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rlm@2 1 Author's Notes:
rlm@2 2
rlm@2 3 This is the final chapter to my fanfic "Chibiusa no PYUA na
rlm@2 4 kokoro." You may think this a bit strange, though, because I'm only 2/3
rlm@2 5 finished chapter 3 and I haven't even started chapter 4. ^^;; So I
rlm@2 6 guess this can be thought of as sort of a spoiler in that respect.
rlm@2 7
rlm@2 8 For those of you that haven't read the other chapters, that's
rlm@2 9 okay. You'll have no trouble at all understanding this. But I'll give
rlm@2 10 you a few general details, just so you know what I'm talking about.
rlm@2 11
rlm@2 12 This story takes place near the end of the 30th century, and stars
rlm@2 13 Chibiusa and Hotaru. However, since this is the future, and they have
rlm@2 14 become adults, they refer to each other with their real names (Serenity
rlm@2 15 and Saturn, respectively). I've stuck with manga continuity while
rlm@2 16 writing this story (with a little creative license, of course ^_-).
rlm@2 17
rlm@2 18 I guess I should put the "warning" here now. This is a lemon
rlm@2 19 fanfic. It fairly graphically depicts two woman who love each other
rlm@2 20 having sex (yay!). So, if you have problems with that sort of thing,
rlm@2 21 leave now yadda yadda yadda. :) (In case you're wondering, the other
rlm@2 22 parts of my fanfic aren't lemons.)
rlm@2 23
rlm@2 24 I'd like to thank the Amazoness Duo who gave me the motivation to
rlm@2 25 finally *write* something. ^^;; Check out their stories; they're pretty
rlm@2 26 good. ^_^
rlm@2 27
rlm@2 28 On with the fanfic!
rlm@2 29
rlm@2 30 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
rlm@2 31 Chibiusa no PYUA na kokoro
rlm@2 32 (Chibiusa's Pure Heart)
rlm@2 33 Part 5 (Epilogue)
rlm@2 34 By Andrea Doolan <ajhd@king.igs.net>
rlm@2 35 "Sailormoon no ichiban daifan"
rlm@2 36 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
rlm@2 37
rlm@2 38 ~*~*~*~*~
rlm@2 39
rlm@2 40 The door to the bedroom closed with a click. The lights in the
rlm@2 41 room were dim, which cast long shadows over everything. There was a
rlm@2 42 figure lying on the bed dosing peacefully. She stirred when she heard
rlm@2 43 light footsteps cross the floor to the bed.
rlm@2 44
rlm@2 45 "Mmm...did she finally go to sleep?" asked the sleepy figure.
rlm@2 46
rlm@2 47 "Yes, but it took five lullabies and a good amount of cradling.
rlm@2 48 Little Usagi-chan is almost too genki. But it's easy to see where she
rlm@2 49 got that from."
rlm@2 50
rlm@2 51 The other woman laughed. "I suppose I used to be quite energetic.
rlm@2 52 But I don't think this old body is up to it anymore."
rlm@2 53
rlm@2 54 "Oh, I don't know. I think you have a lot of energy left in you."
rlm@2 55 She had an evil grin on her face, and shifted her body so she was
rlm@2 56 directly over the other woman.
rlm@2 57
rlm@2 58 "Is that a challenge? If so, then I accept." She lifted her head
rlm@2 59 to meet the other woman's lips. The two stayed like this for some time,
rlm@2 60 just savouring the taste of each other.
rlm@2 61
rlm@2 62 "Looks like you proved me right," she said with a smile on her
rlm@2 63 face. "You're always one to meet a challenge, Serenity."
rlm@2 64
rlm@2 65 "Saturn, I have a feeling you like making the challenges," said
rlm@2 66 Serenity with an equally bright smile.
rlm@2 67
rlm@2 68 "Oops, guess I've been found out. Well, then why don't I make
rlm@2 69 another one? Let's try not to wake poor Usagi-chan tonight. She really
rlm@2 70 hasn't been getting enough sleep lately..."
rlm@2 71
rlm@2 72 "Sou ne. It's hard enough getting her to sleep. She doesn't need
rlm@2 73 us, um, upsetting her."
rlm@2 74
rlm@2 75 Saturn giggled. "But that doesn't mean we still can't have fun!"
