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3 Standard disclaimer:
4 See parts I and II for the disclaimer. You can probably recite
5 these things by heart now, anyway.
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8 Sakura Lemon--Part III
9 KaitouAce
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11 Tomoyo muttered pathetically as she lay in her bed. She had
12 destroyed the most important thing she could ever have: her
13 friendship with Sakura. Everything was a haze to Tomoyo, her
14 vision clouded by pain and tears. Her head pounded, her heart
15 ached . . . it was as if Sakura's rejection had made her
16 physically ill. All she could hear was Sakura's anger-filled
17 voice. And the more she heard it, the sicker she became. All
18 she wanted was for the anguish to end. Sadly, she could only
19 come to one conclusion. There was only one definite way to stop
20 the pain. The very idea terrified her but Sakura's coldness was
21 worse. She stood up, tears pouring down her face, and prepared
22 for the end. But as she reached the door, something stopped her.
23 As much as she knew she didn't deserve it, she couldn't bear to
24 leave this world without seeing Sakura's smile once more. And as
25 she thought about Sakura, she couldn't help but remember their
26 last, fabulous evening together. She desperately shook the image
27 out of her mind. She wouldn't do that. She had no right. Not
28 after what she did to Sakura. But her body was in too much need.
29 She couldn't resist the urge of one final moment of ecstacy.
30 Tomoyo slowly turned toward her viewing room, disgusted with
31 herself for not being able to give Sakura the respect she
32 deserved. As she headed inside she slowly began to disrobe. She
33 took a final breath and began to descend the slope of the
34 theater-like room. To her, it felt as if she was entering her
35 own Dante's Inferno with the trail of clothes the only symbol of
36 her existence and her only lifeline from eternal damnation.
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39 Sakura sat in her room silently. She couldn't believe what
40 she had done. Tomoyo was gone. But it had to be. Tomoyo had
41 hurt her in a way no one had ever hurt her before. She deserved
42 it. But that didn't make it any less painful. She felt her eyes
43 well up again as she fell deeper into sadness.
44 "Sakura."
45 Sakura jumped when she heard her name. She turned, trying
46 to wipe the tears out of her eyes.
47 "Sakura, are you all right?"
48 She was surprised to see Kero-chan hovering in front of her
49 with a look of concern on his face. Sakura quickly tried to come
50 up with a story to hide her shame.
51 "Oh! Kero-chan! I'm fine! Just . . . something in my
52 eyes."
53 Kero-chan sighed and stared at her intently.
54 "No need to lie Sakura. I know what happened. I was there,
55 remember?"
56 Sakura gasped as she barely recalled when Kero-chan flew to
57 her that night before Touya came in. It didn't occur to her that
58 he had overheard the whole thing. Sakura started to cry again.
59 "Kero-chan, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to do it! I . . . "
60 "It's ok, Sakura. Don't apologize. But I did see Tomoyo
61 run out of here. She looked really upset. What happened?"
62 Sakura stuttered, unsure of what to say. But her silence
63 confirmed Kero-chan's suspicions. " . . . It was her, wasn't
64 it?"
65 Sakura's mouth was agape as her shameful secret was
66 revealed. She desperately tried to defend herself.
67 "It wasn't me! It was Tomoyo-chan who did this to me! I
68 can't help it anymore! Please let me stay a Card Captor!"
69 Kero-chan became more than a little agitated at Sakura's
70 words.
71 "Be quiet, Sakura!"
72 Sakura was shocked at Kero-chan's tone and prepared herself
73 for the worst.
74 "You are and will always be a Card Captor. Nothing can
75 change your destiny. Your personal feelings and affiliations are
76 irrevelant. If you weren't worthy, you wouldn't have been able
77 to open the book. But what MIGHT change you is if you continue
78 to blame your friend for your mistake."
79 Sakura sat quietly, absorbing Kero-chan's words. Surely
80 that wasn' t right. All that pain she went through, all that
81 suffering . . . Tomoyo was the cause. She was the one who made
82 her feel . . . Sakura froze. As strange a situation as this was,
83 all Tomoyo did was make her feel good. Really good. The pain
84 came later . . . when Sakura tried to do things herself. But
85 Sakura was still confused.
86 "It was Tomoyo-chan who made me feel like this. I couldn't
87 stop myself . . . myself?"
