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1 heyo kidz! here's the second chapter for Lost Feelings! Hope you enjoy it ^^
2 lilika kaijuushoujo
3 http://kawaiisakura.dk3.com
4 monstarrgirl@yahoo.com
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8 vocabulary:
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10 Nani: what
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14 *thought*
15 "dialog"
16 <dream>
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21 LOST FEELINGS Chapter 2 - Confused Future
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23 Tomoyo was doing the same thing she did for all those years of loneliness: cleaning up the old and abandoned bedroom where Sakura used to sleep when they were kids. She cleaned up Sakura's bed thinking of how many times she tried to show the brown-haired girl how much she cared about her. She did everything to make Sakura happy, don't matter how! She helped Sakura and Syaoran to get together, she was so happy to see her love smiling again, but that was also the most painful moment of her life: when Sakura first kissed Syaoran. Tomoyo would give her life to be in his place! But how could she be sp selfish now? She had never been like that before! *Sakura, I hope you're ok..* But she knew she wasn't ok. Tomoyo could feel it.
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27 Sakura: "Kero-chan...I decided to quit it."
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29 Sakura always thought she would feel sad if she said it, but she wasn't. This feeling of tranquillity caught her in surprise.
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31 Kero: "NANIIIIII? you MUST be kidding me, Sakura! Don't you love that brat? Don't you wanna find him anymore?"
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33 Sakura looked at nothing..she found herself in deep thought, took a long breath and smiled.
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35 Sakura: "I don't know how I feel about him anymore."
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37 A tear came down her face.
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39 Kero: "How come you don't know something like that?! You loved him so much! You've been looking for him for such long years! You ignored your family, you ignored your friends...You ignored Tomoyo..."
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41 Sakura: "I know, Kero-chan.."
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43 Sakura and Kero fell asleep.
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45 ...<..voice: "Sakura-chan..You finally realised your true feelings...I'm sorry...I had to leave you...I'm not your true love, I wasn't the right one for you...Now you got to find the one who holds your heart, who really cared about you for all this time...Thank you for thinking of me, I'll never forget you..." She saw a dark-haired girl crying and a very familiar smell came..."Tomoyo-chan.." she said "I miss you so much..What did you really mean behind those words..?">
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47 Sakura wakes up with the phone ringing. The same phone Tomoyo gave her when they were kids. *Ringing again...* she thought. She always felt so good when this phone ringed, it meant everything was ok with Tomoyo. But Sakura never answered it, thinking of how many explanations she'd have to give to her friend. The phone ringed almost every day.
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49 But this time was different. This time she wasn't feeling things were fine. Was that dream a premonition? Is there something happening with Tomoyo? Everything came to her mind in just one second. Sakura caught the phone, easily, nervously...
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51 Sakura: "Mo..moshi moshi...Tomoyo-chan.."
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56 The mirror couldn't describe Tomoyo's colour. She was pale, looking like a ghost. She couldn't say a word.
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59 Sakura: "Tomoyo-chan? Are you there..?"
60 Tomoyo: "H..hai..." Tomoyo's eyes blinked, she couldn't believe this!
61 Sakura: "I'm going back to Tomoeda, Tomoyo-chan..."
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65 END OF CHAPTER 2
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68 eh! that's it for now! thanx for the awesome reviews!! next chapter will be on soon!
69 arigatou gozaimasu!! ^^
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