rlm@2 76 With that she went back to kissing Serenity deeply. Their tongues met
rlm@2 77 and duelled, each trying to explore every part of their partner's mouth.
rlm@2 78 While this was going on, Saturn took the initiative, and started to
rlm@2 79 unbutton Serenity's white night-gown. There were four buttons at the
rlm@2 80 front of the garment. Saturn took her time unfastening each one. She
rlm@2 81 drew gentle circles over the cloth of the night-gown, careful to touch
rlm@2 82 Serenity in just the right places.
rlm@2 83
rlm@2 84 Once the buttons were done, she removed the straps from Serenity's
rlm@2 85 shoulders, and pushed the top part down over her breasts. From her
rlm@2 86 position she got a wonderful view of two erect nipples on top of two
rlm@2 87 fairly large mounds. Her hands went to work right away kneading the
rlm@2 88 flesh. Serenity moaned into Saturn's mouth, practically begging for
rlm@2 89 more. Saturn responded by gently rubbing and pinching the nipples.
rlm@2 90 This produced more moans from Serenity, who then decided to take a less
rlm@2 91 passive role in the night's affairs.
rlm@2 92
rlm@2 93 Serenity surprised Saturn by shifting position, making Saturn role
rlm@2 94 under her. Serenity kicked off the remainder of her gown, and smiled
rlm@2 95 down at Saturn. She decided that the casual clothes Saturn had been
rlm@2 96 wearing just wouldn't do. Without a break in rhythm, she pulled off
rlm@2 97 Saturn's shirt over her head, and slid off her pants. Her eyes lit up
rlm@2 98 in excitement. Saturn was wearing her black lace bra! She *loved* that
rlm@2 99 black lace bra! Serenity's hands cupped Saturn's breasts, while her
rlm@2 100 thumbs worked the nipples. After Saturn seemed sufficiently aroused,
rlm@2 101 Serenity reached for the clasp, and undid the lovely bra. At this point
rlm@2 102 Serenity stopped kissing Saturn, and instead started sucking on her
rlm@2 103 erect nipples. Saturn threw her head back in delight, but remembered
rlm@2 104 only to moan lightly, as to not wake Usagi-chan.
rlm@2 105
rlm@2 106 Serenity could feel a growing heat rising inside her, and she
rlm@2 107 could feel one emanating from Saturn as well. She rubbed her thigh
rlm@2 108 against Saturn's panties, and could feel the intense wetness. Saturn
rlm@2 109 raised her hips to meet Serenity's thigh. It seemed something else was
rlm@2 110 now in need of Serenity's attention. She took one final suck on the
rlm@2 111 left breast, and repositioned herself between Saturn's legs. She could
rlm@2 112 smell the wonderful sweet scent already. She made short work of the
rlm@2 113 drenched panties, and dove in. She was careful to lick around the labia
rlm@2 114 first before attacking the clitoris. Saturn's clit was red and
rlm@2 115 throbbing. Serenity soft, supple tongue was just what it craved.
rlm@2 116 Saturn couldn't help it. She started to let out quick moans of pleasure
rlm@2 117 in response. She could feel her vagina becoming tight, and she spread
rlm@2 118 her legs even further to increase the feeling. She was close to orgasm,
rlm@2 119 but wasn't at the edge yet. She loved this part the best. This was the
rlm@2 120 moment when she wished all time would stop, and she could just stay
rlm@2 121 there forever. It was almost like she was experiencing a moment of Zen;
rlm@2 122 a moment where she seemed almost to lose consciousness, and was only
rlm@2 123 aware of the intense feelings of pleasure given to her by the woman she
rlm@2 124 loved. That moment, however, was unfortunately brief, as it always is.
rlm@2 125 She realised she was going to orgasm, and spread her legs as far as they
rlm@2 126 could go. After the fifth or sixth spasm, Serenity brought the pace
rlm@2 127 down to a slow lick, and eventually stopped.
rlm@2 128
rlm@2 129 "You, my dear, are amazing," said Saturn between breaths.
rlm@2 130
rlm@2 131 "No, you're the amazing one." Serenity got up from her position
rlm@2 132 and was again over top of Saturn. She kissed her again, unintentionally
rlm@2 133 smearing love juices on Saturn's face.
rlm@2 134
rlm@2 135 Saturn brushed a long pink pigtail out of her line of sight. "I
rlm@2 136 guess it's someone else's turn now, ne?" she asked with a smile.