88 The word shook her completely. Myself. She couldn't
89 control HERSELF. Tomoyo wasn't to blame for that. And she
90 didn't know Sakura had hurt herself so the later pain wasn't
91 really her fault either. She should have just told Tomoyo
92 outright. Then she would have understood. Tomoyo was just
93 trying to help. She began to feel relieved when her harsh words
94 came to mind. Sakura visibly jumped as she realized what she
95 had done.
96 "Oh no! Kero-chan, I've done a horrible thing! What do I
97 do?!"
98 Sakura became frantic at the thought of not being friends
99 with Tomoyo anymore. Once again, Kero-chan provided a simple
100 answer.
101 "Apologize."
102 "But . . . but how? After what I said . . . "
103 Kero-chan thought a bit, then came up with a way. The only
104 way really, given the situation. He blushed slightly as he said
105 it.
106 " . . . Anyway you have to."
107 Sakura realized what Kero-chan was suggesting and it
108 embarrassed her. She questioned her friend.
109 "Is--is that ok?"
110 "Only you know the answer to that."
111 Sakura slowly smiled and jumped from the bed. She quickly
112 dressed and raced out of the house, determined to save her
113 friendship in any way possible.
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116 "Tomoyo-chan . . . please."
117 "Eh? Please what, Sakura-chan?"
118 "Please . . . touch me."
119 Tomoyo sat back in a seat, completely nude rubbing herself
120 frantically while staring at the screen.
121 One day.
122 It had only been one day ago when they were
123 inseparable. Now they were through and all Tomoyo had were
124 videos. Tomoyo moaned as she orgasmed once again, the seat's
125 cushion now completely soaked. Small drips occassionally fell
126 from the oversaturated fabric to the floor. She had come more
127 times in the past hour than she had her entire young life. Her
128 virgin lips were swollen and red. Everytime she touched herself,
129 she caused herself pain. But she didn't care. Her suffering
130 paled in comparison to what Sakura must have felt. Any pain was
131 well deserved. She cried desperately to the screen.
132 "Oh Sakura-chan! What did I do?! Please tell me!!!"
133 But all that replied was just more evidence of her guilt as
134 she sank back in her seat, gingerly touching herself once again.
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136 After being let in, Sakura rushed upstairs to Tomoyo's room.
137 Her mind was agonizing over what to say and do. Should she just
138 apologize? What if Tomoyo didn't accept? And what about
139 Kero-chan's suggestion? Should she actually go through with
140 that? Fortunately for Sakura, she stopped thinking long enough
141 to avoid running into Tomoyo's door. She knocked but found the
142 door already open. She slowly stepped inside, ready to
143 apologize. She quietly called for Tomoyo but she didn't appear
144 to be inside. Sakura closed the door behind her. After
145 searching for a minute, Sakura sat on Tomoyo's bed confused. She
146 knew Tomoyo's room was large but it wasn't THAT large. Sakura
147 began to whimper, wanting to clear things up as soon as possible.
148 "Tomoyo-chan, where ARE you?"
149 Just then, Sakura noticed Tomoyo's school shirt on the
150 floor. She went to it and saw the skirt a little farther away.
151 They made a trail toward . . .
152 "Her movie room! I almost forgot! She must be in there."
153 Sakura was relieved that she had found her friend. But
154 nothing could have prepared her for the scene she saw when she
155 entered.
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157 Tomoyo was completely lost as she exhausted her mind and
158 body. She was totally immersed in a fantasy world. A world
159 where she and Sakura were best friends and even lovers. She
160 didn't remember anything she was planning on doing or care if
161 anyone found her. All that mattered was the smiles on the two
162 girls faces on the screen. Just as she was forcing another
163 orgasm, a giant shadow loomed over the screen. Tomoyo was
164 relieved. Someone had finally found her. Now her punishment
165 would be complete. With luck, they'd yell at her, maybe even
166 beat her. And if that wasn't enough, she could always . . .
