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rlm@2 3 Standard disclaimer:
rlm@2 4 See parts I and II for the disclaimer. You can probably recite
rlm@2 5 these things by heart now, anyway.
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rlm@2 8 Sakura Lemon--Part III
rlm@2 9 KaitouAce
rlm@2 10
rlm@2 11 Tomoyo muttered pathetically as she lay in her bed. She had
rlm@2 12 destroyed the most important thing she could ever have: her
rlm@2 13 friendship with Sakura. Everything was a haze to Tomoyo, her
rlm@2 14 vision clouded by pain and tears. Her head pounded, her heart
rlm@2 15 ached . . . it was as if Sakura's rejection had made her
rlm@2 16 physically ill. All she could hear was Sakura's anger-filled
rlm@2 17 voice. And the more she heard it, the sicker she became. All
rlm@2 18 she wanted was for the anguish to end. Sadly, she could only
rlm@2 19 come to one conclusion. There was only one definite way to stop
rlm@2 20 the pain. The very idea terrified her but Sakura's coldness was
rlm@2 21 worse. She stood up, tears pouring down her face, and prepared
rlm@2 22 for the end. But as she reached the door, something stopped her.
rlm@2 23 As much as she knew she didn't deserve it, she couldn't bear to
rlm@2 24 leave this world without seeing Sakura's smile once more. And as
rlm@2 25 she thought about Sakura, she couldn't help but remember their
rlm@2 26 last, fabulous evening together. She desperately shook the image
rlm@2 27 out of her mind. She wouldn't do that. She had no right. Not
rlm@2 28 after what she did to Sakura. But her body was in too much need.
rlm@2 29 She couldn't resist the urge of one final moment of ecstacy.
rlm@2 30 Tomoyo slowly turned toward her viewing room, disgusted with
rlm@2 31 herself for not being able to give Sakura the respect she
rlm@2 32 deserved. As she headed inside she slowly began to disrobe. She
rlm@2 33 took a final breath and began to descend the slope of the
rlm@2 34 theater-like room. To her, it felt as if she was entering her
rlm@2 35 own Dante's Inferno with the trail of clothes the only symbol of
rlm@2 36 her existence and her only lifeline from eternal damnation.
rlm@2 37
rlm@2 38
rlm@2 39 Sakura sat in her room silently. She couldn't believe what
rlm@2 40 she had done. Tomoyo was gone. But it had to be. Tomoyo had
rlm@2 41 hurt her in a way no one had ever hurt her before. She deserved
rlm@2 42 it. But that didn't make it any less painful. She felt her eyes
rlm@2 43 well up again as she fell deeper into sadness.
rlm@2 44 "Sakura."
rlm@2 45 Sakura jumped when she heard her name. She turned, trying
rlm@2 46 to wipe the tears out of her eyes.
rlm@2 47 "Sakura, are you all right?"
rlm@2 48 She was surprised to see Kero-chan hovering in front of her
rlm@2 49 with a look of concern on his face. Sakura quickly tried to come
rlm@2 50 up with a story to hide her shame.
rlm@2 51 "Oh! Kero-chan! I'm fine! Just . . . something in my
rlm@2 52 eyes."
rlm@2 53 Kero-chan sighed and stared at her intently.
rlm@2 54 "No need to lie Sakura. I know what happened. I was there,
rlm@2 55 remember?"
rlm@2 56 Sakura gasped as she barely recalled when Kero-chan flew to
rlm@2 57 her that night before Touya came in. It didn't occur to her that
rlm@2 58 he had overheard the whole thing. Sakura started to cry again.
rlm@2 59 "Kero-chan, I'm sorry! I didn't mean to do it! I . . . "
rlm@2 60 "It's ok, Sakura. Don't apologize. But I did see Tomoyo
rlm@2 61 run out of here. She looked really upset. What happened?"
rlm@2 62 Sakura stuttered, unsure of what to say. But her silence
rlm@2 63 confirmed Kero-chan's suspicions. " . . . It was her, wasn't
rlm@2 64 it?"
