,
   1.479 +want to ask me something, comment on my stories,or anything,
   1.480 +please do.  I'll ignore flames of course. I get that from my own
   1.481 +family.  But any actual critism will be commented on.  I'm still
   1.482 +worried about my writing.
   1.483 +
   1.484 +     That's it.  Sorry for babbling so long.  If you're still
   1.485 +here, that is.
   1.486 +