167 "Tomoyo-chan . . . "
168 Tomoyo's head whirled around at the sound of the timid
169 voice. As ready as she was for any kind of punishment, Tomoyo
170 couldn't handle Sakura. She sat motionless in her seat waiting
171 for Sakura to approach. But Sakura was frozen in place. She
172 couldn't believe what she was seeing. Her eyes were wide as
173 saucers as she watched the events of the previous evening play
174 out literally larger than life. The clothing she had followed to
175 find Tomoyo had slowly filtered out of her arms and bundled up
176 near her feet. She didn't even notice the door close behind her.
177 She just stared . . . and felt another powerful explosion
178 building. Tomoyo tried to rush to Sakura and explain but her now
179 sore body protested such quick movements. She slowly moved up to
180 Sakura with tears in her eyes and juices running down her leg.
181 "Sakura . . . I . . . please listen."
182 But Sakura wasn't. Tomoyo's words faded as she stared at
183 the screen. But what Sakura was seeing wasn't sex but love, pure
184 and unconditional. As wonderful as the feelings in her body were
185 then, they were overshadowed by the feelings in her heart.
186 Tomoyo had gone so far just to please her, and she repaid her
187 with anger and deceit. Sakura felt terrible at what she had
188 driven her friend to. Her best friend who was . . .
189 Sakura's vision now focused on the beautiful young girl
190 before her. Her large, now reddish eyes, her long black hair,
191 pout lips, and pert breasts. Sakura stared at Tomoyo and came to
192 a final decision. The choice she needed and wanted.
193 " . . . so please just . . . Sakura-chan?"
194 Tomoyo stopped talking when she noticed Sakura's eyes on
195 her. She knew she was naked but Sakura's intense stare
196 embarrassed her. She started to reach for the clothing Sakura
197 dropped on the floor but Sakura gingerly pushed her back. Tomoyo
198 was surprised and a little angry. She may have been at fault but
199 she didn't need her shame to be prolonged any longer. She just
200 needed her final punishment. She looked sternly at Sakura but
201 received no reaction. It was almost as if she were in a trance.
202 Tomoyo started to question Sakura but was stopped short as Sakura
203 quickly closed the distance between them.
204 "Sakura-chan?"
205 But Sakura continued to invade Tomoyo's personal space until
206 her entire body was touching Tomoyo, her clothing brushing
207 lightly against Tomoyo's nude form. Sakura slowly moved her head
208 to Tomoyo's ear and whispered, breaking her silence.
209 "You won't need those."
210 Tomoyo was shocked by Sakura's remark as she staggered back
211 a bit, almost tumbling over. She tried to compose herself but
212 Sakura was once again upon her, her eyes piercing Tomoyo's soul.
213 Sakura slowly took both her hands and held Tomoyo's head,
214 caressing her face and cheeks softly. Tomoyo was terribly
215 confused and desperately in need of an answer to this situation.
216 But before she could ask, Sakura answered her without question as
217 she quickly darted forward and kissed Tomoyo strongly.
218 Unprepared, Tomoyo managed to break free and catch her breath.
219 She finally managed to ask her question.
220 "S-Sakura-chan? What are you doing? What--what do you
221 want?"
222 Sakura thought about all that had happened to the two of
223 them over the past 24 hours and about the apology she wanted to
224 give. But at this moment, all that was secondary. She answered
225 Tomoyo with the last word she would say until it was over.
226 "You."
227 Tomoyo immediately understood and was overjoyed. By some
228 miracle, she had been forgiven. She was about to run into
229 Sakura's arms but before she knew it she was already there,
230 Sakura closing the gap herself. She stared once again into
231 Sakura's eyes which were loudly speaking her intentions. She
232 slowly moved her head forward as Sakura did the same. The two
233 met in a beautiful display of passion. After a moment, Tomoyo
234 once again reluctantly broke their kiss. She tugged Sakura
235 slightly, urging her back to her room. However, Sakura didn't
236 budge. She just looked at Tomoyo with the same wild eyes as
237 before.
238 "Let's go back to my room, Sakura-chan."
239 But Sakura answered Tomoyo by lightly carressing her small
240 breasts, pinching her right nipple.
241 "Ahh! Sakura-chan? I . . . ohh . . . ! We can't! Not
242 in . . . mmmmm!"
