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1 Hi everyone here is the last of the rewriten of my story so I should
2 have chapter five up soom and A new story.
3 Hope veryone has fun readign it.
4
5 The Dark Rainbow Crystals chapter Four
6 by Black Rose
7
8
9 A young woman in about her early teens was looking around the city
10 near the mall. People were laughing with one another; something she
11 wasn't used tool. A swimsuit caught her eyes. She looked at the
12 price. "Man, that is a lot, on will" "My Mistress told me to go
13 outside and have a look around, but this feels wired."
14 A dress cot her eyes in the next window "That looks a lot like
15 the one my aunt has." She walked up to the window; puts her hand on
16 it, and short flashes of what happed to Hotaru ran though her head.
17 She heard screaming coming form the Palace. Everyone stopped and look
18 around and then began on there marry way. "Well, looks like the spell
19 that my Mistress put on the city is working, now to see about that
20 screaming, it sounds like Little Mistress."
21 She sprint into the park, she looks around, closes her eyes, and
22 then her jacket turns into a pair of angelic wings, and takes off.
23
24 In front of the Palaces, Hotaru screamed in pain. There was red
25 smock coming out of her eyes. "What is happing to me?" she though.
26 She could feel the wind blowing past her really fast. She thought
27 that she heard a footstep.
28 "Are you all alright?" asked a voice next to her. Hotaru turned her
29 head she could tell that this person wasn't evil.
30 "Here let me help you," she removed Hotaru's hands from her eyes and
31 put her own on them. Her hands started to shine like the moonlight.
32 "Get your hands off her!" yelled Rini running up to them, with
33 Michelle and Serena right behind her. The young woman just smiled up
34 at them. She toke her hands off of Hotaru and got up and bowed to the
35 Princess, Queen, and Michelle.
36 "Forgive me, I heard a scream, I thought I could help, and it as if
37 I did," she said pointing. Hotaru how was now looking around.
38 Michelle looked on in shock that her daughter was starring up at them.
39 "Mother is that you, I can see you" she said with a single tire
40 running down her face. Her mother just walked up to her and hugged
41 her, the Queen looked on.
42 "My Queen!"
43 The Queen turned around and saw all of the scouts running up too them.
44 Michelle looks up at the young woman that helped her only daughter.
45 "Thank you, who ever you are."
46 "Your welcome" she turns and looks at Rini dead in the eyes. A cold
47 shiver when down Rini's spin "Princess, why weren't you here for
48 her?" she said turning and walking always.
49 In a flash of light her wings were gone, and a blue jacket was in
50 its places. They all just looked on. Rini was in deep though "What
51 was that all about?"
52 Amy walked over to Hotaru and looked over her real fast.
53 "We better get you check out, alright Hotaru?"
54 Hotaru just nodded and walk to the sick hall with her mothers, and
55 Amy. The other just walked back into the Palaces.
56
57 As the young lady neared the gate, she saw something in the
58 shadows, she stopped, and smiled. "You can come out, I knew you're
59 there" emerging from the shadows a man in a tuxedo walks into the
60 light, He smiles at her "Not mean knew when I'm following them," he
61 told her.
62 "What do you want?'
63 "I just wanted to know you name?"
64 She smiled and turned, "You don't have to worry about that, you
65 should be more worry about finding the other six crystals," walking
66 and disappearing into the crowd.
67 The King was in deep thought. "Why do I have this feeling that
68 something bad is going to happen?" with that thought in mind, he
69 turned walked back into the Palaces.
70
71 As the young woman walked, she thought "I think that I better let
72 my Mistress what happen" As she got closer to the hotel she heard
73 someone calling her name. She stopped, looked around and saw two
74 young ladies running up to her.
75 "Little Miss!" she said with shock. As the two stopped in front of
76 her, she smiled at them.
77 "Devika, what are you doing?" asked one of them. A woman with long
78 blond hair with a red bow in it came behind them.
79 "Girls! Why did you take off like that?" she asked in a motherly
80 tone. The two young ladies turned on there high endless and gave her
81 the sad puppy eyes they could muster.
82 "Don't you give me those looks young ladies, you knew better" with a
83 hand on her hip.
