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+Hey guys,
+this is my first ever fan fic so I'd really appreciate feedback on it.
+It's based on the Angel/Dust manga by Aoi Nanase. It's currently being
+serialised in the Newtype magazine and for indepth information on the
+storyline, plot details, translations and images etc. check out my site at
+http://www.asgard.gen.nz/anime/aoinanase/
+The story is incomplete and I'll post it on the ML each time I complete a
+chapter (if thats cool)
+And here we go... please to be not dissing TOO much ^_^;
+Disclaimer:
+This story is written in a parallel universe to the Angel/Dust story.
+Characters and concepts remain intact but as Angel/Dust is, as yet, incomplete
+(31.03.01) the events within this story may not follow the thread of the actual
+manga.
+This is a yuri fan fic… i.e. love/sex between two females. If you are against
+such goings on, you have been warned. Please do not expect to find gratuitous
+sex scenes; sex is only used within this story as an expression of love.
+Characters, concepts and Angel/Dust are copyright to Aoi Nanase.
+Composed to the sounds of Gatecrasher Wet.
+Chapter 1
+Staring up at the sky Yuina sighed. It was a warm spring evening and the
+darkening sky above already glittered with stars. All around, the city lights
+were coming on and the dull roar of traffic and humanity seemed to be more
+muted. Yuina noticed none of this. Lost in her own world, she slowly trudged
+home. She was not looking forward to a night of sitting in her room, alone.
+Listening to her aunt getting ready to go out, smiling and nodding to whatever
+she said. Not wanting to get in the way.
+She always felt like she was in the way. Soon after her mother died, her father
+had asked his sister to look after his daughter until she graduated from high
+school. Yuina had always felt like she was in the way. Always felt that she was
+causing people problems just by her very existence. Over time, trying to be
+perfect and un-obtrusive had become part of her nature. She went through the
+motions of life in a shell. She had cut herself off so much from life, she no
+longer even sang.
+Yuina used to love singing, and she sang very well indeed. Being able to play
+the piano at an early age, Yuina had developed a strong music talent. It had
+all shattered during middle school. Even though her talent was recognized
+during a try out for the school choir, someone else got the lead role and
+Yuina's confidence has deserted her.
+Walking through a deserted playground Yuina saw a swing and went and sat on it.
+Pushing herself, she gently rocked back and forth, staring up at the sky.
+Little bird, why don't you sing for me?
+There was a slight breeze blowing, and through it Yuina heard the whispered
+words. Frowning she looked around, trying to find the speaker.
+Sing. Please sing for me. Sing so I can be with you!
+Shaking her head Yuina muttered to herself "I'm hearing things."
+There was a soft laughter.
+Sing for me.
+"But I don't sing anymore!" Yuina replied, brushing away a lock of hair that
+had escaped its bindings. Unsure and a little scared she whispered, "I can't
+sing."
+Oh but you can! I've heard you sing Yuina. Sing so beautifully that the heavens
+have wept.
+"You've heard me sing?" Again Yuina frowned. Standing up, she began pacing
+around the playground, trying to find the source of the voice. The breeze had
+picked up and leaves flew across the ground. Yuina's long hair waved out behind
+her, slowly coming loose from the ribbon that that bound it up in a braid.
+Yes I have. Through space and time have I heard you sing. Now please, sing for
+me again.
+Coming to a stop under a cherry tree Yuina gave up looking and shook her head.
+She must be going mad to start hearing voices like this, but, then, she always
+wondered whether she was mad. Nothing made sense in her life. No one wanted her
+and she could never do things right. She must be mad!
+Laughing to herself Yuina said, "Okay, I'll sing."
+There was a soft sigh, whether it was the wind or the cherry tree above
+creaking against the growing force of the wind Yuina did not care. Searching
+for a song to sing, she noticed a cherry blossom floating past her. A song came
+into her mind, and lifting her face up to the sky, she began to sing.
+At first her voice sounded rusty, off key from dis-use; but slowly it grew in
+strength and clarity, musical words spilling from her lips as she sang with
+pure joy about the coming of spring. The renewal of life to a barren, dead
+world. The wind had grown and now blew with enough strength to whip off the
+cherry blossoms from the tree and send them streaming around the singing girl,
+who noticed none of it, too lost in the power of the song. Deep inside, Yuina
+began waking up. The words of the song struck her. "I'm singing! I'm singing
+again!"
+Yes you are Yuina! Thankyou! Thankyou!