243 Tomoyo ceased her objection as she was silenced by another
244 kiss from Sakura. Whatever she had planned, it would take place
245 right then and there. Tomoyo grudgingly agreed and began to lift
246 Sakura's shirt off her body. But before she could, Sakura
247 grabbed Tomoyo's wrists and hauled her shirt back down.
248 "S . . . Sakura-chan?"
249 Sakura was determined to pay Tomoyo back for her friendship.
250 Prolonging Tomoyo's wait with her own wants would just be in the
251 way. Sakura felt responsible for Tomoyo's sadness and was
252 planning on giving her something she'd remember her entire life.
253 Sakura wasn't concerned about herself. This was Tomoyo's time.
254 Sakura wrapped her left arm around Tomoyo and proceeded to kiss
255 her neck, smiling as she heard her friend coo softly. She then
256 caressed the inside of Tomoyo's thigh, getting her hand sticky
257 with Tomoyo's juices. Sakura brought her hand up to her mouth
258 and tasted it, much to Tomoyo's surprise.
259 She stared as she watched Sakura's tongue slowly twist and
260 squirm around her fingers, tasting Tomoyo with a look of hunger.
261 Tomoyo started getting excited at this display as she felt a new
262 trail slowly trickle down her leg. Noticing this, Sakura smiled
263 and started to rub Tomoyo's thin slit directly. But Tomoyo's
264 previous self-abuse proved to be too harsh as she winced at the
265 slight pain. Sakura saw her expression and knew what was wrong.
266 She recalled the pain well. Sakura closed her eyes in
267 contemplation. Tomoyo looked at her in confusion and a bit of
268 sadness as well, feeling that she was hindering Sakura from even
269 giving her pleasure. But after a moment, Sakura opened her eyes
270 and smiled. Tomoyo was confused but soon didn't care as Sakura
271 slowly licked her throat. Her tongue traveled down to Tomoyo's
272 left breast where she began to lick and suck at Tomoyo's erect
273 nipple. Tomoyo squealed in delight as she grasped Sakura's head,
274 holding it to her chest. But much to her dismay, Sakura soon
275 stopped this action and stared into her eyes. Sakura then
276 enveloped Tomoyo in her arms and slowly slinked her way around
277 her body. Tomoyo closed her eyes and purred at the feeling of
278 the soft cloth rubbing against her body. But she didn't notice
279 Sakura snake her way down her body until she was on her knees.
280 Sakura smiled at the sight before her and began to lightly trace
281 a fingernail along Tomoyo's inner thigh. Tomoyo opened her eyes
282 and was surprised to not see Sakura. Suddenly she felt something
283 warm and damp on her leg. She looked down in shock as Sakura was
284 slowly slurping up the many trails of juice along her legs. She
285 stared timidly as Sakura's increasingly messy face followed the
286 tiny rivers of passion, eventually reaching their source.
287 Sakura stared at Tomoyo's flower, shining faintly in the
288 semi-dark room. She approached it cautiously, inhaling the aroma
289 her frend was giving off. Tomoyo was fairly frightened, knees
290 visibly shaking as she awaited the inevitable contact. Sakura
291 pressed her face into Tomoyo's crotch, nuzzling her nether region
292 while making herself even more messy. Tomoyo caught moans under
293 her breath as she slowly began to rock her hips, pushing herself
294 into her friend. Sakura rubbed her face and cheeks into Tomoyo's
295 crotch, feeling her friend's warmth as it spread across her face.
296 She pulled away slowly, watching as a few sticky strands
297 stretched from her face to Tomoyo before lightly breaking in the
298 air. Sakura looked lovingly at Tomoyo's pussy, lips slightly
299 swollen from before. Sakura raised her hands to it, parting it
300 slightly with both thumbs. She looked at the sensitive organ and
301 blew on it gently. Tomoyo squealed at the cold intrusion.
302 Sakura then lightly kissed it, pecking it in various places.
303 Tomoyo was more than ready for Sakura to start but she continued
304 toying with her. Tomoyo began whimpering awaiting release and
305 Sakura smiled inwardly, remembering how Tomoyo made her
306 practically beg for contact before. She felt Tomoyo push the
307 back of her head with her hands and decided not to make her wait
308 any longer. Sakura slowly extended her tongue and laid it at the
309 bottom of Tomoyo's pussy. She wiggled it briefly making Tomoyo
310 squirm before making one broad stroke from the bottom of Tomoyo's
311 slit to the top.