rlm@2 65 Sakura's mouth was agape as her shameful secret was
rlm@2 66 revealed. She desperately tried to defend herself.
rlm@2 67 "It wasn't me! It was Tomoyo-chan who did this to me! I
rlm@2 68 can't help it anymore! Please let me stay a Card Captor!"
rlm@2 69 Kero-chan became more than a little agitated at Sakura's
rlm@2 70 words.
rlm@2 71 "Be quiet, Sakura!"
rlm@2 72 Sakura was shocked at Kero-chan's tone and prepared herself
rlm@2 73 for the worst.
rlm@2 74 "You are and will always be a Card Captor. Nothing can
rlm@2 75 change your destiny. Your personal feelings and affiliations are
rlm@2 76 irrevelant. If you weren't worthy, you wouldn't have been able
rlm@2 77 to open the book. But what MIGHT change you is if you continue
rlm@2 78 to blame your friend for your mistake."
rlm@2 79 Sakura sat quietly, absorbing Kero-chan's words. Surely
rlm@2 80 that wasn' t right. All that pain she went through, all that
rlm@2 81 suffering . . . Tomoyo was the cause. She was the one who made
rlm@2 82 her feel . . . Sakura froze. As strange a situation as this was,
rlm@2 83 all Tomoyo did was make her feel good. Really good. The pain
rlm@2 84 came later . . . when Sakura tried to do things herself. But
rlm@2 85 Sakura was still confused.
rlm@2 86 "It was Tomoyo-chan who made me feel like this. I couldn't
rlm@2 87 stop myself . . . myself?"
rlm@2 88 The word shook her completely. Myself. She couldn't
rlm@2 89 control HERSELF. Tomoyo wasn't to blame for that. And she
rlm@2 90 didn't know Sakura had hurt herself so the later pain wasn't
rlm@2 91 really her fault either. She should have just told Tomoyo
rlm@2 92 outright. Then she would have understood. Tomoyo was just
rlm@2 93 trying to help. She began to feel relieved when her harsh words
rlm@2 94 came to mind. Sakura visibly jumped as she realized what she
rlm@2 95 had done.
rlm@2 96 "Oh no! Kero-chan, I've done a horrible thing! What do I
rlm@2 97 do?!"
rlm@2 98 Sakura became frantic at the thought of not being friends
rlm@2 99 with Tomoyo anymore. Once again, Kero-chan provided a simple
rlm@2 100 answer.
rlm@2 101 "Apologize."
rlm@2 102 "But . . . but how? After what I said . . . "
rlm@2 103 Kero-chan thought a bit, then came up with a way. The only
rlm@2 104 way really, given the situation. He blushed slightly as he said
rlm@2 105 it.
rlm@2 106 " . . . Anyway you have to."
rlm@2 107 Sakura realized what Kero-chan was suggesting and it
rlm@2 108 embarrassed her. She questioned her friend.
rlm@2 109 "Is--is that ok?"
rlm@2 110 "Only you know the answer to that."
rlm@2 111 Sakura slowly smiled and jumped from the bed. She quickly
rlm@2 112 dressed and raced out of the house, determined to save her
rlm@2 113 friendship in any way possible.
rlm@2 114
rlm@2 115
rlm@2 116 "Tomoyo-chan . . . please."
rlm@2 117 "Eh? Please what, Sakura-chan?"
rlm@2 118 "Please . . . touch me."
rlm@2 119 Tomoyo sat back in a seat, completely nude rubbing herself
rlm@2 120 frantically while staring at the screen.
rlm@2 121 One day.
rlm@2 122 It had only been one day ago when they were
rlm@2 123 inseparable. Now they were through and all Tomoyo had were
rlm@2 124 videos. Tomoyo moaned as she orgasmed once again, the seat's
rlm@2 125 cushion now completely soaked. Small drips occassionally fell
rlm@2 126 from the oversaturated fabric to the floor. She had come more
rlm@2 127 times in the past hour than she had her entire young life. Her
rlm@2 128 virgin lips were swollen and red. Everytime she touched herself,
rlm@2 129 she caused herself pain. But she didn't care. Her suffering
rlm@2 130 paled in comparison to what Sakura must have felt. Any pain was
rlm@2 131 well deserved. She cried desperately to the screen.