84 "But, mother, Sierra knows this lady, it's that right," Diane said
85 looking at her friend for help. Sierra looked up at Devika for help.
86 Devika just smiled and looked at the other woman.
87 "She is right, Princess Venus," "I'm Sierra's care taker, my name is
88 Devika,"
89 "It's nice to meet you; I'm Diane's mother..."
90 "I know"
91 'I have to get these two back to the Palace," The two girls looked
92 up at Devika and smiled, They wanted to stay, and talk to her, but on
93 the other hand Sierra knew that she needed to keep and eye on the
94 Queen and King. Diane glanced to the side and nosiest a dark oar
95 coming from her. Devika also nosiest and knew from living with her
96 most of her life, that she hated the Queen and King. She would do
97 anything to stop them. She put a hand on Sierra's shoulder, and
98 smiled at her.
99 "It's alright, go and have fun while you can"
100 Sierra nodded, toke Diane's hand and toke off to cache up with Venus.
101 "It's about time they meet again," Devika thought walking in the
102 hotel.
103 She shared a room with her Mistress. They were on the third floor,
104 room 334. She opens the door, walks in and closes the door behind her.
105 "I'm back" as she sets her coat down and looks around. She hears
106 water coming from the bathroom. She smiles. "I'm glad that she's
107 alright"
108 The door opens and her Mistress looks right at her.
109 "Back so soon?" she said looking for some socks.
110 "I ran into the scouts, and Hotaru, her side effect from the blood
111 crystal has left"
112 Her Mistress just looks at her and says nothing; she walks over to
113 her bed and sets down. Devika just waits.
114 "Thank you, for the information, oh and thank you for helping her,"
115 "Did anyone see you?"
116 Devika just nodded and went to the bathroom. Gaia just lay down and
117 thought "Six more to go" and went to sleep.
118 In her office Rini was looking at a letter that she just got. "How
119 can this be, who would send this to me now?" she thought as she
120 reread it.
121
122 Moon Princess,
123
124 In this time of great a bliss, I would like to say
125 that by the time you get this letter, I will have already been died
126 along with your mother and father. The way of their death is by you.
127 Can you open your eyes to see what is going on with your best friend
128 or will fight her for the one you love most?
129 Sorry for the bad news, but it's your entire fault.
130 The Queen
131 of the Earth:
132
133 The Neo Queen.
134 Rini dropped the letter and started at it as it landed on the floor.
135 A wave of nausea overtook her as she fell back into her chair. She
136 leaned forward and cupped her head in her hands. "How can…. No…This
137 isn't possible… this isn't…" she mumbled out loud as she covered her
138 eyes as if not to let anyone see her tears. Hastily ripped it from
139 the floor and read it again.
140 "By the time you get this letter. I will have already been died…."
141 The line struck at her like a thousand needles being put in her head
142 one at a time.
143 "Mother, Father, you can't die… you're not dead!" She yelled in her
144 mind. Through misty eyes, she read the rest of the letter. "It's your
145 entire fault." The words repeated over and over in her mind like a
146 broken record.
147 "My fault?" "What is my fault?" "This is not making any sense! She
148 yelled and threw the letter away, knocking her tea across her desk.
149 The vagueness of the letter toyed with her mind and she broke down.
150 As she looked at the mesas on the desk, there was a nock on the door.
151 "Just a minute, she said to who ever were on the other end. She
152 tried to get her office back the way it was. When it was done she
153 told the person to come in. The door open and Diana walked in.
154 "Oh, Hello Diana, what can I do for you?" trying to hide her pain.
155 "Princess, Hotaru would like to see you."
156 "Thank you" she moved to the door when Diana looked at her.
157 "What?"
158 "Momoko and I are going to the mall, what would you like for your
159 wedding present?"
160 Rini just looked at her, and smiled "How about being one of my
161 brides maddens?"
162 Rini noticed her eyes were tearing up; she bent down and hugged her.
163 After that Diana ran to tell Momoko the good news. Rini smiled and
164 walked. As she approached Hotaru's room she could hear two young
165 ladies laughing with one another in Diane's room. She looked into the
166 room and saw the two young ladies having a pillow fight.