312 " . . . OOOOOOHHHH!!!!!"
313 With that sound, Sakura began licking at Tomoyo in earnest.
314 Tomoyo shuddered with passion as she drove Sakura's head into her
315 crotch, trying to increase her pleasure as much as possible. For
316 her, this was like a dream come true. There was nothing but
317 them. She ran her fingers through Sakura's hair as she bucked
318 her hips into Sakura's face. Sakura's head was swimming with the
319 aroma of her friend. She increased her licking at a frenzied
320 pace. She was caught in a cycle. The faster she went, the
321 stronger the aroma and the stronger the smell, the faster she
322 went. Sakura thrust her tongue deep into Tomoyo, causing her
323 legs to buckle and body to shake. Sakura had noticed a small nub
324 at the upper part of Tomoyo's slit that was barely visible.
325 Whenever she touched it, Tomoyo's pleasure seemed to increase.
326 She began focusing on that area and Tomoyo grabbed Sakura's head
327 with both hands, confirming her discovery. Tomoyo began flowing
328 stronger than before and Sakura savored every drop. Tomoyo began
329 panting and moaning at a increasing pace and Sakura knew she was
330 ready. Sakura's hands slowly moved up Tomoyo's legs until they
331 reached her rear. Sakura rubbed it softly with both hands
332 causing more squirming from Tomoyo. Suddenly, without warning,
333 Sakura gripped Tomoyo firmly, forcing her hips into her face.
334 Using this leverage, Sakura thrust her tongue as far inside
335 Tomoyo as possible while sucking her lower lips as hard as she
336 could.
337 Tomoyo froze, feeling the soft intruder penetrate farther
338 than she thought possible. There was a moment of silence as
339 Sakura held Tomoyo in place. Then Tomoyo exploded in a literal
340 flood of ecstasy, soaking Sakura's cute face as she yelled for
341 her friend at the top of her lungs.
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344 Tomoyo awoke in her room. It took a second to remember what
345 happened. She tried to move but her body refused, too exhausted
346 to comply. She stared outward but didn't see Sakura. She tried
347 to look around but was still too weak. Wondering how she reached
348 her bed, she suddenly had a terrible thought. Maybe it was all
349 just a hallucination. A final grasp at redemption. She called
350 for Sakura, her voice shaking and becoming frantic.
351 "Sakura-chan . . . Sakura-chan! Where are you?!
352 Sakura . . . "
353 "I'm here."
354 Tomoyo forced herself to jerk around to see Sakura sitting
355 slightly behind her.
356 "Sakura-chan."
357 Tomoyo was obviously relieved as she fell backwards, her
358 head resting in Sakura's lap. Sakura proceeded to run her
359 fingers through Tomoyo's hair.
360 "Sakura-chan . . . that was wonderful. But . . . are you
361 okay with all this?"
362 Sakura shook her head and smiled at her friend.
363 "Yeah. I'm really sorry about what I said. You were just
364 trying to do what you thought was right. I just took it too far
365 without understanding. I should have talked to you first."
366 Tomoyo flushed slightly at the remark.
367 "Well . . . it's not like I know everything about this. I'm
368 fairly new to this as well. I don't know much more than you. I
369 wanted to ask but was afraid of peoples reactions."
370 "I know what you mean. So what do we do?"
371 Tomoyo closed her eyes in thought, then spoke.
372 "Keep living, I suppose."
373 Sakura realized that was really all either of them could do.
374 Being discovered may be a problem but that shouldn't affect their
375 relationship. The important thing was that she and Tomoyo were
376 together. She held Tomoyo's hand as she stared down at her
377 newfound lover. No matter what happened from now on, they would
378 face it as friends.
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393 Well, that's the end of my first fanfic. Hope everyone
394 liked reading it as much I liked writing it. Well, the first
395 time anyway. Typing hunched over a keyboard for hours sucks.