rlm@2 132 "Oh Sakura-chan! What did I do?! Please tell me!!!"
rlm@2 133 But all that replied was just more evidence of her guilt as
rlm@2 134 she sank back in her seat, gingerly touching herself once again.
rlm@2 135
rlm@2 136 After being let in, Sakura rushed upstairs to Tomoyo's room.
rlm@2 137 Her mind was agonizing over what to say and do. Should she just
rlm@2 138 apologize? What if Tomoyo didn't accept? And what about
rlm@2 139 Kero-chan's suggestion? Should she actually go through with
rlm@2 140 that? Fortunately for Sakura, she stopped thinking long enough
rlm@2 141 to avoid running into Tomoyo's door. She knocked but found the
rlm@2 142 door already open. She slowly stepped inside, ready to
rlm@2 143 apologize. She quietly called for Tomoyo but she didn't appear
rlm@2 144 to be inside. Sakura closed the door behind her. After
rlm@2 145 searching for a minute, Sakura sat on Tomoyo's bed confused. She
rlm@2 146 knew Tomoyo's room was large but it wasn't THAT large. Sakura
rlm@2 147 began to whimper, wanting to clear things up as soon as possible.
rlm@2 148 "Tomoyo-chan, where ARE you?"
rlm@2 149 Just then, Sakura noticed Tomoyo's school shirt on the
rlm@2 150 floor. She went to it and saw the skirt a little farther away.
rlm@2 151 They made a trail toward . . .
rlm@2 152 "Her movie room! I almost forgot! She must be in there."
rlm@2 153 Sakura was relieved that she had found her friend. But
rlm@2 154 nothing could have prepared her for the scene she saw when she
rlm@2 155 entered.
rlm@2 156
rlm@2 157 Tomoyo was completely lost as she exhausted her mind and
rlm@2 158 body. She was totally immersed in a fantasy world. A world
rlm@2 159 where she and Sakura were best friends and even lovers. She
rlm@2 160 didn't remember anything she was planning on doing or care if
rlm@2 161 anyone found her. All that mattered was the smiles on the two
rlm@2 162 girls faces on the screen. Just as she was forcing another
rlm@2 163 orgasm, a giant shadow loomed over the screen. Tomoyo was
rlm@2 164 relieved. Someone had finally found her. Now her punishment
rlm@2 165 would be complete. With luck, they'd yell at her, maybe even
rlm@2 166 beat her. And if that wasn't enough, she could always . . .
rlm@2 167 "Tomoyo-chan . . . "
rlm@2 168 Tomoyo's head whirled around at the sound of the timid
rlm@2 169 voice. As ready as she was for any kind of punishment, Tomoyo
rlm@2 170 couldn't handle Sakura. She sat motionless in her seat waiting
rlm@2 171 for Sakura to approach. But Sakura was frozen in place. She
rlm@2 172 couldn't believe what she was seeing. Her eyes were wide as
rlm@2 173 saucers as she watched the events of the previous evening play
rlm@2 174 out literally larger than life. The clothing she had followed to
rlm@2 175 find Tomoyo had slowly filtered out of her arms and bundled up
rlm@2 176 near her feet. She didn't even notice the door close behind her.
rlm@2 177 She just stared . . . and felt another powerful explosion
rlm@2 178 building. Tomoyo tried to rush to Sakura and explain but her now
rlm@2 179 sore body protested such quick movements. She slowly moved up to
rlm@2 180 Sakura with tears in her eyes and juices running down her leg.
rlm@2 181 "Sakura . . . I . . . please listen."
rlm@2 182 But Sakura wasn't. Tomoyo's words faded as she stared at
rlm@2 183 the screen. But what Sakura was seeing wasn't sex but love, pure
rlm@2 184 and unconditional. As wonderful as the feelings in her body were
rlm@2 185 then, they were overshadowed by the feelings in her heart.