+There was a flash of blinding golden light and everything around her turned a
+shade of gold too bright to behold. Then something fell from the sky. A
+feather. Then another feather, and then more feathers until the sky swirled
+with feathers and cherry blossoms. Gasping in delight Yuina stared up, arms
+stretched out and slowly turning. Something large drifted down amongst the
+feathers, and crying out Yuina watched as it fell to the ground near her feet.
+"An angel!"
+What else could it be? Female of form, long legs, slender hips, full bosom and
+the longest pearly hair; the most arresting features were the huge white wings
+attached to the figure. Although, this was a strange angel indeed for it wore
+clothes quite alien to any depiction of an angel Yuina had ever seen before.
+The wind died down and with it the wings disappeared. The ground around them
+was covered with cherry blossoms and feathers; gulping, Yuina slowly approached
+the inert figure, wondering what she was to do.
+She was saved from having to make a choice when a groan came from the figure.
+Slowly the female sat up, wincing and looking around with a slightly dazed
+expression.
+"Where..?" it whispered to itself, and at the same time Yuina haltingly asked
+"Are… are you alright?"
+The female looked at Yuina and then a slow smile formed on her lips. "Yuina!"
+she whispered, the name breathed out with an almost sensual joy. Stepping back
+Yuina replied, "Yes? How do you know me?" The female laughed and carefully
+stood up, brushing off a cherry blossom from her arm. Stepping towards Yuina
+she said "Thankyou for singing for me Yuina."
+Blinking in shock, it slowly registered to Yuina that this female was the
+source of the mysterious voice. "Who… who are you!"
+"I have no name… although… you may call me by my hierarchy code… Seraph," the
+female replied, again taking another step closer to Yuina. Before Yuina could
+say anything Seraph said, "Yuina, I need your help. Will you make contract with
+me?"
+"Contract? What sort of contract?" Yuina felt confused. Dazed by the beauty of
+Seraph and by these strange events. "This contract…" Seraph whispered, and
+before Yuina could do anything, Seraph placed her hands gently onto Yuina's
+shoulders, bent her head, and kissed her.
+Yuina stood still, unable to believe that she was being kissed, and by a female
+no less! She couldn't move though. Couldn't break the kiss or protest in any
+way. She was finding this kiss far too pleasurable. Seraph's full lips were
+soft against hers, caressing her lips. When Yuina felt Seraph's tongue gently
+stroke her bottom lip, she shivered. Seraph broke the kiss then, and all Yuina
+could do was stare up at her beautiful face.
+Stroking Yuina's cheek, Seraph smiled and whispered "We are one now."
+Chapter 2.
+"Miss Akiho? It's time to wake up Miss Akiho," a voice called, and groaning
+Akiho Kudou rolled over and opened her eyes. She saw her maid Okudzume staring
+anxiously down at her. Groaning again Akiho said, "I'm going to sleep some
+more, go away!" There was a silence. "But Miss Akiho, your father wants to see
+you at breakfast."
+Akiho sat up and cursed. "And I shouldn't keep dear daddy waiting should I?"
+Swinging her legs off the bed, Akiho stretched and stared out the huge French
+windows that lined one wall of her spacious bedroom. "Now Miss Akiho, you
+shouldn't speak of your father like that," Okudzume admonished, laying out her
+mistress' new school uniform. "I can talk about my father any way I please.
+It's at least one grace I can allow myself!" Akiho said, bitterly hating how
+much of her life was dictated by her father.
+All her life Akiho had done what her father had told her to do. Never wanting
+to dis-please him in any way. Never wanting to lose his good opinion of her.
+Always wanting to be the best for him. She had even given up her best friend
+for him.
+Akiho could remember the event well enough. It was when she was in middle
+school. Her father had learned of the trials for the lead role in the choir and
+wanted her to get it. He had know that her best friend would be trying out for
+the position and her told her on the day of the trial "Don't let Hatori's
+daughter win Akiho. You are a Kudou so don't let me down!"
+When her best friend had been chosen for the lead role Akiho had been consumed
+with envy. She had complained, saying that she, a Kudou was better! Knowing
+that the school would not go against someone as powerful as her father, she had
+been given the lead role.
+It had been an empty victory.
+"Oh Yuina, I wonder whether you can ever forgive me?" Akiho whispered,
+remembering how at the time she had lorded her victory over her best friend;
+while deep inside hating Yuina. She had known very well that Yuina was far
+better in singing than she could ever be.
+From that point on they had grown apart, and soon after Akiho had been
+transferred to a private boarding school for the rich. Making her way to the
+bathroom ensuite, Akiho wondered whether she would ever be given the chance to
+make up for her mistake.
