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1 Ra's Daughters
2 By
3 Black Rose
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5 Chapter Seven
6 The Maidens and the Jackal
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9 There was a flash of flames coming from within the phoenix's
10 wings. The priest had to shield his eyes, as did Neith. When it died
11 down the bird removed this wings and there stood Ramla and Nakia in
12 Egyptian princess dresses with the symbol of Ra on their foreheads,
13 and their eyes glowing white. The looked at one another and then down
14 at what they were wearing.
15 "Wow, Nakia you look great it that," Ramla said walking in front of
16 Nakia and smiling at her. Nakia just blushed at what she said and was
17 taken way by what Ramla was wearing.
18 "You don't look too bad yourself, princess," she replied.
19 Ramla just looked at Nakia's lips and then her eyes and then back to
20 her mouth. Nakia saw this and didn't know what to do: Ramla knew that
21 she would have to make the first move and see were it got her. She
22 got closer to Nakia's lips, bent her head a little and puts her lips
23 on the other girls. Nakia closed her eyes as the princess lips
24 touched hers. She slowly put her arm around the princess' neck. As
25 the two kissed, the power coming from them was so great that it was
26 making shock waves around them and the surrounding area. They,
27 however, couldn't feel anything but each other.
28 Neith was in shock; the power coming from was so great that it was
29 making everything around them shake.
30 "Well, I knew that they would get together in the end, and I have a
31 feeling that Ra knows what he was doing, but lets hope that it's
32 stronger then whatever power that priest has," she thought with a
33 smile.
34 The Priest of Anubis couldn't believe his eyes, the power and love
35 coming from them was getting more powerful as time went by. Then he
36 saw his opening: he took his swords and ran right at them. The
37 princess had her back to him, as he was about to impale her, but then
38 a golden sword blocked it. He tried the other sword but it was
39 blocked by another golden sword.
40 The two girls pulled apart from eachother and smiled. They knew
41 what needed to be done. They threw a shockwave at the Priest: it hit
42 him and knocked him to the ground. They turned and looked at him,
43 then nodded to each other and disappeared. The Priest didn't know
44 what just happened but he know where they would strike, and put this
45 swords on each side of him. The next he saw was two golden swords hit
46 the other swords. He hissed through his teeth and disappeared.
47 Nakia knew that look, and it meant that it was just about to get
48 even harder. She looked over to the princess looking around for him.
49 Ramla looked at her and winked at her, then disappeared as well.
50 Nakia didn't know what that was about, but she soon found out. She
51 felt it, then turned around just in time to see two blades hit, one
52 trying to kill her and the other saving her. She moved back a little
53 and saw them disappear again with looks of anger on their faces.
54 Nakia looked around for them, but they were moving so fast that only
55 the clash of metal on metal allowed her to follow this duel. She
56 closed her eyes and then disappeared herself.
57 Ramla was glad that she got to Nakia in time, but this was getting
58 out of hand; she alone can't take him down. He was stronger then her,
59 and the only thing keeping her alive right now was the fact that she
60 was little bet faster. She knew, however, that she couldn't keep this
61 up for much longer.
62 Then she saw something in the corner of her eye, it was Nakia and
63 she looked ready for anything. The both looked at one another and
64 then knew that this was going to take both of them. The Priest was
65 getting madder by the minute. It was taking everything he had to try
66 and kill them, but it was like taking on Ra him self. He moved into
67 the shadows and tried to attack from behind, but the girls saw right
68 through him. He blocked both golden swords and jumped out of the away
69 of them. He knew he was stronger than them, but they were faster than
70 he was, and with them working as a team it wasn't helping.
71 "There's got to be away to stop them; I have idea, but I will have
72 to wait for the right time," he thought and smiled evilly.
73 He then moved to the right and worked with both of his swords, swung
74 them at the same time, and then moved the ends of the swords and put
75 them together to makes a very long, bow-like weapon.
76 "Now, take this!" he yelled, trying to stab both of them at the same
77 time.
78 The princess just looked on with shock and tried to move out of the
79 way but a part of the weapon hit her arm
80 She screamed: the priest just smiles and moves it in a little
81 deeper. Then out of nowhere a golden blade came down and broke that
82 part of the weapon off. The priest looked up and saw a very angry
83 Nakia.
84 "What did I do something wrong?" he asks sarcastically.
85 Nakia moved over to Ramla very fast. She bent down and removed the
86 piece of weapon from her arm.
87 "Ramla, are you alright?" she asked with a very worried voice.
88 Ramla smiled up at her.
89 "I'll be alright; here take my sword and finish him off," she told
90 Nakia and handed her the sword.
91 Nakia took her sword and turned her head to look at the priest. She
92 then disappeared.
93 Ramla just smiled and looked up, and the Priest looked back at her.
94 "What are you looking at you?" he asked angrily.
95 She doesn't say anything, just kept looking up at him. Her eyes were
96 full of love and hate; the love was for her Nakia, and the hate was
97 for him.
98 He couldn't stand it anymore; those eyes were burning into his soul.
99 Then it hit him; she wasn't looking at him, she was looking at…..
100 He tried to look up but it was too late, he blocked the first sword
101 just as the other one came right through him. His body turned into a
102 mist of some kind and disappeared. Nakia and Ramla just looked on
103 with shock and didn't understand what happened. They then saw the
104 dragon-like phoenix move over to them and start to change back into
105 its usual form. After it was done, the phoenix hopped over to Ramla's
106 lap and healed her arm with its tears, then lies down on her lap and
107 closes its eyes. The storm was lighting up by that time. Nakia walks
108 over to Ramla and sits next to her, not caring that her dress was
109 getting muddy.
110 "Ramla and Ramla's lover, can you hear me?" asked a voice in heir
111 heads.
112 Ramla and Nakia look at one and other, and then close their eyes.
113 "Yes, we can hear you, who is this?" Ramla questioned.
114 "Ramla, I'm Ra's pet, the Phoenix in your lap," it answers. "Now
115 listen to me; that person that we just fought was a shadow of the
116 real person, I don't know why or how he did that, but I wanted you to
117 know that I'm very happy to fight along side you. Also Ra sent word
118 that the real priest won't be showing his face anytime soon, and to
119 take it easy for now."
120 The two looked over to at Ramla's mother and saw her smiling as
121 well. They walked over to her and then back into the house, each
122 wondering what was going to happen to them.
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124 A/N: Thanks for reading and I hope you like it. Sorry that it was so
125 short but I need to get this out of the way. Thanks to everyone whose
126 reviewed so far.
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