rlm@2 186 Tomoyo had gone so far just to please her, and she repaid her
rlm@2 187 with anger and deceit. Sakura felt terrible at what she had
rlm@2 188 driven her friend to. Her best friend who was . . .
rlm@2 189 Sakura's vision now focused on the beautiful young girl
rlm@2 190 before her. Her large, now reddish eyes, her long black hair,
rlm@2 191 pout lips, and pert breasts. Sakura stared at Tomoyo and came to
rlm@2 192 a final decision. The choice she needed and wanted.
rlm@2 193 " . . . so please just . . . Sakura-chan?"
rlm@2 194 Tomoyo stopped talking when she noticed Sakura's eyes on
rlm@2 195 her. She knew she was naked but Sakura's intense stare
rlm@2 196 embarrassed her. She started to reach for the clothing Sakura
rlm@2 197 dropped on the floor but Sakura gingerly pushed her back. Tomoyo
rlm@2 198 was surprised and a little angry. She may have been at fault but
rlm@2 199 she didn't need her shame to be prolonged any longer. She just
rlm@2 200 needed her final punishment. She looked sternly at Sakura but
rlm@2 201 received no reaction. It was almost as if she were in a trance.
rlm@2 202 Tomoyo started to question Sakura but was stopped short as Sakura
rlm@2 203 quickly closed the distance between them.
rlm@2 204 "Sakura-chan?"
rlm@2 205 But Sakura continued to invade Tomoyo's personal space until
rlm@2 206 her entire body was touching Tomoyo, her clothing brushing
rlm@2 207 lightly against Tomoyo's nude form. Sakura slowly moved her head
rlm@2 208 to Tomoyo's ear and whispered, breaking her silence.
rlm@2 209 "You won't need those."
rlm@2 210 Tomoyo was shocked by Sakura's remark as she staggered back
rlm@2 211 a bit, almost tumbling over. She tried to compose herself but
rlm@2 212 Sakura was once again upon her, her eyes piercing Tomoyo's soul.
rlm@2 213 Sakura slowly took both her hands and held Tomoyo's head,
rlm@2 214 caressing her face and cheeks softly. Tomoyo was terribly
rlm@2 215 confused and desperately in need of an answer to this situation.
rlm@2 216 But before she could ask, Sakura answered her without question as
rlm@2 217 she quickly darted forward and kissed Tomoyo strongly.
rlm@2 218 Unprepared, Tomoyo managed to break free and catch her breath.
rlm@2 219 She finally managed to ask her question.
rlm@2 220 "S-Sakura-chan? What are you doing? What--what do you
rlm@2 221 want?"
rlm@2 222 Sakura thought about all that had happened to the two of
rlm@2 223 them over the past 24 hours and about the apology she wanted to
rlm@2 224 give. But at this moment, all that was secondary. She answered
rlm@2 225 Tomoyo with the last word she would say until it was over.
rlm@2 226 "You."
rlm@2 227 Tomoyo immediately understood and was overjoyed. By some
rlm@2 228 miracle, she had been forgiven. She was about to run into
rlm@2 229 Sakura's arms but before she knew it she was already there,
rlm@2 230 Sakura closing the gap herself. She stared once again into
rlm@2 231 Sakura's eyes which were loudly speaking her intentions. She
rlm@2 232 slowly moved her head forward as Sakura did the same. The two
rlm@2 233 met in a beautiful display of passion. After a moment, Tomoyo
rlm@2 234 once again reluctantly broke their kiss. She tugged Sakura
rlm@2 235 slightly, urging her back to her room. However, Sakura didn't
rlm@2 236 budge. She just looked at Tomoyo with the same wild eyes as
rlm@2 237 before.
rlm@2 238 "Let's go back to my room, Sakura-chan."
rlm@2 239 But Sakura answered Tomoyo by lightly carressing her small
rlm@2 240 breasts, pinching her right nipple.
rlm@2 241 "Ahh! Sakura-chan? I . . . ohh . . . ! We can't! Not
rlm@2 242 in . . . mmmmm!"