rlm@2 137
rlm@2 138 Serenity smiled back, and obligingly got on her back. Saturn used
rlm@2 139 her two index fingers to trace lines down Serenity's body. She started
rlm@2 140 at the shoulders, and ran circles around her breasts and naval. When
rlm@2 141 she got to the top of Serenity's panties, she paused, hooked the
rlm@2 142 material around her fingers, and slowly pulled them off. Saturn enjoyed
rlm@2 143 seeing Serenity squirm under her loving touch. She always took her time
rlm@2 144 when making love.
rlm@2 145
rlm@2 146 Using her fingers, Saturn parted Serenity's labia. She could see
rlm@2 147 the welcome sight of shimmering juices underneath. She began to rub the
rlm@2 148 labia, alternating between them and tracing around the entrance to
rlm@2 149 Serenity's vagina. After a little while of this, Saturn pushed one
rlm@2 150 finger into the entrance, and began pumping. Serenity matched her speed
rlm@2 151 and rhythm. Then Saturn added another finger, and then a third, each
rlm@2 152 time increasing the speed.
rlm@2 153
rlm@2 154 "Uhh, please Saturn....uhh! Please massage my clit....please!!"
rlm@2 155
rlm@2 156 Serenity's request seemed urgent, and Saturn wasn't about to
rlm@2 157 disappoint her lover. With her other hand she found the throbbing clit,
rlm@2 158 and began to rub it between her fingers. Serenity's love juices served
rlm@2 159 as a handy lubricant, and greatly increased the pleasure she was
rlm@2 160 feeling. Serenity's hips bucked almost wildly now, seeking the climax
rlm@2 161 she so desperately needed.
rlm@2 162
rlm@2 163 Just a few more thrusts, she thought. Ahh! There, Saturn, there!
rlm@2 164 That's the spot! Oh, yes, please, yes!
rlm@2 165
rlm@2 166 Serenity felt as if her brain had just exploded, and everything
rlm@2 167 was crashing down around her. Her thrusts slowly decreased, and Saturn
rlm@2 168 eventually drew her hand out. She got up and lied down beside the pink-
rlm@2 169 haired girl, holding her tightly.
rlm@2 170
rlm@2 171 After several minutes of heavy breathing, Saturn spoke. "Well, I
rlm@2 172 guess we managed not to wake Usagi-chan up."
rlm@2 173
rlm@2 174 "See," said Serenity, "I always win a challenge. Though if she
rlm@2 175 did wake up, I'm sure she'd be calling 'kaa-chan' anyway."
rlm@2 176
rlm@2 177 "Oh no," laughed Saturn, "I got up last time. I'm *positive*
rlm@2 178 she'd be calling 'mama'."
rlm@2 179
rlm@2 180 The two laughed a little more. "Saturn," said Serenity seriously,
rlm@2 181 "aishiteru yo. Watashi-tachi no ai wa eien da ne."
rlm@2 182
rlm@2 183 "Watashi mo. Anata wa watashi no taisetsu na hito desu.
rlm@2 184 Aishiteru eien ni."
rlm@2 185
rlm@2 186 Sleep claimed the two lovers, and brought them many, many happy
rlm@2 187 dreams.
rlm@2 188
rlm@2 189 OWARI
rlm@2 190
rlm@2 191 ~*~*~*~*~
rlm@2 192
rlm@2 193 Well, I hope you enjoyed the story. ^_^ I suppose I should
rlm@2 194 translate the last few lines of dialogue, in case you have no idea what
rlm@2 195 was said. ^^;;
rlm@2 196
rlm@2 197 Serenity: Saturn, I love you. Our love is eternal.
rlm@2 198 Saturn: Me too. You are my special person. I'll love you forever.
rlm@2 199
rlm@2 200 If you're interested in reading the first two parts of this story
rlm@2 201 (which are non-lemon, sorry ^^), just send me an email and I'll point
rlm@2 202 you in the right direction. ^_^
rlm@2 203
rlm@2 204 Music I was listening to while writing this: Memorial Song Box
rlm@2 205 Disc 3 (songs like I am Sailormoon, Route Venus, Sailorteam no Theme, Ai
rlm@2 206 no Senshi, etc).
rlm@2 207
rlm@2 208 Completed: May 13th 1999.
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rlm@2 210