+An hour later, Akiho bowed to her father as she entered the breakfast room.
+Sitting at the shokutaku, her knees bent beneath her, Akiho let a servant serve
+her with an assortment of raw quail eggs, grilled fish, miso soup and rice.
+"Good morning Akiho, I trust you slept well?" her father asked. "Hai otousan,"
+she murmured, taking up her chopsticks and delicately picking up a piece of
+fish and placing it in her mouth. It tasted delicious, but to Akiho it was
+another reminder of how her father's riches could control all aspects of her
+life.
+"I'm glad. Today is your first day at this new high school and I hope it goes
+well for you." Rustling the papers he was reading, he put them down and looked
+at his daughter. She was a petite creature, resembling her dead mother in
+appearance. A good child most times, he was slightly disappointed that she had
+not been born a male. Unfortunately her mother had died giving birth to her,
+and being too busy to bother with finding another wife, he had given her care
+over to nannies and governesses.
+If she continued to be a dutiful daughter, he would make sure she married well.
+Daughters were good for sealing deals through marriage, if anything.
+Gently patting his mouth with a napkin, he said, "I have a gift for you Akiho."
+The door opened and a woman walked in. Looking at her, Akiho felt very
+self-conscious, the woman was extremely beautiful. Long straight black hair
+reaching just past her knees and a svelte, neatly rounded figure dressed in a
+fashionable suit. She walked to her father's side and bowed, before turning and
+bowing to Akiho. "This, is Sahaku. I've arranged that she becomes your new
+homeroom teacher at the school. Her ultimate task is to make your life easier.
+Please listen to whatever she says."
+You really mean her job is to watch over me and make sure I don't do anything
+that would harm the Kudou name Akiho thought, inwardly shaking with fury.
+Her father then stood. Akiho immediately stood up and bowed. Pleased, he said
+"This is your first day at school. Do well and don't disappoint me."
+Half an hour later, her father's limo rolled to a stopped in front of her new
+school. Waiting for the chauffer to open the door, Akiho stared at the
+sprawling building and the groups of students making their way to classes. This
+was the first time since middle school that she had been to a public school.
+Although she wasn't exactly a snob, she felt she had nothing in common with
+them. Being brought up in the lap of luxury, she had developed an appreciation
+for the finer things in life. Even that didn't stop her from wishing she had
+more friends, but most were intimidated by her father's wealth and standing.
+That was one of the many reasons why she loved having Yuina as a best friend.
+Yuina had looked past the wealth and fame and seen her for who she was; smiling
+to herself she realized that Yuina probably never saw the wealth at all. Yuina
+had been a good friend, and she Akiho, had gone and ruined it all.
+"Life is a constant battle Miss Akiho, those who are ruthless succeed,"
+murmured Sahaku, and with a start Akiho stared at the woman sitting next to her
+in dismay. Sahaku smiled and answered her un-spoken question "Yes, I read
+minds. More specifically, your mind."
+"What? Why… how?" Akiho asked, confused. "We are connected Akiho. Connected in
+a way that can only make the both of us stronger," Sahaku replied, sliding
+closer to her, her skirt riding up her thighs. Reaching out with a slender
+hand, Sahaku stroked Akiho's smooth cheek, black lacquered nails gently
+scratching at each stroke. Held immobile by the rhythmic strokes and the
+mesmerizing glitter in Sahaku's eyes, Akiho could only watch.
+She didn't feel afraid. She felt almost resigned to what was to come. Sahaku,
+for all her subservient exterior, was turning out to be as controlling as her
+father. By the looks of it, she had her father wrapped around her fingers and
+no amount of complaint from Akiho would sway her father from his faith in the
+woman. This realization was enough to make Akiho silently scream inside.
+"Yes connected Akiho. Together we will fulfill both our dreams," Sahaku
+whispered. Capturing Akiho's face in her hands she knelt forward and nipped
+Akiho's ear, before trailing soft kisses across her cheek, and then onto her
+mouth. The kiss was a shock to the senses. Akiho could feel Sahaku inside of
+her, inside her mind, learning everything there was to her. The invasion was
+less disturbing in comparison to the surge of desire that coursed through her
+at Sahaku's kiss!
+She could hear Sahaku's laughter inside her head… no, not Sahaku. This
+creature's name was Lucifer, a being from another world. Come to earth on a
+mission, a mission that she was irrevocably involved in now no matter what.