rlm@2 243 Tomoyo ceased her objection as she was silenced by another
rlm@2 244 kiss from Sakura. Whatever she had planned, it would take place
rlm@2 245 right then and there. Tomoyo grudgingly agreed and began to lift
rlm@2 246 Sakura's shirt off her body. But before she could, Sakura
rlm@2 247 grabbed Tomoyo's wrists and hauled her shirt back down.
rlm@2 248 "S . . . Sakura-chan?"
rlm@2 249 Sakura was determined to pay Tomoyo back for her friendship.
rlm@2 250 Prolonging Tomoyo's wait with her own wants would just be in the
rlm@2 251 way. Sakura felt responsible for Tomoyo's sadness and was
rlm@2 252 planning on giving her something she'd remember her entire life.
rlm@2 253 Sakura wasn't concerned about herself. This was Tomoyo's time.
rlm@2 254 Sakura wrapped her left arm around Tomoyo and proceeded to kiss
rlm@2 255 her neck, smiling as she heard her friend coo softly. She then
rlm@2 256 caressed the inside of Tomoyo's thigh, getting her hand sticky
rlm@2 257 with Tomoyo's juices. Sakura brought her hand up to her mouth
rlm@2 258 and tasted it, much to Tomoyo's surprise.
rlm@2 259 She stared as she watched Sakura's tongue slowly twist and
rlm@2 260 squirm around her fingers, tasting Tomoyo with a look of hunger.
rlm@2 261 Tomoyo started getting excited at this display as she felt a new
rlm@2 262 trail slowly trickle down her leg. Noticing this, Sakura smiled
rlm@2 263 and started to rub Tomoyo's thin slit directly. But Tomoyo's
rlm@2 264 previous self-abuse proved to be too harsh as she winced at the
rlm@2 265 slight pain. Sakura saw her expression and knew what was wrong.
rlm@2 266 She recalled the pain well. Sakura closed her eyes in
rlm@2 267 contemplation. Tomoyo looked at her in confusion and a bit of
rlm@2 268 sadness as well, feeling that she was hindering Sakura from even
rlm@2 269 giving her pleasure. But after a moment, Sakura opened her eyes
rlm@2 270 and smiled. Tomoyo was confused but soon didn't care as Sakura
rlm@2 271 slowly licked her throat. Her tongue traveled down to Tomoyo's
rlm@2 272 left breast where she began to lick and suck at Tomoyo's erect
rlm@2 273 nipple. Tomoyo squealed in delight as she grasped Sakura's head,
rlm@2 274 holding it to her chest. But much to her dismay, Sakura soon
rlm@2 275 stopped this action and stared into her eyes. Sakura then
rlm@2 276 enveloped Tomoyo in her arms and slowly slinked her way around
rlm@2 277 her body. Tomoyo closed her eyes and purred at the feeling of
rlm@2 278 the soft cloth rubbing against her body. But she didn't notice
rlm@2 279 Sakura snake her way down her body until she was on her knees.
rlm@2 280 Sakura smiled at the sight before her and began to lightly trace
rlm@2 281 a fingernail along Tomoyo's inner thigh. Tomoyo opened her eyes
rlm@2 282 and was surprised to not see Sakura. Suddenly she felt something
rlm@2 283 warm and damp on her leg. She looked down in shock as Sakura was
rlm@2 284 slowly slurping up the many trails of juice along her legs. She
rlm@2 285 stared timidly as Sakura's increasingly messy face followed the
rlm@2 286 tiny rivers of passion, eventually reaching their source.
rlm@2 287 Sakura stared at Tomoyo's flower, shining faintly in the
rlm@2 288 semi-dark room. She approached it cautiously, inhaling the aroma
rlm@2 289 her frend was giving off. Tomoyo was fairly frightened, knees
rlm@2 290 visibly shaking as she awaited the inevitable contact. Sakura
rlm@2 291 pressed her face into Tomoyo's crotch, nuzzling her nether region
rlm@2 292 while making herself even more messy. Tomoyo caught moans under
rlm@2 293 her breath as she slowly began to rock her hips, pushing herself
rlm@2 294 into her friend. Sakura rubbed her face and cheeks into Tomoyo's
rlm@2 295 crotch, feeling her friend's warmth as it spread across her face.