167 "There you are Princess," said a woman from be hind her. She turned
168 around to see Hotaru looking at her.
169 "Taru-Chan, I was…."
170 Hotaru just smiled "There is that nick-name again" she thought.
171 She looked into the room to see the girls playing.
172 "Remember, when we used to do that?"
173 "That was a long time, we used to stay up late and talk about
174 everything," Oh by the way, what did you need to see me about, Taru-
175 Chan," She asked looking at her.
176 "Oh, I thought that you would like to talk about your wedding dress,
177 and when we were going to look at some?" Rini was in thought
178 "Why do I keep saying that nick-name," she looked back and their
179 eyes meet. A feeling was coming over then; it felt like they were in
180 a hot shower together just as it come it was gone just as fast
181 because they were hit by a pillow. They turn their heads to the
182 pillow and then into the room. They saw the young ladies laughing.
183 "I think that worked," said someone behind them. They jumped into
184 the room, they like the just saw a ghost, and turned around to see a
185 laughing Mina.
186 "That wasn't funny" Hotaru told her.
187 "Sorry Hotaru, but the look on your faces was priceless,"
188 "Mother?" asked her daughter looking at her.
189 "It's time for bed you two," she told them
190 "Alright, come on Sierra, let's go take a bath" she said taking her
191 hand and ran down the hall and into the bathroom.
192 "Their taking a bath together?" asked Rini looking at the girls
193 running.
194 "Rini, we toke bath together when we were there age, remember?" told
195 Hotaru. Rini face turned red.
196 "I'm going to my room, I'll talk to you guys tomorrow" Rini said
197 walking away.
198 "I'm going to go check on the girls," she told Hotaru and walking to
199 the bathroom. Hotaru just went back to her room.
200 Latter that night Sierra and Diane were sleeping. Sierra opened her
201 eyes. She saw the one thing that she wishes she didn't. There was a
202 fight going on in the air. She looked around to see that she was back
203 at the same spot in happened she saw Diane setting down on the round.
204 She walked up to her. Diane didn't knew were she was or what was
205 going on; all she knew was that her mother wasn't moving.
206 She looked on and saw Sierra yelling at someone. She looks as if she
207 was holding someone.
208 She felt two arms rap around her. She turned her head and saw
209 Sierra's face. She turned back to scan in front of them.
210 "Sierra, what is going on?" "Why are there two of you?" "Why is my
211 mother not moving?" now holding her friend like her life was in her
212 hands.
213 Sierra just looked on head and said nothing, she just embraced her
214 more then ever, she knew what was about to happen.
215 "I'm sorry," was all she could say in a low voice. She put her head
216 down, and pointed at something. Diane looked at what she was pointing
217 at. A woman in a black suit with a little pink in it was looking
218 right at the other Sierra with an evil smile, and shot something at
219 her, then out of knew were a young lady in her teen's steps in and
220 shields the other Sierra from the blast. Her eyes got large as a
221 baseball.
222 "That woman that shielded the other Sierra is…is…m...e...e." she
223 thought. In the time that she thought that, the young women hit the
224 ground and stop moving. The other Sierra was crying and tried to get
225 the other woman to wake up, but it was too late. She screamed
226 "NOOOOOOOO…..."
227 At the same time they both sat up in bed screaming. Out of knew were
228 the Queen and Mina ran into the room, trying to see what happen and
229 see if they were alright. They took the girls into their arms, and
230 tried to clam the down.
231 "What happened?" asked Diana walking into the room with Rini and
232 Hotaru behind her.
233 "It's alright, they just had a nightmare," said the Queen looking
234 back to Sierra how was in her arms.
235 "Alright then, I'm going back to bed then," said Rini. Diana looking
236 at the young ladies ones more and walked back to her room. Hotaru
237 just looked on and thought.
238 "I knew what happen, I saw it too,"
239 "That is right, some how Diane died by saving Sierra's life, and
240 that Diane looked older," said Sailor Saturn.
241 "Saturn, I think here is more going on here then just those crystals,"
242 "I think your right; we need to look out for them," The feeling pf
243 pain came over her, the heart of seeing someone die like that, is not
244 right. As she looked on a person in the great hall was looking in and
245 smiling at what was happing and walked away.