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| author | rlm |
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| date | Fri, 19 Feb 2010 06:24:59 -0500 |
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| 1 Untitled | |
| 2 by Shangri-la | |
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| 4 Heyyo people. This is a poem I wrote (as of yet untitled) I was hoping you could respond with who you think the cloud is, the emerald-eyed star is, whose point of view is, and anything or anyone else that may seem to appear. And if anything comes to you maybe even a title. Please reply at Shangri_La6@hotmail.com | |
| 5 Ja ne! | |
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| 7 All I have is tears and loneliness | |
| 8 Frommy spirit was taken away the things of happiness | |
| 9 They say I have but days to live | |
| 10 Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my precious star | |
| 11 And so my reign of rain shall continue | |
| 12 Until to me she is returned | |
| 13 He took her from me and she to he | |
| 14 O precious star glowing as strongly as the sun | |
| 15 Now hidden always by some distant cloud | |
| 16 I pushed in front of you | |
| 17 But to me it is worse for I am no longer shined upon | |
| 18 Sun is gone, moon is gone, so is my presious star | |
| 19 Hidden by a cold cruel cloud | |
| 20 O kind Mistress of the Heavens bonds | |
| 21 I beg smile upon me once again | |
| 22 Can my heart take it any more? | |
| 23 Can my heart take it anymore? | |
| 24 O Heavenly Mistress with emerald green eyes | |
| 25 I beseech, I implore, I who worship you | |
| 26 Break free from behind the cold distant cloud | |
| 27 Shine upon me once more | |
| 28 I tire of this reighn of rain | |
| 29 To hear but a whisper of your words | |
| 30 Would send away this madness | |
| 31 Can my heart truly take it any more? | |
| 32 Can my heart break but once more? | |
| 33 Come to me from your cruel master | |
| 34 Come from behind that cloud | |
| 35 Back to my arms | |
| 36 I am unworthy of such and angel | |
| 37 But he is even more | |
| 38 He who hides you away fromme | |
| 39 Your, friend, Your confidant, Yourlover | |
| 40 But the last you do not know yet | |
| 41 O beloved of the Great Mothers wombs | |
| 42 Come to me from your cruel cloud | |
| 43 I will wait for you on the morrow | |
| 44 If you do not come then | |
| 45 I shall wait each morrow after the next morrow | |
| 46 And so when you come to me | |
| 47 The sorrow will be gone from my heart | |
| 48 And so goes the reign of my rain | |
| 49 Can my heart take that much more? | |
| 50 Can it truly break any more? | |
| 51 ...Yes it can take it much much longer | |
| 52 Yes it can break so many times over | |
| 53 Butonly for you my precious star | |
| 54 My darling precious emerald-eyed star. |