rlm@2 296 She pulled away slowly, watching as a few sticky strands
rlm@2 297 stretched from her face to Tomoyo before lightly breaking in the
rlm@2 298 air. Sakura looked lovingly at Tomoyo's pussy, lips slightly
rlm@2 299 swollen from before. Sakura raised her hands to it, parting it
rlm@2 300 slightly with both thumbs. She looked at the sensitive organ and
rlm@2 301 blew on it gently. Tomoyo squealed at the cold intrusion.
rlm@2 302 Sakura then lightly kissed it, pecking it in various places.
rlm@2 303 Tomoyo was more than ready for Sakura to start but she continued
rlm@2 304 toying with her. Tomoyo began whimpering awaiting release and
rlm@2 305 Sakura smiled inwardly, remembering how Tomoyo made her
rlm@2 306 practically beg for contact before. She felt Tomoyo push the
rlm@2 307 back of her head with her hands and decided not to make her wait
rlm@2 308 any longer. Sakura slowly extended her tongue and laid it at the
rlm@2 309 bottom of Tomoyo's pussy. She wiggled it briefly making Tomoyo
rlm@2 310 squirm before making one broad stroke from the bottom of Tomoyo's
rlm@2 311 slit to the top.
rlm@2 312 " . . . OOOOOOHHHH!!!!!"
rlm@2 313 With that sound, Sakura began licking at Tomoyo in earnest.
rlm@2 314 Tomoyo shuddered with passion as she drove Sakura's head into her
rlm@2 315 crotch, trying to increase her pleasure as much as possible. For
rlm@2 316 her, this was like a dream come true. There was nothing but
rlm@2 317 them. She ran her fingers through Sakura's hair as she bucked
rlm@2 318 her hips into Sakura's face. Sakura's head was swimming with the
rlm@2 319 aroma of her friend. She increased her licking at a frenzied
rlm@2 320 pace. She was caught in a cycle. The faster she went, the
rlm@2 321 stronger the aroma and the stronger the smell, the faster she
rlm@2 322 went. Sakura thrust her tongue deep into Tomoyo, causing her
rlm@2 323 legs to buckle and body to shake. Sakura had noticed a small nub
rlm@2 324 at the upper part of Tomoyo's slit that was barely visible.
rlm@2 325 Whenever she touched it, Tomoyo's pleasure seemed to increase.
rlm@2 326 She began focusing on that area and Tomoyo grabbed Sakura's head
rlm@2 327 with both hands, confirming her discovery. Tomoyo began flowing
rlm@2 328 stronger than before and Sakura savored every drop. Tomoyo began
rlm@2 329 panting and moaning at a increasing pace and Sakura knew she was
rlm@2 330 ready. Sakura's hands slowly moved up Tomoyo's legs until they
rlm@2 331 reached her rear. Sakura rubbed it softly with both hands
rlm@2 332 causing more squirming from Tomoyo. Suddenly, without warning,
rlm@2 333 Sakura gripped Tomoyo firmly, forcing her hips into her face.
rlm@2 334 Using this leverage, Sakura thrust her tongue as far inside
rlm@2 335 Tomoyo as possible while sucking her lower lips as hard as she
rlm@2 336 could.
rlm@2 337 Tomoyo froze, feeling the soft intruder penetrate farther
rlm@2 338 than she thought possible. There was a moment of silence as
rlm@2 339 Sakura held Tomoyo in place. Then Tomoyo exploded in a literal
rlm@2 340 flood of ecstasy, soaking Sakura's cute face as she yelled for
rlm@2 341 her friend at the top of her lungs.
rlm@2 342
rlm@2 343
rlm@2 344 Tomoyo awoke in her room. It took a second to remember what
rlm@2 345 happened. She tried to move but her body refused, too exhausted
rlm@2 346 to comply. She stared outward but didn't see Sakura. She tried
rlm@2 347 to look around but was still too weak. Wondering how she reached
rlm@2 348 her bed, she suddenly had a terrible thought. Maybe it was all
rlm@2 349 just a hallucination. A final grasp at redemption. She called
rlm@2 350 for Sakura, her voice shaking and becoming frantic.