396 I'd rather just have a pencil.
397 Any comments, criticitsms, etc. can be made to
398 kaitouace@hotmail.com. With the exception of pointless flames,
399 I'll ALWAYS write back if you like.
400
401 Upcoming stories:
402 Tenchi/Sasami----MY version
403 Chibiusa/Usagi
404
405 Later stuff:
406 Chibiusa/Hotaru
407 Sasami/Misao (Pretty Sammy TV)
408 Second Card Captor Sakura Trilogy (Li and Mei Lin mostly)
409 Utena/Anthy?
410 ChaCha story?
411 Chibiusa/Helios?
412
413 If you're wondering why all these stories have young
414 characters, keep reading.
415 If anyone's still here after the show, I'd like to explain
416 the method to my madness.
417 I'm one of the guys everyone hates. I'm a constant lurker,
418 don't sign any guestbooks (usually), and only expect to find
419 totally free hentai on the net. But besides all that, I think
420 there are certain people who get bad reps. Everywhere I go, even
421 among hentai guys, people who look at fics like these are
422 considered scum or losers at best. Pedophiles at worst . . . or
423 is that the same thing? Anyhow, I don't particularly think
424 that's fair. First of all, good writing is good writing. I'd
425 rather read a good Sasami story than a crappy Ryoko story.
426 That's what I'm trying to do. I'm not much on lots of foul
427 language and dirty slang. Not that I'm putting that down, I just
428 can't write that way. I've been told I'm a bit of a romantic and
429 that shows in most of my writing. What I see a LOT of is bad
430 writing with young characters, which makes it just that much
431 harder for guys like me. I'm trying to write some decent stories
432 with young characters so maybe we can get a LITTLE more respect.
433 I won't name names but some of the stuff is ridiculous enough
434 without it happening to 10 year olds.
435 Which brings me to my next point. I'm trying to be more
436 realistic as well. First times involve pain. Especially if it
437 were to happen then. I want my stories to convey more physical
438 and mental realism. Not EVERY girl in the world who has sex
439 enjoys it or if they do, may feel bad afterwards depending on the
440 situation. I want more realism, plain and simple. Not 8 year
441 olds with older guys up their butts with carrots AND animals in
442 their pussy . . . oops--said too much.
443 Third, I LIKE little girls! Let's face it. The Japanese
444 culture isn't exactly against this type of thinking. In most
445 shows out there, the "little girl" is usually the most likable of
446 the cast and there is always a little overshadowing to the
447 concept of them with the main character or some other guy.
448 Chibi-Usa and Mamoru, Sasami-chan and Tenchi, the list goes on.
449 Just look at the RIDICULOUS amount of Ruri Hoshino merchandise.
450 She's not the ONLY female on Nadesico, you know.
451 Finally, anime age is NOT a fact, it's a suggestion. To be
452 totally honest, ALL anime females look at least 2 years older
453 than their actual age. Sailor Moon starts off at 14. I can
454 BARELY see that. I never bought Sasami being 8 as far as age
455 goes. I have 8 year old cousins that don't look close to
456 whatever age she's supposed to be. Plus the, younger characters
457 are almost ALWAYS the smartest or wisest characters. Look at
458 Sasami and to a lesser extent, Washu. It's like a trap, I tell
459 you!
460 I also look at Sakura Lemon and see what's missing. That
461 also is part of my reason for picking what I do. Card Captor
462 Sakura is that popular and only ONE fic . . . not if I have
463 anything to say about it.
464 But besides all this, just do your own thing. I own TONS of
465 this stuff. Little girls, big girls, mean girls, sweet girls,
466 whatever. I don't put down ANYBODY'S stuff. I have preferences
467 like anyone else but I can read them all . . . well, most of
468 them. The most important thing to remember is: IT'S NOT REAL!
469 It's anime. I dread the thought of anyone reading my fic and
470 molesting an elementary school girl. Let's all just keep it in
471 our pants and agree to disagree. I'll head to that cool Sasami
472 story and you can go to that Sailor Moon being raped by tentacles
473 and killed story. Whatever floats your boat.
474 I'm ALWAYS up for conversation too. Annybody want to talk,
475 my address is kaitouace@hotmail.com. Anyone agree, disagree,
476 want to ask me something, comment on my stories,or anything,
477 please do. I'll ignore flames of course. I get that from my own
478 family. But any actual critism will be commented on. I'm still
479 worried about my writing.
480
481 That's it. Sorry for babbling so long. If you're still
482 here, that is.
483