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+Card Captor Kakumei (Shoujo-Ai Archive Fanfiction)Card Captor Kakumei
+a Card Captor Sakura fanfiction by Kamui Ikari
+Some points:
+-Both girls are ten years old.
+I WANT FEEDBACK!!! That's all ^_^''
+*****
+Sakura was looking at something in her dresser for Tomoyo. She invited
+her best friend to spend the night with her. Meanwhile Tomoyo was
+making a dress for Sakura, and she was finishing it when Sakura came to
+her.
+"I think this would be good for you Tomoyo-chan" Sakura said as she
+showed Tomoyo the cloth.
+"It's okay Sakura-chan, anything you give me is okay for me," Tomoyo
+said smiling and Sakura blushed.
+Sakura looked at the dress that Tomoyo made for her. It was like a
+princess dress. Sakura smiled at the sight.
+"It's for the school representation, and for me? You think that I will
+win the role of the princess for the representation?" Sakura asked as
+she gave Tomoyo the cloth.
+"Of course. You're beautiful and I'm sure you will win the role,"
+Tomoyo said smiling.
+"Thanks, Tomoyo-chan. You're a great friend" Sakura said smiling.
+Tomoyo smiled at her best friend, but the smile turned into a sad one
+for a short moment.
+"Tomoyo-chan, what's wrong?" Sakura asked worried.
+"No, nothing's wrong. I'm fine," Tomoyo said still smiling.
+Sakura wasn't convinced.
+"Can you wear the dress, Sakura-chan?" Tomoyo asked as she gave Sakura
+the dress.
+"Sure" Sakura said and she put on the dress.
+"Wow!!!! You're so beautiful Sakura-chan!!!" Tomoyo exclaimed excited.
+Sakura blushed at the compliment of her friend.
+"Thanks Tomoyo-chan" Sakura said smiling.
+"You're the most beautiful princess I have ever seen," Tomoyo said
+again with excitement.
+Sakura blushed again.
+"Tomoyo-chan can we go to sleep now? I'm tired and we must get up early
+tomorrow," Sakura said as she changed herself.
+"Sure Sakura-chan" Tomoyo said smiling.
+Both girls crawled into the bed and Sakura was sleeping quickly. Tomoyo
+looked at her with a sad smile and she kissed Sakura's forehead and
+turned around.
+"Aishiteru, Sakura-chan" Tomoyo said as she fell to sleep.
+******
+Sakura was standing in some place, behind her was Tomoyo. Sakura looked
+at her cloth, and it was something like a costume. Something caught
+Sakura's attention; in her breast pocket a white rose was there.
+Suddenly rose petals and something like cards were floating in the air
+surrounding both of them. Sakura looked to Tomoyo, she was wearing a
+red dress that made look her like a princess. Suddenly, she arched her
+back and a baton came out of her chest. Sakura looked surprised but
+when she tried to get the baton the place faded away...
+******
+Sakura woke up and turned to see Tomoyo sleeping quietly. Sakura sighed
+relieved at the sight of her best friend.
+"It was only a dream" Sakura said relaxed.
+"Do you think that?" a voice said.
+Sakura quickly turned to see a person, a man who was wearing Chinese
+clothes and golden glasses, dark long hair and having a smile.
+Sakura was scared as she felt that the man was a spirit and she was
+afraid of ghosts.
+"Don't worry. I'm here because I saw something in you" said the man.
+"Something in me?" Sakura asked quietly trying to not wake Tomoyo.
+"Yes, strength and nobility, a prince's qualities" said the man.
+"I'm not a prince, I'm a girl and I want to become a princess for the
+school's representation" Sakura said.
+"It's true but you can become a prince as well," said the man smiling.
+"Why?" Sakura asked.
+"A prince has a noble task: protect the princesses in disgrace and
+people from disaster" the man said.
+"I don't understand," said Sakura
+"You will understand. With time you will" the man said.
+Sakura was uncertain and the man looked to Tomoyo.
+"She's your friend right?" the man asked.
+"Yes, she's my best friend" Sakura said smiling.
+"She cares about you in a special way" the man said.
+"In a special way?" Sakura asked surprised.
+"Yes, you will find it with time." the man said.
+Sakura looked puzzled.
+"She's the key..." the man said.
+"Eh?" Sakura asked.
+"This girl is special, with time you will find it, she will give you
+the reason you're looking for to become a prince," the man said.
+"Tomoyo-chan will give me the reason?" Sakura asked.
+"Yes" the man said.
+Sakura looked at Tomoyo and then she remembered the dream, she'd seen
+Tomoyo like a princess and then the sight of the baton coming out of
+Tomoyo's chest made Sakura wonder about the dream.
+"The dream was..." Sakura said.
+"It's time and I must go," the man said.
+"Wait... Will I see you again? The dream... Tomoyo-chan is..." Sakura
+said but the man smiled.
+"With time you will find it" the man said.
+"If anything happens to Tomoyo-chan, I won't forgive myself," Sakura
+said.
+The man smiled again and came to Sakura.
+"Will you do anything for her?" the man said.
+"Yes, anything to make her happy," Sakura said.
+"Even if she would suffer from that?" the man asked.
+"I don't want her to suffer... I don't," Sakura said.
+"You have a noble purpose, a noble heart and power," the man said.
+Sakura looked puzzled again.
+"Keep these noble qualities in your heart, in that way we will see
+again," the man said.
+"I will," Sakura said.
+"I will a give you a reminder of this encounter; keep them," the man
+said.
+The man lift his hand, and from nowhere two things appeared. Sakura
+looked at the things, it was a book and something like a card. Both
+things placed on Sakura's hands.
+Sakura looked to the card, it had the image of a woman and a name; "The
+Windy". Then she looked to the book, a lion was incrusted in the front
+and a name was there; "The Clow".
+"These things will lead you to me again," the man said smiling and
+disappeared.
+******
+"Sakura-chan..."
+"Sakura-chan, please wake up. We must go to school," Tomoyo said trying
+to wake her best friend.
+Sakura opened her eyes and looked at Tomoyo, she smiled weakly.
+"It was just a dream..." Sakura said sleepily.
+"Eh?" Tomoyo asked puzzled
+"I had a dream, it was so strange, you looked like a princess..."
+Sakura said and Tomoyo smiled.
+"It's nice but you won't become the princess for the representation if
+we don't go to school on time," Tomoyo said smiling.
+"Sure..." Sakura said smiling and both left the room.
+In the kitchen, Fujitaka and Touya were having breakfast when Sakura
+and Tomoyo sat down.
+"Hi, dad and onii-chan," Sakura said smiling.
+"Hi, Fujitaka-san and Touya-san," Tomoyo said smiling as well.
+"The breakfast is ready" Fujitaka said smiling.
+Sakura and Tomoyo ate the breakfast, and after cleaning the dishes,
+both were ready to go the school.
+"Onii-chan left so soon?" Sakura asked.
+"Yes, he said that will pick up Yukito" Fujitaka told her.
+"Oh, I forgot my book!" Sakura exclaimed as she checked her school bag.
+"And the dress!" Tomoyo exclaimed as well.
+Both went to Sakura's room to find the things, Sakura grabbed the book.
+"Sakura-chan..." Tomoyo said.
+"Yes, Tomoyo-chan?" Sakura asked.
+"What are these things?" Tomoyo asked.
+Sakura looked and froze, over Tomoyo's dress, the book and the card
+were there.
+"Can't be..." Sakura said.
+******
+Well, it's kind of short, but is a prologue of this story. But like we say here.
+"La intencion es lo que cuenta" ^_^
+Matta!!! Until the next one!!!!
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