rlm@2 351 "Sakura-chan . . . Sakura-chan! Where are you?!
rlm@2 352 Sakura . . . "
rlm@2 353 "I'm here."
rlm@2 354 Tomoyo forced herself to jerk around to see Sakura sitting
rlm@2 355 slightly behind her.
rlm@2 356 "Sakura-chan."
rlm@2 357 Tomoyo was obviously relieved as she fell backwards, her
rlm@2 358 head resting in Sakura's lap. Sakura proceeded to run her
rlm@2 359 fingers through Tomoyo's hair.
rlm@2 360 "Sakura-chan . . . that was wonderful. But . . . are you
rlm@2 361 okay with all this?"
rlm@2 362 Sakura shook her head and smiled at her friend.
rlm@2 363 "Yeah. I'm really sorry about what I said. You were just
rlm@2 364 trying to do what you thought was right. I just took it too far
rlm@2 365 without understanding. I should have talked to you first."
rlm@2 366 Tomoyo flushed slightly at the remark.
rlm@2 367 "Well . . . it's not like I know everything about this. I'm
rlm@2 368 fairly new to this as well. I don't know much more than you. I
rlm@2 369 wanted to ask but was afraid of peoples reactions."
rlm@2 370 "I know what you mean. So what do we do?"
rlm@2 371 Tomoyo closed her eyes in thought, then spoke.
rlm@2 372 "Keep living, I suppose."
rlm@2 373 Sakura realized that was really all either of them could do.
rlm@2 374 Being discovered may be a problem but that shouldn't affect their
rlm@2 375 relationship. The important thing was that she and Tomoyo were
rlm@2 376 together. She held Tomoyo's hand as she stared down at her
rlm@2 377 newfound lover. No matter what happened from now on, they would
rlm@2 378 face it as friends.
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rlm@2 392
rlm@2 393 Well, that's the end of my first fanfic. Hope everyone
rlm@2 394 liked reading it as much I liked writing it. Well, the first
rlm@2 395 time anyway. Typing hunched over a keyboard for hours sucks.
rlm@2 396 I'd rather just have a pencil.
rlm@2 397 Any comments, criticitsms, etc. can be made to
rlm@2 398 kaitouace@hotmail.com. With the exception of pointless flames,
rlm@2 399 I'll ALWAYS write back if you like.
rlm@2 400
rlm@2 401 Upcoming stories:
rlm@2 402 Tenchi/Sasami----MY version
rlm@2 403 Chibiusa/Usagi
rlm@2 404
rlm@2 405 Later stuff:
rlm@2 406 Chibiusa/Hotaru
rlm@2 407 Sasami/Misao (Pretty Sammy TV)
rlm@2 408 Second Card Captor Sakura Trilogy (Li and Mei Lin mostly)
rlm@2 409 Utena/Anthy?
rlm@2 410 ChaCha story?
rlm@2 411 Chibiusa/Helios?
rlm@2 412
rlm@2 413 If you're wondering why all these stories have young
rlm@2 414 characters, keep reading.
rlm@2 415 If anyone's still here after the show, I'd like to explain
rlm@2 416 the method to my madness.
rlm@2 417 I'm one of the guys everyone hates. I'm a constant lurker,
rlm@2 418 don't sign any guestbooks (usually), and only expect to find
rlm@2 419 totally free hentai on the net. But besides all that, I think
rlm@2 420 there are certain people who get bad reps. Everywhere I go, even
rlm@2 421 among hentai guys, people who look at fics like these are
rlm@2 422 considered scum or losers at best. Pedophiles at worst . . . or
rlm@2 423 is that the same thing? Anyhow, I don't particularly think
rlm@2 424 that's fair. First of all, good writing is good writing. I'd
rlm@2 425 rather read a good Sasami story than a crappy Ryoko story.
