# HG changeset patch
# User Robert McIntyre <rlm@mit.edu>
# Date 1329220343 25200
# Node ID d487348c461cf7287e8dfc24240852ef111e3d8b
# Parent  2fdcbe8185b1a2c30fcece3697f8b629f8f3ec70
minor wording fixes to movement.org

diff -r 2fdcbe8185b1 -r d487348c461c org/movement.org
--- a/org/movement.org	Tue Feb 14 04:35:40 2012 -0700
+++ b/org/movement.org	Tue Feb 14 04:52:23 2012 -0700
@@ -28,23 +28,23 @@
 called the motor pool. The brain essentially says "activate 30% of the
 motor pool" and the spinal cord recruits motor neurons untill 30% are
 activated. Since the distribution of power among motor neurons is
-unequal and recruitment goes from weakest to strongest, 30% of the
-motor pool might be 5% of the strength of the muscle.
+unequal and recruitment goes from weakest to strongest, the first 30%
+of the motor pool might be 5% of the strength of the muscle.
 
 My simulated muscles follow a similiar design: Each muscle is defined
-by a 1-D array of numbers (the "motor pool"). Each number represents a
-motor neuron which controlls a number of sarcomeres equal to the
-number. A muscle also has a scalar :strength factor which determines
-the total force the muscle can exert when all motor neurons are
-activated.  The effector function for a muscle takes a number to index
-into the motor pool, and that number "activates" all the motor neurons
-whose index is lower or equal to the number.  Each motor-neuron will
-apply force in proportion to its value in the array.  Lower values
-cause less force.  The lower values can be put at the "beginning" of
-the 1-D array to simulate the layout of actual human muscles, which
-are capable of more percise movements when exerting less force. Or,
-the motor pool can simulate more exoitic recruitment strageties which
-do not correspond to human muscles. 
+by a 1-D array of numbers (the "motor pool"). Each entry in the array
+represents a motor neuron which controlls a number of sarcomeres equal
+to the value of the entry. A muscle also has a scalar :strength factor
+which determines the total force the muscle can exert when all motor
+neurons are activated.  The effector function for a muscle takes a
+number to index into the motor pool, and that number "activates" all
+the motor neurons whose index is lower or equal to the number.  Each
+motor-neuron will apply force in proportion to its value in the array.
+Lower values cause less force.  The lower values can be put at the
+"beginning" of the 1-D array to simulate the layout of actual human
+muscles, which are capable of more percise movements when exerting
+less force. Or, the motor pool can simulate more exoitic recruitment
+strageties which do not correspond to human muscles.
 
 This 1D array is defined in an image file for ease of
 creation/visualization. Here is an example muscle profile image.