+"Submit to me Akiho! Become mine and I will give you everything you could
+want!" The pressure, the desire to please, the pleasure of the kiss; it all
+became too much for Akiho. With a groan, she gave way.
+Chapter 3.
+"Seraph no! You can't come to school with me!" Yuina protested for the fourth
+time, stopping and glaring at the woman. Cocking her head to the side slightly
+Seraph said "But we made a contract. Now I have to be with you all the time."
+Yuina groaned, "How am I going to explain your presence to my teachers?" "What
+about your friends?" Seraph asked, and Yuina winced. "I have none." Looking at
+her Seraph smiled and said "Alright. Just remember, if you need me, you must
+invoke my key." Nodding, Yuina quoted it, having learned it by heart thanks to
+Seraph constantly mentioning it. "There, see? I know it. Now go away!" Blowing
+Yuina a kiss and winking, Seraph vanished into thin air.
+Gaping, Yuina made a mental note to tell Seraph that she couldn't just vanish
+like that, especially in public! Smiling at a shocked bystander who had
+witnessed the scene she said, "Oh she does that all the time! She's a magician
+ehe!" before beating a hasty retreat.
+Taking a huge breath of relief, Yuina made her way to her homeroom. Seraph
+really had stuck to her side after that kiss, so much so that she had woken up
+this morning to find Seraph sleeping beside her. That, and the fact that Seraph
+was virtually naked had caused Yuina to almost have a seizure. Blushing at the
+memory, Yuina found her seat at the far corner of the class and sat down.
+Seraph had hit sore point earlier about her lack of friends. After losing her
+best friend in middle school, Yuina had stayed away from her classmates. Kept
+to herself and never participated in any of the school activities. She had
+never minded the lack of friends; but now with Seraph in her life, everything
+seemed so much more different. Suddenly, life seemed worth living again.
+There was a stir, and looking up Yuina saw a beautiful woman enter the class.
+"Hello. My name is Sahaku, I am to be your new homeroom teacher until Ms
+Yamazaki, your old homeroom teacher is discharged from hospital," the woman
+introduced herself. The class greeted her, and smiling she opened the door and
+ushered a girl in. "Let me introduce you to a transfer student. This is Kudou
+Akiho."
+Staring at the new girl, something clicked and with a gasp Yuina cried
+"Aki-chan?" Akiho glanced towards the girl sitting in the far corner, and felt
+her world tilt. "Yuina!" Glancing between the two girls Sahaku softly asked,
+"You know each other?" "Yes! This is Yui-chan. We were best friends at middle
+school. May I sit next to her teacher?" Akiho asked, looking at Sahaku, her
+eyes pleading. Nodding her ascent, Sahaku watched as Akiho tripped over to the
+corner and sat at an empty desk, the two girls soon talking to each other. Eyes
+narrowed, Sahaku called the class to order and began the lessons.
+At lunch break Akiho and Yuina found a quiet spot for themselves in the school
+gardens.
+"Oh Yuina I never imagined I would ever get to see you again!" Akiho smiled
+happily, drinking in the girl's features. Yuina had grown so beautiful. Her
+long pale blond hair reached just past her knees, her pale face dominated by
+her huge violet eyes. As she spoke, Akiho was again entranced by the soft sweet
+quality of her voice. "Do you still sing Yuina?"
+She watched as a slow blush spread across Yuina's cheeks. "Not since recently
+Akiho, but… but I was never as good as you." Akiho smiled to herself; Yuina was
+still the same as ever; willing to let Akiho take credit for things she didn't
+deserve. "No I'm not Yuina. You should have gotten the lead role in the choir."
+Yuina's head shot up, surprised at what Akiho had just said. "It's true Yuina.
+I envied you so much; you were so much better than me. I couldn't handle your
+getting the role so I spoke to the teachers and they gave it to me because of
+who my father is," Akiho sighed, looking away. "I felt so awful once I realized
+how cruel and wrong I had been. I… I've been wanting to say sorry for so long."
+Smiling, Yuina sat next to Akiho and wrapped her arms around her friend and
+hugged her. "Oh Akiho it doesn't matter anymore. I just hope we can be good
+friends again, like before. I've missed you!" Surprised and pleased at the same
+time, Akiho returned the hug and smiled. "I've missed you too Yuina."
+From the shadows of nearby a tree, Lucifer watched, her hand clenched to the
+trunk of the tree, slowly shredding it. Jealousy flooded through her; no one
+could share Akiho's affection with her. They were hers and hers alone. Yuina
+Hatori would bear close watching.

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