rlm@2 426 That's what I'm trying to do. I'm not much on lots of foul
rlm@2 427 language and dirty slang. Not that I'm putting that down, I just
rlm@2 428 can't write that way. I've been told I'm a bit of a romantic and
rlm@2 429 that shows in most of my writing. What I see a LOT of is bad
rlm@2 430 writing with young characters, which makes it just that much
rlm@2 431 harder for guys like me. I'm trying to write some decent stories
rlm@2 432 with young characters so maybe we can get a LITTLE more respect.
rlm@2 433 I won't name names but some of the stuff is ridiculous enough
rlm@2 434 without it happening to 10 year olds.
rlm@2 435 Which brings me to my next point. I'm trying to be more
rlm@2 436 realistic as well. First times involve pain. Especially if it
rlm@2 437 were to happen then. I want my stories to convey more physical
rlm@2 438 and mental realism. Not EVERY girl in the world who has sex
rlm@2 439 enjoys it or if they do, may feel bad afterwards depending on the
rlm@2 440 situation. I want more realism, plain and simple. Not 8 year
rlm@2 441 olds with older guys up their butts with carrots AND animals in
rlm@2 442 their pussy . . . oops--said too much.
rlm@2 443 Third, I LIKE little girls! Let's face it. The Japanese
rlm@2 444 culture isn't exactly against this type of thinking. In most
rlm@2 445 shows out there, the "little girl" is usually the most likable of
rlm@2 446 the cast and there is always a little overshadowing to the
rlm@2 447 concept of them with the main character or some other guy.
rlm@2 448 Chibi-Usa and Mamoru, Sasami-chan and Tenchi, the list goes on.
rlm@2 449 Just look at the RIDICULOUS amount of Ruri Hoshino merchandise.
rlm@2 450 She's not the ONLY female on Nadesico, you know.
rlm@2 451 Finally, anime age is NOT a fact, it's a suggestion. To be
rlm@2 452 totally honest, ALL anime females look at least 2 years older
rlm@2 453 than their actual age. Sailor Moon starts off at 14. I can
rlm@2 454 BARELY see that. I never bought Sasami being 8 as far as age
rlm@2 455 goes. I have 8 year old cousins that don't look close to
rlm@2 456 whatever age she's supposed to be. Plus the, younger characters
rlm@2 457 are almost ALWAYS the smartest or wisest characters. Look at
rlm@2 458 Sasami and to a lesser extent, Washu. It's like a trap, I tell
rlm@2 459 you!
rlm@2 460 I also look at Sakura Lemon and see what's missing. That
rlm@2 461 also is part of my reason for picking what I do. Card Captor
rlm@2 462 Sakura is that popular and only ONE fic . . . not if I have
rlm@2 463 anything to say about it.
rlm@2 464 But besides all this, just do your own thing. I own TONS of
rlm@2 465 this stuff. Little girls, big girls, mean girls, sweet girls,
rlm@2 466 whatever. I don't put down ANYBODY'S stuff. I have preferences
rlm@2 467 like anyone else but I can read them all . . . well, most of
rlm@2 468 them. The most important thing to remember is: IT'S NOT REAL!
rlm@2 469 It's anime. I dread the thought of anyone reading my fic and
rlm@2 470 molesting an elementary school girl. Let's all just keep it in
rlm@2 471 our pants and agree to disagree. I'll head to that cool Sasami
rlm@2 472 story and you can go to that Sailor Moon being raped by tentacles
rlm@2 473 and killed story. Whatever floats your boat.
rlm@2 474 I'm ALWAYS up for conversation too. Annybody want to talk,
rlm@2 475 my address is kaitouace@hotmail.com. Anyone agree, disagree,
rlm@2 476 want to ask me something, comment on my stories,or anything,
rlm@2 477 please do. I'll ignore flames of course. I get that from my own
rlm@2 478 family. But any actual critism will be commented on. I'm still
rlm@2 479 worried about my writing.
rlm@2 480
rlm@2 481 That's it. Sorry for babbling so long. If you're still
rlm@2 482 here, that is.
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